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Hey I just published a tease and I am interested to hear your opinion on it and whether there are people interested in seeing some more parts maybe. Here you can find my tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... acd4de68dd
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Very good. I like cum denial teases. I also like she NOT a "porn star" with implants, makup, goofy clothing etc...
I would love another tease. Could be with her, or maybe she invites a girlfriend over to help her. I love petite, small breasted teasers.
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I do have quite some models to chose from but i dont know if and when i will get the chance and energy to do another tease, there wasnt too much feedback atm
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I promise I'll hit you up with some feedback once I get the chance. I'm "Predisposed" at the moment, but I LOVE the premise and not knowing the length.
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Tury wrote: Fri Apr 21, 2023 11:04 am I promise I'll hit you up with some feedback once I get the chance. I'm "Predisposed" at the moment, but I LOVE the premise and not knowing the length.
No pressure, what do you mean with not knowing the length? The length of the tease or of the denial period?
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SomeWhatEdgy wrote: Mon Apr 24, 2023 3:54 pm
Tury wrote: Fri Apr 21, 2023 11:04 am I promise I'll hit you up with some feedback once I get the chance. I'm "Predisposed" at the moment, but I LOVE the premise and not knowing the length.
No pressure, what do you mean with not knowing the length? The length of the tease or of the denial period?
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Tury wrote: Fri Apr 28, 2023 12:39 pm Yes
Ah I see, I mean the length of the tease is prettymuch as long as I can go without repeating myself all the time i mean who wants to stop edging to a girl like this while being teased and denied but the length of denial is pretty much infinite, maybe there could be an option to chose sort of a dificulty so it maybe is customizable but the ultimate premise of the tease is that you dont want to cum because it enhances her orgasm sooooo maybe no cumming at all ;)
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SomeWhatEdgy wrote: Sat Apr 15, 2023 10:48 pm Hey I just published a tease and I am interested to hear your opinion on it and whether there are people interested in seeing some more parts maybe. Here you can find my tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... acd4de68dd
I saw this back when you first posted but hadn't had a chance to try it out until now.

Overall I really enjoyed this and would love to see more of the series.
I certainly wouldn't want the denial to be "pretty much infinite", but I also like not knowing exactly when I will be allowed to cum or ruin. Some sort of difficulty level we could choose would be ideal.

Like anonymister said I really liked the choice of model too. A more average girl suits me just fine.

One comment on the implementation:
There were quite a few dialog bits where it should have progressed automatically but you had to click through the prompts. Those should be timed/auto so it advances more naturally. Having it advance automatically helps make it feel more like she is in control, but if I can just sit there and stroke as long as I want then I'm still kind of in control. Know what I mean?

Thanks, and hope to see more!

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PlayfulGuy wrote: Sun Apr 30, 2023 7:57 pm
SomeWhatEdgy wrote: Sat Apr 15, 2023 10:48 pm Hey I just published a tease and I am interested to hear your opinion on it and whether there are people interested in seeing some more parts maybe. Here you can find my tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... acd4de68dd
I saw this back when you first posted but hadn't had a chance to try it out until now.

Overall I really enjoyed this and would love to see more of the series.
I certainly wouldn't want the denial to be "pretty much infinite", but I also like not knowing exactly when I will be allowed to cum or ruin. Some sort of difficulty level we could choose would be ideal.

Like anonymister said I really liked the choice of model too. A more average girl suits me just fine.

One comment on the implementation:
There were quite a few dialog bits where it should have progressed automatically but you had to click through the prompts. Those should be timed/auto so it advances more naturally. Having it advance automatically helps make it feel more like she is in control, but if I can just sit there and stroke as long as I want then I'm still kind of in control. Know what I mean?

Thanks, and hope to see more!

PG

Thanks for the feedback, yeah i know what you mean, its just an oversight on my side since i just rushed the tease in one single day so i didnt really take that much time to finetune the timings and stuff
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Well, day 1 was absolutely flawless. Seductive, simple, fun, and ominous. Seems I managed to bookmark it before it was unlisted and so I can still do Day 1. It was to my surprise that there was no more than that. Shame, because I gave it 5 stars. You've got some real talent and I'd love to see anything at all more from you.
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Tury wrote: Tue May 30, 2023 1:07 pm Well, day 1 was absolutely flawless. Seductive, simple, fun, and ominous. Seems I managed to bookmark it before it was unlisted and so I can still do Day 1. It was to my surprise that there was no more than that. Shame, because I gave it 5 stars. You've got some real talent and I'd love to see anything at all more from you.
Oh man thanks for the generous feedback, yeah i just hid it from the main site, but with the link provided at the top of this post you should be able to load it up. Whenever i get some time I might be adding a few more days or weeks of denial ;)
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