Best tease ever done.
Nothing to add.
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Only for die-hard fans of extreme CBT. I thought it was ridiculous and totally unreal
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well, the girl was def. hot. and i like the idea of the plot, but its way to much cbt for me... a softer version would have been fantastic
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I enjoyed reading it and looking at the pics, and I was eager to find out what you had planned for those chopsticks. It wasn't what I had in mind...
Overall, the tease was way more than I could actually do, but other than that it was very nicely done.
Overall, the tease was way more than I could actually do, but other than that it was very nicely done.
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First, I agree it was a really good tease. The tone you established in the writing was fantastic. That was really well done and is, I think, the most important part of a webtease. If the words don't make the reader want to follow along then what's the point?
I very much hope that you do do a softer version. If you do, please don't take the cbt out. Just cut it down a bit. Though a determined or mistress-aided sub may be able to keep 20 cloths pins on their balls for as long as you tell them in the tease I think doing the tease most guys would have trouble even getting that many on in the first place. How about 10? Or 8? Also how about 5-10 minutes at a time rather then page after page of keeping them on. I liked your cbt very much so don't "replace" it. Just make a milder, though still far from mild version.
I very much hope that you do do a softer version. If you do, please don't take the cbt out. Just cut it down a bit. Though a determined or mistress-aided sub may be able to keep 20 cloths pins on their balls for as long as you tell them in the tease I think doing the tease most guys would have trouble even getting that many on in the first place. How about 10? Or 8? Also how about 5-10 minutes at a time rather then page after page of keeping them on. I liked your cbt very much so don't "replace" it. Just make a milder, though still far from mild version.
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Which Razor Doll is featured in this tease?
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