A Christmas Cumslut
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A Christmas Cumslut
Sorry if anyone comes across any spelling or grammar errors, I wanted it out before Christmas. The tease in itself is quite wordy because it's in part a story but one with tasks to complete. Any feedback would be appreciated for future teases.
Re: A Christmas Cumslut
I approve. The numerical feedback you get will probably be on the low side because of some of the, uh, story elements in the middle, but it's definitely one of the better ones published recently. I thought the ending scene was a little rushed, though.
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Re: A Christmas Cumslut
Yeh I'l admit I did rush it because of how close Christmas was getting, if I do a special tease in future I know to start to earlier.Salerio wrote:I approve. The numerical feedback you get will probably be on the low side because of some of the, uh, story elements in the middle, but it's definitely one of the better ones published recently. I thought the ending scene was a little rushed, though.
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Re: A Christmas Cumslut
Jana's little girl gave it 5 stars.
Sexy take on a classic story.
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