Reversal of Fortunes

[slavepuppy]

hey

My first webtease, also my first post.

It was strange, I didnt really say what I wanted to say in it. dont get me wrong. i thought it was allright, it just didnt go where i was planning to bring it, but hey, im no submatt :P

[cumhardy]

Hey slavepuppy, and welcome to the board

I liked the tease, its more of a story with pictures than a guided tease with instructions but thats cool. A few of the costume changes in the pictures distracted me a bit (dunno why... like the underwear coming off then suddenly reappearing )

I know what you mean about it not coming out exactly how you wanted. I have that when I write teases. Its easy to have the fantasy of the story but when it comes to writing it down its gets a bit more difficult. Its strange how that happens...

Nice work tho, write more! Is this going to be a series?

[slavepuppy]

lol good catch on the costume changes, i put the pics in the wrong order

maybe i should edit a liiiiitle more closely.

thanks otherwise, and possibly a series, allthough id want to do a few more random teases before i expanded this one further.

my goal is to do a tease based on the dating service one that submatt did originally. that was basically my favourite tease, and i miss it.

[slavepuppy]

But thanks for the advice by the way, I know i hate random costume changes in teases. i know i tried to keep consistent, and if there was a costume change, tried to make it as unnoticeable as possible, or follow the story somewhat.

but ill defintly keep that in mind.

[foofoof]

I think your tease is great, but you should definitly add tags to it (the rest of this post might contain spoilers, so stop reading here if you don't want it to be spoiled!)

Your tease contains much chastity, and I'd like to know these things before I do a tease. I know that some users prefer not to know what the teases are about, I suggest hiding the tags yourself if you really want it! As long as this option is not implemented in this website, I have a dirty hack to do it: Websites nowadays are styled using CSS, and using the CSS you can change the way Milovana looks very easy. Opera users can simply create an file called user.css (or anything else). The content could look like the following:

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div#tease_list div.tease div.tags {
    visibility: hidden;
}

(This Code might change the style of other websites, too, but only, if they use the same HTML structure like Milovana. Because Milovana uses names like "tease" for HTML elements I think this is fairly uncommon.)

Now, open the "View" menu and change the path to your new style sheet:

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View -> Style -> Manage Modes... -> Display -> My style sheet

Now all Tags are hidden (You can still use tags to filter the teases!).

This site explains how to use your own stylesheets in other browers.

[punkrngd]

i have to say i love this style of tease! plus the fact that the model looks like amanda bynes just gets me really turned on!