Edge, edge and edge somemore
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Edge, edge and edge somemore
My first ever tease. any feed back?
Wow, what a nice start! The tease is pretty good, finally someone who dares to create a more direct and commanding style.
One note of critique, though: You might want to take better care of your titles. It's strange to have 15 pages of teases without a single mistakes and then two in the headline of this thread and one in the headline of your other tease.
One note of critique, though: You might want to take better care of your titles. It's strange to have 15 pages of teases without a single mistakes and then two in the headline of this thread and one in the headline of your other tease.
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