My first tease-Maneater

[submissivemaletx]

Although you can't make everyone happy, hopefully the majority will enjoy it. I have been listening to some of the gripes on here and kept them in mind. It's not as long as I wanted it to be, as once I got into it, I realized it's alot of work. I will probably give it another try in the near future. Hopefully this one is good enough to build on.

Thoughts? Criticism? Complaints?

[tinfoilhat]

Thought you did a great job! Nice job with the writing. There is an art to the build up and I think you nailed it. Hope you will do more in the future

[Mz_Teneale]

hello submissivemaletx,

I thought the tease was excellent, especially for your first go. I breezed through it quickly, just reading the task. But from what i saw it was very good, i may get john to do it later to see what its like.

ill probably post more feedback after that. I hope you keep making teases. And i am also very glad that someone else finds creating teases tough. I though i was the only one and felt a little stupid

[submissivemaletx]

Thank you both.

Mz_Teneale,
I definately underestimated the difficulty in writing one, glad to hear i'm not the only one.





After seeing the voting and such, i'm definately interested in writing more.

[mrfire]

Agreed, she is definitely hot. I'd love a link to her pictures too.

And the tease was amazing. I just loved the tone you took with her -- stern but gentle, clearly in power but able to establish that with undertones instead of direct words.

Very well done, my friend.

[submissivemaletx]

Thank you for the compliments. I plan on using her for the sequel to that tease.

http://www.petitenympha.com/st/niches/p ... eron.shtml

[subman1_99]

Great tease, thank you. Looking forward to your next one.

[zenlover]

Thanks for the tease...I love the sit on the dildo...VERY imaginative, and something I've never done. I happened to have one from years ago, and it was small enough that I was willing...Got into a good muscle burn on my thighs, but had a mind blowing orgasm! I'm finding that anything that stimulates my prostate intensifies my orgasm. Thanks!

[ashleysub4u]

This tease is excellent. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

It has a good pace to it and left me very frustrated. And Princess Cameron is hot. I love teases that use images of women who appear to be standing over you - and looking down at you. Perfect!

[submissivemaletx]

thanks for the feedback. I'm having some internet troubles right now but I hope to start working on the sequel this week.