Miss Kaguras captions
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Miss Kaguras captions
Well, i made some captions and would like to share them in here. i would also like to hear some opinions about it and maybe ways to improve it, if you have some ideas. Hope you enjoy
Link to my tumblr with my captions: http://miss-kagura.tumblr.com/
Link to my tumblr with my captions: http://miss-kagura.tumblr.com/
Last edited by Miss-Kagura on Thu Jul 16, 2015 4:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Miss Kaguras captions
Hey Miss Kagura,
I enjoy your pictures and captions. Thanks for sharing them! I like your choice of visual material and the captions get me excited, but the spelling and grammatical errors slightly turn me off. I'd gladly correct them if you'd like.
Yours,
Noah
I enjoy your pictures and captions. Thanks for sharing them! I like your choice of visual material and the captions get me excited, but the spelling and grammatical errors slightly turn me off. I'd gladly correct them if you'd like.
Yours,
Noah
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Re: Miss Kaguras captions
These are excellent!
P.S. There is a typo in the first link
P.S. There is a typo in the first link
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Re: Miss Kaguras captions
Thank you for the feedback you 2.
i edited my post and put some updated pics in it, with some mistaked gone. Hope you like them better, Noah.
Also thank you for your offer, but i already have some people who check it on some mistakes.
i edited my post and put some updated pics in it, with some mistaked gone. Hope you like them better, Noah.
Also thank you for your offer, but i already have some people who check it on some mistakes.
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Anytime! They have definitely improved and I am glad you are sharing your talent!Kagura wrote:Thank you for the feedback you 2.
i edited my post and put some updated pics in it, with some mistaked gone. Hope you like them better, Noah.
Also thank you for your offer, but i already have some people who check it on some mistakes.
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Re: Miss Kaguras captions
Some very nice captions there. My only feedback would be to say that the best captions I have seen include a bit more recognition to location. it's a subtle thing I guess, but somehow it adds a little more depth to the fantasy that the caption evokes, creating the suggestion of what might be beyond the edge of the picture. Not a great explanation I know, but hopefully it can be food for thought.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing what comes next
Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing what comes next
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Re: Miss Kaguras captions
Again, this one builds story without having to tell the whole thing. I imagine those pleading eyes looking up have just realised what a mistake it was to sign up for this scientific research program without actually reading the contract. That the casual explanation she was given about research into sexual stimulation, didn't fully explain how much "Fun" this would be. I guess it wont be the 'easy money' she thought it would be.
I can almost hear the water in the background, and the way she has been giving you a peek between her legs every time your wife turned her back, its been a very long night...
I hope some of those help explain what I was trying to say, I just love it when thought is put into, how things got to this point, not just whats happening right in front of you.
Check out http://bcrude.tumblr.com/ if you get a chance too. all of his captions build this little fantasy world. Each a little story of its own, but all sharing and building the world that he puts them in.
Ultimately just remember that these captions you are making are yours. You are the artist and its your opinion that matters most.
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I thought about it for awhile and i do see what you mean, but i dont think it works for me.
I see a pic and i write what i see in it. Adding stuff would ruin a bit for me, especially since my captions aim at something different than your examples. Your stuff aims more at the situation, while mine are more a mental thing. Anyway, thank you for your answer :)
I see a pic and i write what i see in it. Adding stuff would ruin a bit for me, especially since my captions aim at something different than your examples. Your stuff aims more at the situation, while mine are more a mental thing. Anyway, thank you for your answer :)
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Re: Miss Kaguras captions
I see your point. The easiest explanation for me would be that it is just easy to read the text and don´t lose focus of the photo.Razorsedge wrote:Some very nice captions there. My only feedback would be to say that the best captions I have seen include a bit more recognition to location. it's a subtle thing I guess, but somehow it adds a little more depth to the fantasy that the caption evokes, creating the suggestion of what might be beyond the edge of the picture. Not a great explanation I know, but hopefully it can be food for thought.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing what comes next
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