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Feedback for "Earn your orgasm"

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This is my first flashtease and the second tease I do here.

Please report bugs ands give me some feedback here.

This is the tease:http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=4089
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Day 3 button doesn't work, and seems to get stuck at the time for edging until the time runs out screen.


great looking tease, love the concept of the modifiers!
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Great idea. And a well done tease. (Except "3 days" dont work and there is a "no" at the ende, where there should be a "now")
The only thing - I didn't get along with the dice. Took me already a few minutes just to find the one, you meant. And where to click, where to write in the numbers and so on...
There wasn't an easier way like just writing down the points? You could ask in the end how many points with a trick, you built in. Maybe you just show random numbers and a button has to be clicked. And some of the higher numbers can never be reached by some calculation - maybe only even numbers wold be possible or so...
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Looking to be an awesome tease. Have found a glitch with it though: Get to one of the "30 seconds while i think of what to do next" and the timer changes to "1" instead of "30" and just keeps repeating. Thought it was part of the tease, but about an hour later and it still seems to be going... (It's after the 1 stroke every 3 sec section)

I disagree with Thomas, I think the dice works very well.
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Excellent idea!

I saw the same 1 second bug as paddy.

Also, the delay at the time for some edging page was huge!

A few spelling and grammar mistakes.

I thought the dice worked out well.

It will be a good tease when the bugs are fixed.
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Superb tease. Very hot indeed. Good stuff, thank you.
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First of all, thank you for the feedback and the bug reports.
  • 3 Days fixed
  • Delays reduced a little bit
  • spelling improved
  • added an option to play without dice
Where is this "no" where a "now" should be? I couldn't find that.

That glitch at the main page where you can get stuck is hard to fix. I use the range command and have eleven targets: delay(30sec, range(1, 11))

I don't understand why this works for some pages but not for the others.

Feel free to tell me about any more bugs or spelling and grammar mistakes.
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Post by Evals »

Great tease, nice to see something different. :-) I got that weird error too - weird because it looks on a clock that shows only one second but takes ten seconds to completely, however much sense that makes. And there's a typo in the title of the tease. Not to be too nitpicky!
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Re: Feedback for "Earn your orgasm"

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Fixed some bugs and caused a new one. The range command should be working now.
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I loved it. I'll have to try again sometime now that the problems are fixed (hopefully).

Great concept, excellent execution, sexy babe :)
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Thanks for the "Please no dice" button :) Its still a long time to get 100 points...

That "no" was somewhere at the end, with this edging action. And I've just found a timer that says "0" and goes on and on and on and on... (The girl lies on the couch and says "stroke medium pace...")
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hi. i am getting the error on day 3 where you are told to "wait a few moments while i decide...".
The counter goes around one and counts down to 0. Then the counter keeps going around (slightly slower) with the counter stuck on 0.
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Re: Feedback for "Earn your orgasm"

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Hi guys,

I just cant get the range command working. Therefore I have unpublished this tease until I find a workaround.
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Re: Feedback for "Earn your orgasm"

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Ok, it's online again, thx to seraph0x, who told me the command I needed to add.

*Tasks can be accesed no multiple times without getting stuck
*Special Images aren't shown in General pages
*Added a "rolled 100" button in the introduction section


Due to my bugfixing efforts, the code is quite messed up now. I hope this didn't cause new bugs. Please report, if something still doesn't work.

Thanks to everyone who participated here so far!
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Re: Feedback for "Earn your orgasm"

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Does anybody know who is the girl in this tease? She's hot!
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