[RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] GoonZone

[OhXXXyes]

Hello,

I've just released one of my very first teases. I haven't been active on the forum either.
So, I'm not entirely sure whether this is the way to start a discussion about it.

Goonzone is my version of the Fapioh game that has been around since forever.
I've decided to make my own version as the original creator isn't adding to the game.
But mostly to combine the awesome features of the EOS editor with the Fapioh-concept.

I'm not programmer, I'm not an editor and I'm not a native English speaker.
So I'll hope you'll forgive my spaghetti-code, my low-skill photo edits and my TYPO's/ grammar-issues.
I did however spend a ton of time on this. Therefor, I'd love your feedback.
This is by no means a finished product, I just won't be able to work on it for a while.

I'll come back to this project and fix bugs, typo's and images.
I also want to add more features, mainly:
Make a working demo, to explain the game to those who haven't played Fapioh before.
Add the "extreme" cards/orders to the game
Create generic cards that influence the game. (Ex. "Your next 3 cards will be skipped")
Create combo cards, combining 2 or more different themes.
Add cards that create tokens and such
Add bosses, my original idea was to end the session with a boss. (as there are no "cum" cards)
I've "edited" the images for 10 bosses already. Over the last couple of months I just haven't been able to finish the dialogue and the themes.
These bosses would be unlocked during the tease by completing x amount of cards, by skipping a set amount, by reaching a point total, by completing certain cards or a combination of ones or just completely at random.
The final thing I want to add eventually are a bunch of secret cards/orders and hidden menu's.

Unfortunately, the images are not as high quality on the tease-viewer as I would have hoped. If anyone knows how to fix that, that would be great.

All pornstars featured in this tease will only appear ones, except for upgrade cards, bosses and combo cards.
You won't encounter the same card twice, they get removed from the game as you skip or complete them.

Besides your feedback, comment what girls you'd like to see added to the game. (Pornstars only)
Some of your favorites could also be one of the bosses. Click below if you want to see those.

Spoiler: show

Adrian Maya
Ariel Rebel
Blake Blossom
Dillion Harper
Gina Valentina
Kiera Winters
Remy Lacroix
Riley Jensen
Sara Luvv
Tanner Mayes

[state_of_arousal]

The chastity cards all seem to not only lock up the cock, but lock up the tease as well.

Tested with Jerking and Chastity cards as well as only Chastity cards enabled. Freezes if you select "done" or "skip".

[OhXXXyes]

I'll have to look into it.
But, I believe this is sort of by design. I'll explain;

I 'coded' it in a way where normally, while you're in chastity, you're not able to receive Jerking or Chastity orders.
(With a few exceptions, depending on the chastity order)
And because of that, with only those two categories enabled, it is impossible to generate another card.
Thus, the game ends (rather abrupt)

This problem fixes itself when selecting more categories. Or when I eventually add generic cards.

A warning message before entering the goonzone, when you only have those two categories enabled sounds like a really good idea though.

Thank you ^^

[tioafa4]

In addition to a warning, it might make sense to have something where it kicks you back to the start (with an explanation) if there are no viable cards left to choose.

[Elnorcando]

How does all the things in the cards mean. I cant find info.