[RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Saved Loads Universal Technologies

[figroll]

A new tease for all you filthy cum eaters out there.

Feedback encouraged. Lots of scope for expansion if people like this.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=51424

Shout out to JohnP23 whose tease provided inspiration.

[LexiTV]

I really liked this tease... the concept is awesome.

But i am a bit confused... the concept of a milking machine is nice and all but I don't see how this can be done in real life.
Even if you get one expensive sex toy, it's hard to actually use it to save the load you just extracted.

Also in some parts it is just assumed that you have a condom filled with cum?

I would ask for some more clarifications and if possible instructions on how to actually cum (in front of the monitor, not the person in the tease).

Please keep it up, I think this has huge potential...

You could also branch into more routes which feature light hypno themes and bi themes.
The player is already established as a Beta... Would make it even more interesting if the dommes who help you during the extraction are intentioanally mean and try to turn you gay/bi.

[figroll]

Hi and thanks for the feedback.

The tease is really about the CEI conundrum of wanting to do it until you actually cum and then really not wanting to do it at all. The classic way around this of saving a load (or loads!). That is, the withdrawal parts are meant to be played with an actual saved load.

The rest is really just for explaining, flavour text and hopefully getting turned on thinking about CEI fantasies. So the milking machine is not to be taken literally and just adds to the idea of automated cum extraction for later consumption.

Maybe it's a bit too oblique? Although I like to not have too much explicit instruction as I find avoiding breaking the 4th wall makes for a much more immersive tease.

Thanks again for taking the the time to play and provide feedback.

[CumScream]

I agree that I was initially confused about how interactive this tease is meant to be, or if it was just story.

You have to get past the intro & first deposit to understand how the tease will handle the Saved Loads.

Constructive bit;

Spoiler: show

Suggest at least modest cum instruction at the point of deposit, or an indication how to treat the 'machine' earlier on in the tease.

Also, Saved Loads assumed a condom was used each time, but this wasn't mentioned earlier.

When I finally did understand, I really liked this tease though, and look forward to seeing more in the 'under construction' sections.

Good work

[figroll]

Thanks for the feedback guys.

I have amended the text slightly in a few places to hopefully make the idea clearer without giving away too much.

[Dawn_of_Dark]

Great writing. The tease does satisfy the fantasy really well. I was a bit confused by the "milking machine" part like other comments here but I figured it just means fap away.

I like hands-free parts of the teases. However, I feel like some of the other parts are a bit too tedious, since it is not possible to click and skip ahead. If this could be amended the tease would be excellent.

I do also wonder about the "aromatics" part. I confess I have no idea about what that means and I'm a little bit intrigued. Could you perhaps share some knowledge on it for me (maybe in spoilers, for other viewers' consideration)?

[ostermanblue2]

Thanks for the feedback guys.

I have amended the text slightly in a few places to hopefully make the idea clearer without giving away too much.

I really love this tease so far. I actually played through the save part and read the instructional part of the withdrawal, just so I could make clear to myself how to play the game. Now that I've done so I'm going to come back to it later with the intention of actually playing, and doing some real deposits and withdrawals. Things I really liked about this tease so far:

• Tongue in cheek, humorous presentation

• Providing enough context to build a story but also getting right down to business

• Unlike some other commenters, I did actually like the very indirect style of presentation

Constructive feedback: Maybe to avoid some of the confusion, one of the doctors could explain the "home procedure" for making deposits and withdrawals...ya know, given shelter-in-place orders and all, they needed to let their Gold members know a nice safe homebound way of doing this. And then that would help me answer my question below:

This is my first time playing with saved loads, so I'd appreciate any pointers/instructional advice on how one can safely save multiple loads to be consumed all at once! I first thought I could cum in a condom and then freeze it, but then it seems it would be pretty difficult to save multiple loads that way and have them all available to drink on a moments notice...maybe breaking the condoms open and thawing them in a container? Will it spoil? Is cum microwaveable, or should I defrost it on the stove? (I want to send this paragraph of questions to my ~10 year future self for a laugh).

For those of us without ready access to milking machines and advanced IP-protected technology ;) we'd appreciate any advice!

[figroll]

Great writing. The tease does satisfy the fantasy really well.

Thank you!

I was a bit confused by the "milking machine" part like other comments here but I figured it just means fap away.

Yes

The idea of the milking machine is just that the place is set up for efficient bulk "collection" and that the process is meant to be efficient and corporate rather than an erotic or sexual service.

I like hands-free parts of the teases. However, I feel like some of the other parts are a bit too tedious, since it is not possible to click and skip ahead. If this could be amended the tease would be excellent.

You only need to play the narrative parts once as it should remember your progress. So if you come back you should get to skip the parts you already saw as long as you complete each part. Not sure if that solves the problem.

I do also wonder about the "aromatics" part. I confess I have no idea about what that means and I'm a little bit intrigued. Could you perhaps share some knowledge on it for me (maybe in spoilers, for other viewers' consideration)?

Poppers or weed. I only included this as I know from previous discussions in the Sissy / Sissy Hypno community that some people like these in the context of CEI as a way of lowering inhibitions and being able to go through with it. A lot of the CEI fetish surrounds the tension between really wanting to do it before cuming and really not wanting to do it afterwards. But it's such a niche thing so if I was going to include it I wanted it to be very oblique.

Also the inspiration for this tease come from JohnP23's tease I mentioned in the first post and Miss Cassie's classic Britney Cum Trainer video which is easy to find online.

Johns tease is here : https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=47347
Miss Cassie here although the links tend to die : https://spankbang.com/16clj/video/cum+s ... rs+edition

[figroll]

I really love this tease so far.

Thank you!

I actually played through the save part and read the instructional part of the withdrawal, just so I could make clear to myself how to play the game. Now that I've done so I'm going to come back to it later with the intention of actually playing, and doing some real deposits and withdrawals.

That was exactly the idea A lot of the idea here is about the CEI reluctance thing and providing a tease that helps with that.

Constructive feedback: Maybe to avoid some of the confusion, one of the doctors could explain the "home procedure" for making deposits and withdrawals...ya know, given shelter-in-place orders and all, they needed to let their Gold members know a nice safe homebound way of doing this.

I did actually think of exactly that and there is a small reference to "in person or our online service" at one point. But I was already conscious that there was a lot of explaining involved

This is my first time playing with saved loads, so I'd appreciate any pointers/instructional advice on how one can safely save multiple loads to be consumed all at once! I first thought I could cum in a condom and then freeze it

Freeze in condoms, thaw in a cup of warm water before use I think.

If you get deep into the CEI / cumslut weeds elsewhere on the internet then there are suggestions this might be a big dodgy although I think this is nonsense. If you live in Alabama and leave it on the counter for 2 weeks in August then you are asking for trouble but be sensible and it will be fine.

Thanks again for your awesome feedback.

[jockpseudonym]

What an incredible and promising debut.

[figroll]

What an incredible and promising debut.

Thank you very much.

[teasekink]

Really like this tease. Interesting idea that's really well made. Much better now I realise it saves your progress if you play it signed in. Looking forward to more options/feeders being added if you can.

[Sisyphuster]

Holy shit this is such an awesome tease! I totally love it. I agree with the other notes that things could be a bit clearer at times.

Most specifically, when you are meeting each of the different "extractors" I think it would be helpful if you had a lot more of the setting of the scene. "you walk into a room where you are greeted by Lucy. 'Please disrobe and place your hands and feet against the frame where indicated...'" that kind of thing. You're a really good writer and there should be more of it at these scene-setting moments.


Also, it would be better if there was more of an indicator of when and how to cum at the end of the extractions, like a countdown for example.

Love this so much! Tons of potential here

[qusqus]

I did it! After years of trying so many different ways to eat my cum this tease finally worked for me. I just made an account to thank you for that!

I liked the explanations from the extractors to get things going. What I definitely liked the most was the concept of the stages and the tutorial before the first withdrawal. To have these audio files in the background and the handsfree experience was really awesome. For me it would have been even greater if the whole procedure for eating your first load would have been a bit longer. Because it was really a very special moment and I didn't want it to end

I really hope to see more withdrawal options! I will definitely try them all ^^

[SnooBananas2552]

It is really good tease. I like every part of 'withdrawal': warming, preparation, pouring and swallowing. It's great that goddesses make you proud of acting. They mentally prepare you to yummy part and when it comes they show the hottest poses to you and music becomes more epic and motivating. At this moment you can't resist and do what they want without hesitate. For me, it's the best CEI ending.
To be honest other sections are not so interesting. They are common. But I think it's not bad. They are like fillers and serve to bind other parts together to teach you the whole process. For the second time I watched porn from my collection and ignored 'training' section before 'withdrawal'. There was enough any thought about withdrawal to get horny. I think there is no need to improve other sections and it would be great to concentrate on 'withdrawal' as the most important and brilliant part of the tease.

How many scenarios for withdrawal does tease have? I've passed two: 'first timer' and 'big fat load'. Can I open other scenarios? And I look forward to ongoing.
Well done!