A Rebel's Yell (Part II)

[Evals]

Since the other thread was hijacked with allusions to child pornography and pictures of scantily-clad grandmas that I would rather not be forced to look at every time I scroll down to read a reply... I will make my response here.

I like the deepening of the fantasy with stories from the "outside world." I think the "testicular distress," as I like to call it, has become a good recurring theme of this tease. Though this is more a personal preference, I'd definitely enjoy more creative punishment on even more areas of the body. It'd be nice to have a painful use for all these clothespins I have. Again, great job with her personality and voice. I wouldn't worry about that at all.

If one wants to make the claim that she looks young, then I believe it is more because of what she is wearing instead of how she, as a model, looks young. Mittens, rainbow socks, and oversized sweaters can do that. Visiting her webpage and seeing her other sets, she doesn't underage at all to me.

Either way, great tease! She is completely hot, and seeing more of her would definitely be a good thing! Perhaps some where she appears more mature would make people more happy. The images here show that there is a lot of material to work with! Rating should be >4, but it could be either due to the recent down voter or just the ending. I'm a believe that leaving the reader frustrated makes them more critical when it comes to giving a vote after just being told "no," haha.

[Kalivan]

Thanks for the thoughtful post. The other thread went slightly off the rails and I ended up putting off replying. Didn't notice this thread for a while, sorry

I'll endeavour to be slightly more creative with pain-related stuff next time, I agree that focusing on a couple of areas can be a little uninteresting! As you pointed out, the clothes certainly alter people's perception of her age. Frustratingly, many of the sets that I have found have pretty ridiculous props/clothing. It does look like more have been released since I last searched though. I'll look out for some better ones.

It seems to me the ratings have been fairly unpredictable recently, so I'm not too worried about it
I've seen a couple of teases getting <4 that I personally gave 4-5. I imagine a large percentage of users vote based on subject matter, rather than general production quality/creativity etc. (Much like you said )