FEEDBACK: Clinic Test

[Fappy_hands]

I’m Just learning to use Eos and made a little tease to test some things out and get a feel for it. If there are any suggestions or things that I could improve, please do let me know. I have a few ideas, but want to get the basics down before I move on to them.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=65158

[timpu713]

I really enjoyed your writing style here, the only reason it wasn't a five star tease for me was because it didn't keep going! I would love to see what you have in mind for the rest of this tease <3

[Fappy_hands]

Thanks, I really appreciate that.