[FEEDBACK] Artificial Alyssia: The Beginning

[bennygrimm]

Here's a link to my latest tease, entitled "Artificial Alyssia: The Beginning."

This is part one of a reasonably short series (hoping for 2 parts total, might need three, could be as many as four, but that's way unlikely).

Really hope you enjoy it, here's the description (from the tease):

After a humiliating breakup, you find out you've won the "Compandroid" lottery amd you've been accepted as an early beta tester. Your AI is perfect, until you get a little too trusting with her.

This tease is for fans of:
Scifi, Chastity, Female Domination, Doll-fetish, Slut-training, Female-training, Women following orders, roleplay gone wrong, cuckolding (light, may get harder over time), forced cum eating, foot fetish, Robots, "the future," tease and denial, orgasm denial, edging, coercion, POV teases.

Would love to hear what you think, Milovana! Thanks in advance!

[AceofSpades]

Enjoyed it thoroughly and cant wait for the next chapter.

[thebiologicalclock]

Loving the story so far, though I have to admit I really hope it ends out well for the main character. Have you considered having multiple endings, a good and bad ending? If not, guess I'll be as helpless as the main character, hoping all goes well :)

[pepez]

holy sh.. it was nice story!! I dont usually like cuckold theme or teases /stories, but in this story it was cool :)

and everything else was awesome, cant wait for more :)

5/5

[qatguy]

i liked this tease and handcuffs, but i prefer an EOS tease, so i cant go back or forward in the tease. the tease has control, not me.

[someone43]

Shut up and take my money!!! I want one

[Trusfrated]

Bravo!

This is certainly one of the best story-based teases I've ever encountered on Milovana. I usually prefer interactive stories more akin to flash or eos teases, but this was exquisite and well written. Reminded me of an old cactusman tease.

Can't wait for more!

[manfried]

One of the best teases in a long time. Thanks for your efforts, and please keep going.

[MichaelBae]

Just WOW!

This is one of if not the best teases I've had the pleasure of reading in recent memory. I am on the EDGE of my seat waiting for the next chapter to come out. I really enjoyed the standard story based tease I can read at my own pace compared to the EOS or flash teases. I like the option of going back a page or two to re-read something I liked a lot rather than having to restart the whole tease from the beginning.

Looking forward for what's to come!

[SkyeyesStef]

Anyway, the tease story is very good!
It deserves an EOS conversion someday. The pacing on the long text pages can be made in a way to enhance the experience. Guess someone in the Milovana comunity could create a masterpiece over this masterpiece working side by side with benny!

[Darigaaz]

Anyway, the tease story is very good!
It deserves an EOS conversion someday. The pacing on the long text pages can be made in a way to enhance the experience. Guess someone in the Milovana comunity could create a masterpiece over this masterpiece working side by side with benny!

Stop giving me ideas!

[jockpseudonym]

Fucking incredible, can’t wait to see where it goes. How soon do you think until the next chapter?

[Sisyphuster]

This is incredible! Loved the coercion, and what great writing. Thank you!