Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

hentaiAddict12345 · Post by **hentaiAddict12345** » Fri Oct 25, 2024 11:42 am

@FattsDynamo Feedback on... leaving?

Spoiler: show: $:\'-($

Cya friend, enjoy life, as I said, you shouldn't spend SO MUCH time on random perverts online. I usually spend like 1.5-2 hours on writing a set, I can't imagine using dozens of hours writing a set, so I really appreciate everything you've done for me so far

#brianSet
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Before set

Spoiler: show: Consider putting your rules in a signature like the others have, had to search quite a bit to find them.

Anyway, this is kind of an experiment set. I hope this is not what you meant by this segment in your rules, or you'll hate this set
Quick FYI: Though featured a lot here and I enjoy it - it's welcome to be teased with more than just cucking.

Set

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I can't believe it... A cuck who's had enough cucking...

Do you really want to walk away from that life? Have you had too much already?

I don't believe you one bit. But, we'll give you what you want. A pause from all the cucking.

We both know you'll be back begging us on your knees to cuck you again within a week.

Either way, enough talking about that for now. Let's give you some good old teasing then.

And what better way to tease you then not showing you what you truly want to see?

Beg me. "Please show me your tits Miss Janice".

Good boy. We have barely even started, and you're already so submissive for us.

Sometimes we'd like to have some of you put up a fight, but we just show you a tiny bit of cleavage, and you're already on your knees for us. *sigh*

I guess it can't be helped. If you were a real man, you would be out there fucking a girl. It's only natural we only get pathetic subby boys around here.

Isn't that right, brian? "Yes, you're right Miss Janice". Good boy.

Alright, alright, I've been teasing you for a while now, I guess I'll allow you to edge for me. IF, you beg first.
"Please Miss Janice, allow me to edge for your pussy!"

There you go, pet.

Here, have a better look. Now, tell me...

Were you imagining your cock inside me, or someone else's? You're too easy, brian. We both know the answer.
I'll see you later, when you've actually realized what you're here for.

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Welcome, pet.

I see you've finally learned to stand up for yourself.

I mean, sure, you're still a pathetic sub down at our feet, but you've learned to say "no" to other men fucking your favourite girls.

...or have you? I'm not too sure, brian, your cock twitched just now...

...brian? Are you okay?...

Stop breathing so heavily... brian... what is wrong with you???

*sigh* I knew it... you're not completely over it... you're already showing relapse signs.. this is bad...

I'm sorry brian, but I can't give you what you crave... just... imagine it, if you want.

You must fight back against it... this is not you.

You can't keep imagining me getting pounded by way bigger dicks than yours, it's an unhealthy obsession...

I've already seen what happened to other guys who went down your route... they never came back the same...

Even when you're edging, you're still imagining it... please, you have to stop...

*sigh*... you're hopeless. I really hope you find peace with yourself one day. To finally accept who you truly are.

Trust me, you'll be much happier... but until then, leave me.

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You know, brian, I'm actually rooting for you.

Sure, some of the girls here are evil bitches who would love to see you fail, but me? I want you to become a better version of yourself.

Leave those bad desires you have behind. Focus on me. On my tits.

I won't even say what not to imagine... just don't. Focus on the pleasure you feel while you stroke for me.

Focus on my body. Focus on anything other than what you hear in the back of your head.

Focus, brian. Focus!

Will edging help? Well, let's try...

Did it help? Wouldn't you love to see a big cock in that pussy right now?

...brian...?

...brian...??? Stare at her pussy, and imagine it getting pounded...

What's wrong with you??? Why do you get that crazy look in your eyes???

I... I see. You're still getting those intrusive thoughts...

I'm sorry brian, I can't help you with that... you have to win that battle all by yourself...

And from what you're telling me... you're not doing so well...

But... I still believe in you. You can do it! Ignore her. Focus on her pussy. Edge while you imagine it overflowing with someone else's cum

There's that crazy look again... you're scaring me...

I really hope you know what you're doing, brian... I... I have to go...

Spoiler: show: Hilarious. You really think you can make it as a normal human being?

Let me tell you something, brian: You're not normal. A normal human doesn't jerk off 5 times a week.

So why try to resist? I know you've been having thoughts about it all day.

Give in. Listen to that inner voice in your head. She's right. Give in.

That's fine though. Even if by some miracle you do resist us, we still have plenty of cucks to tease around here.

We've just recently got addict and EdgeSlut. And many more to come, I'm sure.

So know that you're not special. You just happened to be one of the first, but they are many more like you.

Some even more perverted than you. So that begs the question...

Why should we waste our time on you... like at all?

You're just a broken toy at this point. And broken toys belong in the trash.

No, seriously, what do you bring to the table?

Addict we can treat like utter garbage and he'll still love us. EdgeSlut we can edge into a frenzy and he'll just beg us for more.

So, why should we tease you instead of them? Why are you special?

Your rules are boring... you're boring... I really have to consider if I ever want to see you again. Just... just leave me...

brian · Post by **brian** » Fri Oct 25, 2024 8:58 pm

EdgeSlut0828 wrote: Mon Oct 21, 2024 10:03 pm

FB on another great set!

Spoiler: show: This was amazing $:\'-($

First of all: stroking to Foxy was amazing, I got lost in her eyes and thoroughly enjoyed each edge (not that it took me long to get there at all. I was edging before asked, I just don't have any stamina left

Then Alina. Damn, what an entrance, what a gallery. Amazing scene, she looked so hot. I was soooo jealous of the guy, great cuking scene. so many amazing photos, of her ass especially.

The next girl I didn't recognize? But she was quite slutty which always works great for cucking

Then...hers truly. My god, that set is amazing. Her eyes look stunning, her body. I'm so incredibly weak for her. I was excited and scared about unlocking - the idea with the flashlight was AMAZING! It felt good, yet so frustrating inside. I was stroking the outside like an idiot. I didn't feel anything, but the flashlight being wrapped around my cock alone almost had me feeling like I could come by looking at her eyes alone - hands free.

When I saw her covered in cum - who else looks so good covered in cum?? - I just wanted to ruin to her so bad. But I obliged. She really brings out the dirtiest in me - and you did amazing hitting that character. awesome scene that, thank you so much!

Now as I said: I will "finish" this punishment with Fatts. But please, I'm begging for more evil Lana sets

Will definitely work on your return sets next

Note: my punishment for Lana has been completed - yeah. No sets for me right now, as the finale is being written by Fatts and I have some return sets to write.

EdgeSlut0828 · Post by **EdgeSlut0828** » Sat Oct 26, 2024 12:56 am

Hentaiaddict feedback on set:

Spoiler: show: It pains me to say this but I did not enjoy this set. There were a few things in it I did like throughout that were nice but the whole thing was not the most enjoyable. I still edged 200 times so not near the record but that doesn't affect how much I enjoyed the set. Most sections just had something I really didn't like with them and I will talk about it in the specifc sections here.

Linda- Her section really had no big problems with it. The gallery for me pretty decent but nothing special. Her telling me she was being nice and pulling a 180 was fun and most of the dialogue was good. I don't have any issues with this section but it wasn't amazing or anything.

Agatha- I don't like being called a cucky or the humiliation in this section. That is maybe something you enjoy but it is not for me. When being teased about sex scenes I enjoy being show what I can't have and teased about my cock leaking on the floor like in Brian's tease. So both of the quotes you had I didn't enjoy since that isn't what I like and I don't like the humiliation. With that teasing me about having a "cucking fetish" turned me off as well since I don't feel like I do right now. Past the first half of her section the rest was great. Edge holding for her was very good as well as the gallery of her all soapy was really hot. Even this line "Should take your mind off my pussy filled with another man's cock for a bit... oops..." was enjoyable because of me edging to that thought.

Sonya- I think this was my least favorite section. All the humiliation and being called "disgusting" and "pathetic" was a big turn off here and I probably skipped out on some edges and ballbusting because of it. Almost all the pictures had some sort of dialogue with those words making me not like the whole section. Doubling the girl specific rule though is a good idea for the future.

Red Fox- Her section was short and not as bad as the other ones. Again I didn't like being called a cuck and her saying I had a cuck fetish but besides that I enjoyed edging for the other pictures. Her making eye contact while fucking was honestly one of the hottest pic in any of my sets. Just less use of the words and this section would have been fine.

Foxy- I didn't like the fact it was "Sonya's idea" for my orgasm since in my mind it was Foxy's this whole time. The choice itself probably would have been a lot more interesting if I enjoyed the rest of the set or if it was Foxy who made it since I have been waiting to cum to Foxy for awhile but after all the cucking stuff turned me off early it wasn't really a decision. I ruined for Foxy and don't get me wrong it was a very intense ruin for her but I don't think that was due to the rest of the set more just wanting to orgasm for foxy for so long. I probably will still give myself a full orgasm before November so I have a fair chance for NNN but I will keep my idea of finally having a full orgasm for Foxy for another set and Cum to someone else.

Overall not a great set. Main takeaways I say are less hardcore humiliation and less talk about being a cuck. If you would like to make another set before November you can and I will be working on a multi day set for you in the background here.

hentaiAddict12345 · Post by **hentaiAddict12345** » Sat Oct 26, 2024 4:45 am

@EdgeSlut Feedback on feedback

Spoiler: show: Whelp, it's pretty easy for me to forget that sometimes not everyone is into hardcore humiliation as much as I am. I should be able to give you a make-up set before the end of October. Either way, thanks for being honest with me!

Just a short question: is cucking still something you want to experiment with? Of course, with less humiliation involved.

hentaiAddict12345 · Post by **hentaiAddict12345** » Sat Oct 26, 2024 8:17 am

#EdgeSlut0828Set
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Before set

Spoiler: show: Hopefully, you'll enjoy this one more. Again, sorry for the last "flop" of a set. I got carried away. This one will be more in the style of my previous sets for you, which you seemed to enjoy.

Start with your normal stroking rules, I'll tell you when to switch to the edge-slut mode.

Set

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Author's note: Just use whatever you enjoy most for Sonya. Have fun!

I... I'm really sorry for what I did to you last time, EdgeSlut.

I've been playtesting some of my ideas on addict, and while he seemed to really enjoy himself...

Sometimes I forget you are all so different. What he might really enjoy, you could really dislike, and vice-versa.

So... let's turn the page and start over, alright?

Do I take your staring at my pussy as an agreement? *grin*

Yay! Alright then, now still, we can't have you enjoying this TOO much, or you'll want this all the time...

So whatever rule you used for me until now, swap it with the other one.

C'mon, don't get mad at me again! I thought this is all fun for you. Why have it in your rules otherwise?

...Fine. You're not ready for all that yet. *sigh* Swap rules again.

Anyway, to make it up for you for the last time, I prepared a special day, all for you.

And I promise, you ACTUALLY get to cum today, no strings attached.

Does that earn your forgiveness? Pretty please?

Yes! Thank you! Trust me, you won't be disappointed!

Or... well... at least not as much as last time...

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Now that intro's over, switch to your edge-slut rules for the rest of the set.

EdgeSlut! I heard what happened and came right over, but you weren't here, so...

Your book collection is... interesting. Very naughty, but still interesting.

Anyway, that's not why I came over. Sonya told me what happened. I'm very sorry I wasn't around, I would've told them you don't enjoy that kind of thing...

Alissa may be your goddess, at least for now, but I know you best.

I know you prefer a loving mistress over a degrading one. I know you still love my tits in your face even after all this time.

Sure, tastes might change slightly over time, but never drastically.

Take addict for example. Sure, he now has a cucking fetish, but that was always going to happen with how much of a humiliation junkie he is.

What bigger humiliation that seeing your girl enjoy someone else's cock while degrading you? It was always going to happen. He just wasn't exposed to it until now.

But seeing brian's rules... it stirred something in him. And then Fatts teased the shit out of him with this multi-part set, it was bound to happen.

Either way, today is not about him. It's about you, my lovely pet. Even though I'm now only your 2nd favourite, you're still my favourite pet to play with.

How mad I used to get... Damn, I can't believe I used to care so much. But, why should I? I still get to tease you just like before.

And I STILL drive you crazy, don't I? Maybe not as much as Alissa, but you can't stop edging for me.

Just remember. No matter where you end up in life, I will always hold a special place for you in my heart.

You should go now, or you'll be late.

I really enjoyed my time here. See you soon!

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Nice collection you've got there.

Anyway, that's not why I'm here. I owe you an apology.

Seeing me makes you edge like crazy? Well, not my problem, pet...

I WILL be stripping for you, and you WILL listen to me. Whatever else you do, that's your own problem.

This is fucking bullshit, Sonya...

Huh? That was nothing... you're imagining things.

*sigh* I'm sorry...

*sigh* For cucking you...

Happy now...?

Not good enough? It has to come from the heart? Nah, you ain't getting that from me.

You actually enjoyed my section secretly, and I also enjoyed my time, so this half-ass excuse is all you're getting from me.

Oh my god, please stop arguing!

You know what? I retract my apology. You don't deserve it.

I read your feedback. You enjoyed my section. What? You think we don't read what you write on this forgotten forum?

Nah pet, we read. Everything. We know every single degenerate thing you guys do here.

Yep. Everything. But, I promised that's all I'd do for you today, so we'll see, maybe next time...

Cya later, pet~

Spoiler: show: Hey. I really appreciate you choosing me last time.

You passed my test. You're worthy of finally cumming for me.

And all that about it being Sonya's idea? Pffft, you're so naive sometimes, EdgeSlut.

Of course it was my idea all along! I wanted to see just how dedicated you truly are to me, your goddess.

And you've proven your love to me. And for that, you deserve the best orgasm of all time.

I really like this connection we've built! I wasn't even on your radar, then all of the sudden, I'm your ultimate goddess you'd do anything for!

Thank you so much for the honor, EdgeSlut. Means a lot. You're about to find out just how much.

Denying yourself all this time, just for me... I like that. Any girl would like that.

Alright then, get ready. Double your edge hold time for this pic, I want you REALLY on the edge!

And cum for me!

Thank you so much, EdgeSlut. You've been building up that load for a long time, and it shows...

hentaiAddict12345 · Post by **hentaiAddict12345** » Sun Oct 27, 2024 10:44 am

#Ecik17Set
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Hey Ecik! Long time no see!

Guess you spend too much time with Angela to have time for the rest of us, huh?

Relax. I'm not here to punish you. Quite the contrary. I think your devotion is admirable.

I've seen a lot of people, like EdgeSlut, who change their goddess all the time. Not you.

You've remained loyal to Angela for a very long time. Years maybe? See? It's been so long I can't even remember!

Hope you appreciate what I'm showing you here. Most people barely get a look at my cleavage.

But a good boy like you deserves to see everything~

And yes, I mean it. Everything.

My whole body, for the most devoted of sluts around here.

Go ahead. Edge for my ass. You've earned it.

Ready to worship my pussy, Ecik? It craves your edges.

You can see a bit of it, can't you? Edge for me!

And again! Even closer this time!

*giggles* Okay, I'll stop teasing you. But you must hold the edge for 10 seconds this time!

And one last time. Edge and hold. Maybe next time I'll ride your face with it.

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Someone's been fairly active around here recently, huh?

I suppose you deserve a little bit of a reward. But no edging!

If you do edge for me, I want you to turn on your ballbusting mode for the reminder of my section.

We can't have boys like you doing whatever they please around here.

But then again, you'd have to be out of your mind to not edge like crazy for me.

I do deserve it, right?

Why would you torture yourself to hold on when you could just let go? The edge would feel so good, as would those ball slaps after...

C'mon Ecik. Don't I deserve those edges?

Don't my squished tits make it so hard to hold on?

Alright pet, enough teasing.

I have one final task for you, then get out of my face.

If you edged for me at all, then give me three more edges right now!
If you didn't edge, than hands off! No stroking even!

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My my, did I leave such a good impression on you last time, Ecik?

I must say, I'm a bit disappointed though, I don't seem to have a rule yet...

Hmm... let's see. I am a redhead with a fiery personality, so...

How about this then? Whenever I'm fully naked, you have to edge for me after your strokes.

I don't really care if you make it a permanent rule or not, but you will follow it for my section, pet.

And would you look at that? I'm naked already, so you get to edge for me! Aren't you lucky?

You should consider yourself lucky. With your rules, I could deny you edging entirely.

Doesn't this feel way better than simply stroking? You know, those edge number you're doing are pretty rookie numbers.

You do what? Like 20-30 edges on a good day? EdgeSlut does like 250 per set.

I sometimes wish you were more like him... we could have so much fun...

If you edged SO MUCH for me, I would even let you fuck me at the end of the day...

But *sigh* you're all different, I suppose. Each stroker with its own uses.

At least you DO edge for us, unlike that pathetic addict... makes me sick.

Hold the edge for me for 20 seconds. Really makes you feel alive, doesn't it?

Good job, Ecik. I'll be seeing you later.

Spoiler: show: Welcome, pet.

Are you ready to have your loyalty to me rewarded?

I really hope you plan to participate in No-Nut-November, it's a really cool event!

It would make me and the other girls very happy.

But even if not, you already made me very happy. Let me show you just how much I respect your loyalty to me.

But first, I demand some edges, Ecik. Trust me, that orgasm will feel much better.

Let's do an edge pyramid. One edge for first image, two edges for second, and so on.

Don't worry, I know you're not a hardcore edger like some other guys around here, so I won't hold this on for long.

But still, we must tease you for a bit before your big release. We both wouldn't have it any other way, right?

Alright pet, get ready... hold the last edge for 30 seconds!

And again, one last hold, 30 seconds!

Cum for me, Ecik! No edges, just cum! Good boy~

FattsDynamo · Post by **FattsDynamo** » Sun Oct 27, 2024 11:01 am

@brian: You like my writing. You should probably read my feedback on this post. It's long. But I'm pretty sure you'll enjoy it.

@Ecik: I started your set. Ran into a hiccup. I'll send you a PM about it soon.

hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Thu Oct 24, 2024 4:06 pm

Feedback for hentaiAddict12345 on your last set for me:

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10/10

EXCELLENT job!

3.5 hours. 63 edges.

Scene 1: 10/10 (40 min)
Scene 2: 11/10 (1 hr)
Scene 3: 10/10 (40 min)
Scene 4: 8/10 (30 min)

20 min break

Scene 5: 10/10 (20 min; edging frenzy, then orgasm!

)

Average 9.8/10, but ... with the epilogue and the choice of cum pics, I gotta give 10/10. Well done.

I have been on this trajectory where I have been going deeper and deeper into the immersion and role play during sets ... and it has been GREAT!

I ABSOLUTELY love it, but

... I end up dictating voice to text into my phone with my free hand, so ... what I am going to do is repost your set with my comments and dialogue as it goes

... kind of crazy, but ... I am of the opinion that there is no wrong way to play this game—so long as you are enjoying yourself, so ... THIS is the way that I am choosing to play the game, so ... thanks for indulging me with this CRAZY feedback.

It's rough. It was dictated. I don't plan on cleaning it up too to much, because that would take TIME, so ... I'll just leave it pretty rough, but ... I think it will be VERY interesting, and ... 100% it will give you ideas and inspiration on where to go and how to continue.

I have ONE big question that you really MUST answer

... How was it writing the Ardelia and Agatha scenes? How was that for you? One of my goals for you doing that was to build up expectation—is that what happened? I'm pretty sure I saw Edgeslut post the cucking set for you—and I think I recall you enjoying it, but ... did writing that Agatha scene hype you up more?

THAT was one of my intentions—and also to add some more plot and connections and story and stuff, but ... VERY curious to learn whether or not it "enhanced" the experience by building up expectations

...

I'll put the stuff that "I said" in quotations, and then I will hide my thoughts in spoilers

... and I basically said the stuff I did on the picture I wrote it ... only skipped ahead here and there in a few spots ... everything just flowed REALLY well

...

Set

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Fatts, right? I've been meaning to meet up with you for a while now.

"Ardelia ... shit! you put a smile on my face."

Honestly, anything to get away from addict, ugh. All I hear from his is complaints, all the time...

But... ugh, I have to prepare a multi-day tease for him. I really hope he'll hate it and leave me alone forever, I'm so sick of him.

Him and his fucking limp dick, and pathetic stroke-only rules. Makes me sick. But you, Fatts, you might be what I'm looking for.

Spoiler: show: Complain about you while she’s talking to me with a little smile on her face. I like that.

You know, I can be a good and caring mistress for those that want. And I can tell you do, Fatts.

Spoiler: show: It’s just nice when a girl is trying to seduce you.

I like you. A lot. You have a WAY bigger dick than addict. I might even cuck addict with you someday.

"Are you sure? I don’t trust you Ardelia. I know how cruel you can be but your body is so amazing. You’re so fucking gorgeous."

Spoiler: show: Cuck you with me? That got me harder.

Would you like that? Me riding your cock? Moaning, praising you, while throwing insults at addict while he's jerking off on the floor?

Well, Fatts, make me happy, and that might just happen one day. But know that I'm a very demanding girl. A very demanding mistress.

I demand edges from those that can give them to me. But you like that, don't you? A hottie like me making you edge for her?

Keep stroking and edging like that for me, and I might just replace addict with you...

Would you like that? Would you like becoming my toy and letting poor addict with a limp dick in his hands, crying about his lost mistress?

"You’re so fucking hot Ardelia. But I don’t trust you. And I’m not some desperate little stroke slut that’s gonna instantly fall to his knees and worship you just because of how hot you are. I have self-respect. And I’m not sure you’ve earned the right to call me your "toy."

I would love to be your toy… But I don’t know if I’m willing to grant you that power over me. It’s not something that I just give away to anyone who asks. And addict is my friend. And he is crazy about you. He was on the fence. And you used a firm hand and gave him an ultimatum. And that paid off because if you hadn’t done that, he would still be wandering around the outlandrs looking for a mistress and just offering himself to every rando that would give him the time of day ...

But it was you that brought him in—a lost little puppy you found in the gutter. But I wouldn’t want to see you abandon him. Like I said, he’s my friend. I wouldn’t want to do that to him.

I would love to become your toy, but you have to earn that first. And you can be very cruel to him, and he loves that. But I couldn’t abandon him like that."

Show me. Praise my ass. Worship it with your edges.

"Oh Ardelia… I love your ass. It’s so amazing. I want to touch it. I wanna lick it. I wanna grab it and massage it. Fuck I wanna rub my cock in between your ass cheeks."

Spoiler: show: I Edged like three times maybe four times for her ass

Fuck, Fatts. If I wasn't busy enough today, I might just jump on that cock...

"I would let you Ardelia. I would let you fuck me. I would fuck you like a stallion if you wanted it fast and hard, or, I would fuck you as slow as you wanted …"

But... ugh, I still have to prepare that multi-day set for addict. Fuck my life...

Well babe, I'll be seeing you later. Don't go too far *kiss*.

Wait, something to remember me by...

Bye bye~

Spoiler: show: Ardelia is a 10 out of 10 model for me. And that scene was also 10 out of 10.

She called me babe… And I have absolutely no idea how to take that… I’ve read some of the scenes where she was dominating… And she can be incredibly harsh… I’ve seen that side of her… And so I don’t trust her. "Babe" is in term of endearment that you would give to an equal or romantic interest… But I have no idea what her game is here. I’ve been playing this game too long, and often when a mistress tells you one thing and promises you one thing, it’s so that she can catch you in some kind of trap and get you. So I know what Ardia is capable of, and so I’m worried… But at the same time she could be just completely being straight with me… But I still don’t believe it! It feels a little bit like seducing a tigress. You have to be careful and keep your guard up because she could pounce at any time, but I don’t want to be conquered by her … And if anything the seduction process is fun. I’m curious where it’s gonna go from here… And I would be willing to be tested or challenged in order to meet her standards if that’s what she wanted… But I definitely want to keep playing with her and seeing where this goes… And I will submit myself and follow through and obey… But my long-term submission is not automatic. She either has to earn it or win it through trickery… But if she pushes her luck and goes too far then there’s a good chance that that session will be the last one I ever have with her… So I’m curious to see where this goes and what she wants… It’s definitely a dance – – which is always fun.

And it could potentially be a long session with Ardelia showing up in most of the scenes… I would be OK with that whichever junction you would like to try that.

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You're back! Did you miss me that much, babe?

Spoiler: show: Yay Monica! Now here is someone I should be able to just trust and have fun with!

Or did you just miss my ass in your face? *giggles*
"No, I missed you! ... well actually—can it be both?

"

Let me tell you, I was really impressed by your letter to me! So impressed, that I'll let you cum all over my ass later today.

But for now, we must build a really huge load. I want you to cover me in your cum!

And I have a few ideas...

Spoiler: show: Oh, I think I know it’s gonna happen… Monica is going to build up this big fucking load, and then someone’s gonna come in and force me to cum… Oh fuck it’s gonna suck… But I’m gonna love it so much… I’ll have to hold back for her… But it’s gonna be so hard.

Like this pose, babe? Well then, let's make everything way more intense for you today then. Every time you see my ass, my eyes, or a big smile on my face, you have to hold the edge for 2 seconds. Then 4 seconds, then 6, so on. So give me your first 2 second hold now! (Only one counts per image. So it's always 2 seconds increase per image, even if you see all three)

Aww, c'mon babe, don't hold back on me! Get closer!

Good boy, but it will only get harder and harder.

"Oh Monica, your smile is so pretty."

Does your cock twitch when I say that? HARDER? Ohhh, it does~

Well, I did say I want to build a huge load for later, so you must hold back for now, Fatts! For me!

Surely a big boy with an even bigger cock, like you, can hold on for me, can't you?

"Yes, Monica… I wanna hold on for you"

Getting pretty intense by now, huh?

"You’re cruel in the best way… and I love it!"

Well, I'm not going to make it any easier for you, Fatts. I told you, we need to build you up!

Spoiler: show: Just edging for her while I was staring her eyes again again… Oh, the faces I must’ve been making… I hope she thought that I was cute while I was on the edge trying to hold back my cum for her… Just a few strokes from going over while holding for her, but I didn’t again and again and again again.

Don't give up on me now, you're almost at the end...

Spoiler: show: The faces… Hitting the edge over and over… Riding the edge… Saying Monica Monica Monica … the whimpers, the cut off little moans just staring into her beautiful eyes and giving her my full attention. I hope that what I was doing was pleasing to her.

You don't want to disappoint me, do you? Your newfound favourite?

"It’s not just this your smile and your body… It’s the person that you are. You just seem so genuine… And I trust you so completely – – want to trust you so completely! I feel safe to give you everything that you ask and also so appreciated You’re a goddess of femininity I feel so safe and taken care of when I’m with you… And so it makes me just wanna give you more and more improve you that I’m worthy of your affection.

Oh, fuck your eyes! Just looking at those deep brown wells it gets me so hard and weak for you. I just see kindness and acceptance within them. I feel so taken care of and captivated by you

Oh Monica, you’re so pretty… I love your smile. I love it so much."

Alright Fatts, last hold for me, I promise. Make it a REALLY close one! I want to see precum overflowing!

Fuck, I can't wait to scoop that up from my ass and taste it later... But for now, there's someone else who wants to meet you. Have fun, and hold on for me!

"OK, I just have to give you one more edge before you go… You’re an angel and I’m in heaven."

Spoiler: show: I would like to worship other parts of her body too … Or pleasure her and get her off.
And her licking my cum… It’s less about that and being kinky… And more like her accepting my offering and being pleased with it.

Oh, fuck that other shoe is gonna drop and I’m gonna be fucked … it’s going to get me. I have to try to hold on for her… I just hope it’s not Nancy or someone making me choose… I guess we’ll just see but I’m fully expecting to be tied up and forced to cum. It’s gonna be really hard.

But if she’s sweet, she’ll understand and forgive me… But I’m gonna really try hard to hold on for her.

I might even have to close my eyes… And that would suck incredibly… But I would fucking do it…

11 out of 10 scene.

Spoiler: show

Have you heard the news, Fatts? There's a new cuck in town.

Spoiler: show: Good it’s Agatha and she’s happy… If you are smart then this will be more of a rest/break scene… If you’re good with the pacing [And fortunately, it WAS!

Well, two to be exact. There's addict, and then there's edgeslut.

Spoiler: show: It makes me smile to see Agatha smiling and happy. My dick is limp right now after all the fucking edge holding from Monica lol
But Agatha is really fucking hot so it probably won’t take long for me to get hard again lol

But I have a special place in my heart for addict, he was the first to express his desire of being cucked by me. Well, after brian, that is...

"Good! Good for you, Agatha! It’s good to have favorites, and of all of the people that addict wanted to cuck him he chose you… And I think that’s pretty special. And brian‘s been a cuck forever. That doesn’t even mean a thing. brian is a slut. Anyone could offer to cuck him and he gets so weak for them… that doesn't mean anything ... But addict had a lot of different choices and he wanted to you… So no you’re not wrong. It is a special thing.

"

I'm really excited to see addict's reaction to his first cucking session though. I will show him no mercy...

Spoiler: show: Oh, fuck her ass in those thong shorts are amazing. definitely hard now.

Fuck, I can't wait... the anticipation is killing me. He also chose me as a mistress, so that makes things even better...

"I like your nipple piercings Agatha. Your breasts are… Just absolutely perfect… But I like the nipple piercings a lot. What a great way to express yourself!"

You can't believe how excited I am about all this, Fatts. I get to tease a pathetic loser AND enjoy riding a way bigger cock that his while doing it.

"Agatha… Could I edge for your titties, please?"

Sure thing Fatts. If that’s what you want.

"Thanks

"

And I also have you stroking for me right now. Fuck, I really can't resist any longer...

"Oh Agatha, please don’t please don’t… You can fuck me later… And I’m sure that hearing me beg you not to fuck me is a super turn on for you right now… But remember, I’m a switch. If you want, I can fuck you hard like an Alpha later … or I suppose you could just take advantage of me too…"

Ugh, I promised her I wouldn't fuck you, but it is pretty tempting, Fatts...

"But I really really want to save my cum up for Monica… Please please don’t fuck me right now… If it was some other chick that I despised and didn’t like, I would let you take me in a heartbeat… But Monica’s been so sweet and I’ve been so sweet to her and I’ve just not want to disappoint her and if you did this, you would be hurting Monica so if you care about her show Some restraint, please please please."

Do you know how frustrating it is for a girl like me to just have to watch that big... fat... cock... fuck...

"Quit it with your [overinflated] compliments Agatha… My cock is not big—And you know it… You’re just trying to turn me on.
No, my cock is perfectly average. You have fucked bigger cocks in your life, I guarantee it…"

No...no... I can't be the only one getting this horny. EDGE FOR MY ASS, FATTS!!!

Even closer, and hold it for 10 seconds!

Fuck this, I can't resist any longer...

"Fuck… Let me take care of this."

Immediately without hesitating, Fatts gets down on his knees in front of Agatha and starts eating her out. She lets him. She closes her eyes and starts panting as Fatts gets to work with his tongue. She leans get back against the railing. Fatts grabs her legs and lifts them up. It points Agatha's pussy towards him, and he dives in face first.

~~You don't know how much I need you, but we must resist... both of us.~~

If we start fucking, I don't think I'd let you go until morning...

"I want that Agatha… I want that so much…

I could fuck you like a stallion if you wanted. I could let you tie me down on the bed… Just with you holding onto me… There’s no telling how long I could go keep going again and again… if my dick went limp and you were still horny… I’ll take care of you with my tongue… My lips on your pussy lips eating you out till you were tired of cumming …

And after my tongue got tired, I’d Bring out a dildo or vibrator… But I would definitely want to keep going with you until the sun was up over the horizon …"

~~No no no, fuck, breath in, breath out...~~

~~We can't... I'm so sorry, you won't believe how sorry I am, but we can't. Not now...~~

More panting as I continue to eat her out to orgasm.

You can edge for my ass though, I'll allow you that much...

"Oh Agatha, you’re such a tease… You got off and you’re feeling fine—relieved… And What do you do to me? You fucking tease my horny cock."

You love it.

"Yeah, I love it."

I slapped Agatha on the ass.

Fatts... no touching...

"I’m sorry, Agatha… I just can’t help myself. I like the way that it jiggles when I smack it like this."

Slap.

Stop it Fatts you're making me horny again.

Slap

It wiggles so good...

Fatts... I said no touching, keep your hands on that cock...

Slap me one more time and I will take you right here and drain your balls and I’ll tell Monica how you provoke me and all your fault. Is that what you want

Silence.

Good and edge for my ass again Slut.

Can't resist, can you? Well, I hope we meet again, naughty boy...

And thanks for eating me out fats you have a good way of alleviating a horniness problem.

"You’re welcome Agatha…"

I grin at Agatha with a boyish smirk

As Agatha walks away, I look at her with a wild 'I’m gonna get you' look and I pull my hand back with a motion like I’m getting ready to slap her. She gasps with a shocked face and covers both of her ass cheeks with her hands.

I say I want to… But not today. Agatha giggles and smiles then she walks away. She turns back and says

I’m gonna remember that fats! ... And I’m gonna remember how you ate me out too… I owe you one!

Spoiler: show

With Monica, I told her exactly what I was feeling… And I meant every word… I think some guys act smooth and say whatever shit they can to get into a girls pants… But I was being completely vulnerable with Monika … And there’s no way that she could look into my eyes and the expressions that I was making in my face [while holding the edge] while I was saying what I was saying to her… She would’ve believed it and taken me to be sincere because that’s how I meant it … You’re not a woman, So it’s probably hard for you to gauge… I’ve never actually had long-term steady girlfriend… But I would hope that pretend fantasy Monica would’ve gotten super wet with all of my smooth talking

…

Spoiler: show: I thought "goddess of femininity" was pretty good, and yes, I came up with that in the moment.

my dick is average. My edging stamina is mediocre. I don’t really do busting… I’ve often wondered what it was that I could do that was unique something that I could do to bring to the girls to make them actually want me and have a reason for that… Play with me… Maybe not my superpower… But I’ve never actually written in role-play dictating shit while I was playing… Well, I mean, I guess I started that recently but now I guess it’s gotten out of hand and more and more… I don’t know. What I imagined in my mind just now with Agatha… it felt pretty awesome and realistic… And for a moment, it felt like I had the Riz

Fuck… I’m two hours and 20 minutes in and only halfway through the set… Fuck…

Spoiler: show

Hey there, babe. Name's Carli Banks.

I'm here to make your life just a liiiiitle bit harder~

"Fuck Carly no… But all right… I’m game. You’re cute and you seem really fun so… All right, let’s play. But promise to take it a little easy on me OK. I promised my orgasm to someone else and you’re just a cute Rando, but I owe it to her so… Play fair. Got it?"

You're almost there, the grand finale, would be a shame if you ruined it now, pet.

"Oh, so I’m your "pet" now am I

… I’m picking up what you're laying down

...

Such... a... shame.

You really ought to stop staring, or else...

"Carly… Watch it! You be careful now… You’re super fucking hot and you’re not gonna make this easy for me… But if you cheat… I will back out… Keep things fair I promise I will try…"

Spoiler: show: Her smile is CRAZY cute!

I'll give you something to stare to...

I shake my head and avoid looking at her ass. [Edges skipped for this pic]

Is it getting so difficult to hold back, pet? You could always ruin it over my ass, I wouldn't tell...

"Yes, yes you would."

She's playing dirty shaking her ass in my face. I can't look away. I have to edge.

I'm sorry, pet, no full orgasms in my presence. I love watching boys suffer.

"Well, if that’s the case Carly… This is probably the last time we’ll be seeing each other then."

Are you feeling conflicted? Tell you what, if you ruin it for me, I'll let you go on. I won't even tell anyone.

"Fat chance of that happening, Carly, you are super hot and I would love to cum for you… Your eyes and smile are just fantastic… But no fucking way… You would have to literally tie me down and force me to cum … I’ve got a goddess who I promised my load to… And it is not for you, sweetie"

So? What do you say, pet? A tiny ruin for your goddess?

"Getting ruins out of Fatts Dynamo is NOT a privilege you have earned, lady

…"

Want some extra motivation, pet? Say no more...

"You can flash your ass and bat your eyes and play dirty and you might be able to force a couple of edges out of me… But I am not gonna ruin for you—no ma’am.

If you let my dick get a taste of your sweet, sweet pussy – – only then would I pull out and ruin for you… But I think that’s the best deal you could possibly hope for from me, Carly… So take it or leave it—Just not today."

Still need more? Well, last chance...

"Your pussy is so fucking hot Carly. I want it so bad… But just not today."

Still nothing, huh? Well, you must really crave that full orgasm, pet. Very well...

I stroke my dick really hard, hit the edge and hold it.

"One…"

I squeeze out a big drop of precum. I give it a lick.

"just one drop is all you get … no ruins for you, sweetheart.

It’s not about the full orgasm Carly… I gave my word to Monica"

"Oh, fuck you like ass stuff that’s so hot."

You didn’t make this easy for me Carly… I will give you that.

Just shut up and edge edge slot.

"My dick is limp right now. I thought it was gonna be a drop of cum … That’s why I had to taste it… Just to see…

I had a failed orgasm. It’s like a ruin that’s not even a ruin because nothing comes out… It may be for a drop but not even a dribble. That’s how much control I have over my dick Carly. It’s gonna take more than just a few tricks to get the better of me, miss ... no ruin for you. I am saving my cum for Monica.

You still owe me two edges

"Yeah, yeah I do."

Carly just keeps smiling at me and fingering herself. She sees that I wasn’t lying. My dick really is limp. She’s just got a grin on her face while she’s fingering her holes smiling at me knowing that I’m stuck here and she’s in control teasing me. I glance over at her feet a few times then back to her ass. she has a hot look in her eyes and then her grin is even bigger. She starts stroking my dick off with her feet. It starts to get hard again.

Look what I found.

My dick is getting hard between her feet and I said "that’s enough" and I took my cock back.

"You haven’t earned that privilege yet… Before I let you use your feet… You’re gonna have to rethink your policy on full orgasms “in your presence“"

Shut up and edge for my holes bitch and then you gotta still edge while looking in my eyes. it’s in your rules so you gotta do it.

"Quoting my rules… What a great way to gain the upper hand by losing the moral high…"

Fuck you.

I stroke for a while longer slowly Carly‘s getting a patient.

You fucking get your edges done in the next two minutes, or else I am going to do something that you are not going to like.

I stroke a lot faster to the edge quickly while staring at her holes.

Then I look her in the eyes and edge my obligatory eye contact edge. Carly has a very smug look on her face.

Wow, you got them both done and less than a minute… Who has the upper hand now bitch?

"But I mean it though, Carly… You let me fuck your pussy, and scout's honor, I will pull out and ruin for you."

She thinks about it.

Just fucking get out of here and I am not letting edge for my pussy.

Good luck on your finale...

She leaves.

Spoiler: show: Eight out of 10 scene… My dick is so tired… I’ve been playing this set for three hours. All those freaking edge holds and scenes who killed me… I am past the window or I can have a super orgasm… That’s what I call it anyway.

Occasionally… I’ll hit the spot in a set where I’m really fucking warmed up usually around the 30 to 40 edges marked… And the pacing is good, and the teasing and dialogue is excellent… I can just get to this spot where my stamina is still good, And I am super warmed up from all the edging, and my dick can still just get incredibly hard and excited like crazy super hard and if I come right then… It’s fucking amazing. But it doesn’t happen all the time I need like a certain set of conditions… And usually what happens is that window passes in the curls chest edge my dick into oblivion… And it’s great… But I missed the window for the super chasm lol

But it’s not something that can just happen on command. Like I said, it’s a certain set of conditions, and I can just feel it and know when it’s there based on my massive amount of experience masturbating and knowing my body lol

I thought about having Nancy at a special role into my rules. Just allow me to come when I get to that point… But I never did. It felt a little too heavy-handed and the long ass edge holding scene with Monica was fucking amazing… It felt so good to just be on the edge for her and giving her everything… And the edge holding like went slow and I was able to ramp up to an actually able to keep going completely and my dick didn’t Peter out completely, but it was too much of a long burn so I never got there… Usually it has to be like fast, rapid edging, and pretty intense action… But don’t get me wrong that edge for Monica was glorious, and I loved it… Absolutely…

But I’m actually quite disciplined and really go hard on trying to obey. Listen the girls… Unless something goes really sideways and the set is really bombing my role-play sensibilities kick in and I have to divert the story.

Spoiler: show: Fatts! You made it!

"Yes… Yes, I did. it was a complete heroes journey full of challenges and perils, but I braved it all in order to reach you, my dear. "

Remember this place? This is where we met the first time!

"You seem to like trees. Are you a nature goddess? Do you prefer the outdoors? I don’t mind fucking naked in the woods with the wind on my skin and the sun of my back as long as I’m with you "

And this is where you saw my wonderful ass the first time...

"I know we’re doing ass today… But next time, you could have me come wherever you like… I would just love to come while looking into your eyes… So that you could see my face and all the pleasure that I have that you draw out of me… of course you could just tease me and have me come for your ass or your boobies maybe even your feet and just deny your eyes… But I’m definitely excited about coming for your ass today. I want that, but I think even more coming from your eyes deeply into them… But you’re in command my goddess… I can only offer requests for to decide."

No edge-holding this time, just enjoy yourself. Edge however many times as you want for me.

"Oh, I want."

I really want this orgasm to be one you'll remember for a long time...

"Thank you goddess"

You've been teased a lot today, I know. Trust me, you're almost at the end.

"I trust you. I trust you so much, Monica."

But, as I told you, we must get a huge load out of you...

Sorry not sorry, babe, you'll have to endure! *giggle*

I love my pussy. Do you love it too?

Someone down there definitely loves it...

Alright Fatts, I've teased you enough. You'll get a choice between two poses to cum to.

Pose nr 1:

Pose nr 2:

Make your choice and cum for me, Fatts!

I cum for pose two. I think it's the better ass shot.

"Thank you, Monica.

What do you think? I think we did pretty good…"

It’s a long thick load of cum. It’s slowly slides down and under her pussy she holds the position.

"I love you, Monica. You’re amazing and fantastic."

I go in for a kiss and slip her a lot of tongue. She accepts it, but playfully attacks back at my tongue with hers. I start to pull my head away to finish the kiss, but she grabs the back of my head and pulls me back into her Face and now she slips her tongue into my mouth. I don’t attack back. I close my eyes and enjoy it. After a few seconds, her tongue retreats, and she pulls back away.

Spoiler: show: No stroking/edging for this section, this is more of an epilogue

Wow, Fatts! That was amazing!

"I could watch that water Cascade down your goddess body all day."

Sorry, I started cleaning before you got here. You might still see some of your cum on my ass from before...

That load was huge... thank you so much!

"No Monica the pleasure was all mine."

I really hope to see you again soon...

But for now, we must each go on with our own lives... Cya soon, I hope!

*kiss*

As I walk out of her cabin in the woods, I text her: "I hope it was as good for you as it was for me. I’m sure I’ll see you again soon. At least in my dreams if nothing else… You are a joy to be with Monika Dee."

9.8 But with the epilogue and the choice of cum picks, I have to round it up to 10.

I LOVED that you listened to my feedback and added an epilogue, and also the edge hold on Agatha's ass ... NICE.

LOVED the Ardelia scene ... VERY curious to see more of her and figure out if she has an angle or what ... because she is trying to seduce me, but ... I have SEEN how cruel she can be with you (from Edgeslut's writing), and I DO NOT trust her.

... but she's a perfect 10, and she's interested in me, and at least seems eager to seduce me, so ... I'm not a dweeb.

I will play the game ... CAUTIOUSLY

Monika Dee scene was 11/10. I REALLY loved the edge holding ... it ramped up nice, and once I got there, they were short enough that I could keep hitting them, but ... yeah, that whole scene was about an hour.

I was slightly confused at the wording of your rules, so ... I just played it conservatively. I edged for each of eyes, ass, AND smile, and held EACH ONE, and then basically, the minimum edge time went up by 2 seconds for each pic, with each extra edge on the same pick getting 2 more seconds.

I LOVED it. Also it was a lot.

Also, I just added to the scene with my own imagination, and being with a sweet and kind HOT GIRL who also wanted to be with me ... SO amazing

...

I am GOOD with short sets. I am CERTAIN that this one went WAY LONGER than you intended, but ... I was VERY immersed—and added to it with my OWN imagination.

WHich is QUITE strong.

But ALL of the characters and dialogue and personalities ... they ALL felt VERY real and believable to me, so ... VERY WELL DONE addict!

FULLY deserving of the 10/10.

But it WAS long—which was fine—and I LOVED it

... you got to see my imagination on FULL display—and I LOVED it ... and NOW I am SO MUCH more invested in EACH girl and seeing how they react and come back at me next time, but ... you can ALSO send me shorter sets, OR ... divide a "normal set" into a number of parts.

I am not Edgeslut who requires a large set and 200 edges to be happy. I can make a single scene last 20-40 minutes.

SO ... instead of one set with 4 scenes, consider 2-3 mini sets and post them as a single set. Either 2 scenes and 2 scenes (and I cum at the end of each section

) or 1 scene, 1 scene, and 2 scenes (and I cum at the end of each "mini set") ... just in the "before set" instructions, state which sections can be played "stand alone" and label them

...

It's an OPTION, and obviously, THIS SET was one long "adventure"/session, but ... I am good with shorter sets ... but you can send the same number of scenes, just make them playable in smaller chunks—if you like.

You know it’s funny… The girls are basically all friends all the time… So why can’t we boys be friends too? I *liked* how I was defending you to AGatha, haha ...

That’s one of the reasons Nancy loves the drama so much… Because most of the sets are just so predictable and the girls never have beefs with each other and they’re all best friends… Which is 100% 1,000% completely unrealistic, lol. Girls get Catty and have beef and drama and competition all the time… So it’s just kind of funny that we never really do anything with that… Not entirely true tho. I know that helequinn when he would be writing his many different complicated characters and story arcs and stuff… Hundred percent the girls would get into issues with each other and, obviously that they would usually end up taking out of the boys, lol… But you gotta be down for the soap opera and be into the characters for all of that stuff to really be fun and interesting and add extra depth and an element to it… But I always try to add some extra conflict wherever I can Makes it more fun and interesting and gives opportunity for some pretty crazy twists

I LOVED the long edge holding with Monika, but ... definitely don't want it to become "her thing" ... DEFINITELY want to try out some other stuff with her (edging for other body parts. Eating her out.) ... I am TOTALLY crushing on her.

She can be assertive and give me commands. That is fine. Sometimes love making requires decisiveness and giving orders!

I LOVED that I ate Agatha out.

She was going off about being horny ... *I* couldn't cum, so ... she was getting desperate, and I WANTED to do her a solid.

She can take me up on ANYTHING I offered.

I LOVE getting tied up.

I THOUGHT FOR SURE I was gonna get forcibly vibed and probably end up failing Monika!

$:\'-($ But fortunately THAT did not happen. But please please PLEASE do another vibe scene/section or mini set ... with someone BAD

OR good.

A "cum in time" or "avoid cumming" are both fun challenges. Use videos for those, and then a consequence is good ... but just the pictures you did was AMAZING the last time!

Both Ardelia AND Monika ONLY have solo female galleries—NOT EVEN LESBIANS!

Plenty of girls don't do hardcore, but ... even then, MOST of them do lesbian stuff (like Guerlain) ... and then Nancy only uses her boyfriend for hardcore and same with Caprice, but ... I think you can still write sex scenes with Ardelia and Monika—even though there is no hardcore POV (though if you can happen to find some that would be AMAZING!

) But ... I would just make use of certain close up shots and poses and I can just pretend she is riding me or I am inserting into her spread pussy ...

A shot like this...

Spoiler: show: You can say she is on top of me, bouncing up and down ... (obviously, reverse cowgirl is my favorite position )

"Take me from behind!"

And then put in italics what I am doing or tell me I am free to imagine

"Give it to me, Fatts!"

You thrust into Monika's dripping pussy again and again.

You get the idea ...

Carli Banks.

THERE was some friction there, huh?

I added my own dialogue to the drama—kind of altering the scene a bit in my head, but ... her and I were DEFINITELY butting heads, lol!

I made her that offer—I will ONLY ruin for her if I can put my dick in her pussy, but ... other than that, I won't ruin for her ...

I was enjoying the "battle of wills." If she has a counter proposal or a challenge, I will NOT just "automatically be accepting it", so ... if it is something interesting or spicy and you aren't sure I would go with it like some big wager or bet or deal or trade, just PM me ahead of time so I can accept or reject before you put in a bunch of work, but ... that would ONLY be for something I might say "no" to ... she could ALSO just be mad at me and find some other way to get back at me—I don't know ... but her scene was fun, and I enjoyed the sexual tension ... and then that was just overt conflict as opposed to Ardelia which is more intrigue and COULD be plotting something or NOT

... but VERY curious to see Carli again ... I feel like she wants to "win" over me in some way but I DON'T wanting her beating me in ANY way, so ... VERY interesting "battle of wills" there.

Would LOVE to play with her again.

I loved the "edge freely" at the end. Monika was just perfect as usual in the final scene.

I used the free edges to REALLY work myself up, and ... yeah, it was a pretty big load.

I think being like 16 edges in 20 minutes, so ... yeah, that was a pretty good pace.

Can't wait to spend more time with Monika and see what else she can think up to tease me.

I hope she is even more into me than she was before.

I need to focus on writing sets for brian for the next several days, but ... Like I said—I *do* enjoy "short!"

It is OFTEN my favorite length of set!

But this was fantastic. Thank you SO MUCH, addict!

I hope reading all of my feedback and responses was fun and has only given you MORE IDEAS with which to further the narrative.

hentaiAddict12345 · Post by **hentaiAddict12345** » Sun Oct 27, 2024 12:25 pm

@Fatts Feedback on Feedback

Spoiler: show: Glad I finally did something right

Writing that feedback probably took you longer than it took me to write the set

I have ONE big question that you really MUST answer ... How was it writing the Ardelia and Agatha scenes? How was that for you? One of my goals for you doing that was to build up expectation—is that what happened? I'm pretty sure I saw Edgeslut post the cucking set for you—and I think I recall you enjoying it, but ... did writing that Agatha scene hype you up more? THAT was one of my intentions—and also to add some more plot and connections and story and stuff, but ... VERY curious to learn whether or not it "enhanced" the experience by building up expectations ...
You know me already, I'm a big humiliation junkie, so I liked writing those scenes

FattsDynamo · Post by **FattsDynamo** » Sun Oct 27, 2024 8:15 pm

hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Sun Oct 27, 2024 12:25 pm

@addict:

Also thoughts on set writing, efficiency, and immersion that might be interesting for others to read ...

Spoiler: show

Writing that feedback probably took you longer than it took me to write the set

Well, I did something a little bit different from what I normally used to do in the past, which is dictate my responses DURING the set

...

The set DID legitimately take 3.5 hours to play (with the break), and so the vast majority of the feedback that I "wrote", was done DURING the set (including most of the post scene reflections ... a few minutes break to gather my thoughts after each scene), but ... yes. After I finished playing it, I immediately quoted your set, then got to cutting and pasting, and with the additional things I wrote, yeah ... it probably took longer.

But I think you are playing the game as it is "supposed to be" played.

"Standard sets", in my mind, are 4 scenes. That's long enough and with enough variety to be satisfying to play, and a set like that SHOULD take about an hour or two to make

... Now, obviously, this set was 5 scenes and 6 with the epilogue, so ... probably a bit longer than a "standard set", but ... I would say it was VERY efficient, in that, the amount of time you spent writing (and planning and finding galleries) was probably about the same amount of time that I spent playing—and quite possibly less. Whereas, that epic set I sent you was HIGHLY inefficient. For every hour of play time, I spent 5-8 in set construction

...

And there isn't necessarily anything "wrong" with that. I had a VERY good time making it!

But those parts where I had multiple spoilers for a single pic—there was so much coming at you, that you didn't have time to get bored

... And you had ONE picture where Monika gave me some detailed instructions, but ... I OFTEN broke up the normal flow of rules with special stroking instructions with Nancy: "Don't touch" "Stroke slow" "Look into my eyes" "DON'T look into my eyes" "Put your hands on your head and count backwards from 30" ... and EVERY SINGLE TIME you include something like that, you are adding value to the set, making it more immersive and engaging ... every time the girl makes you do something out of the ordinary with special instructions, it makes it FEEL like more of an interaction (as opposed to solo masturbating in front of a screen) ... and so it builds up more engagement and anticipation ...

... but it takes time. It has diminishing returns ... and so, I think SMART writing is taking advantage of all of the low hanging fruit. A choice of cum pics is HUGE and takes VERY little effort to add. Special instructions for a "wow pic" ... and that ONE idea for a rules modification for the Monika scene was great and the highlight of the set

... I am a BIG fan of doing EASY things that HUGELY increase impact.

But you mentioned that you LOVED how much Nancy hated you, but ... THAT was achieved through dialogue, and those little moments when I would add *story* and details and "set the scene" through description ... There isn't any stroking value added with that stuff, but ... it CAN add to immersion and make a set TRULY memorable.

I thought about giving your set an 11 or 12 out of ten, but ... THEN I realized those extra numbers were coming from MY effort and MY work and MY imagination.

The set was good. SUPER solid. EXACTLY what I wanted.

VERY deserving of a 10/10

... and the EXPERIENCE was probably an 11 or 12 out of ten ... but that value added was ME adding TO your set—and not something inherent that you did ... you set the stage, but ... *I* was ALLOWING MYSELF to get immersed ... I was actively participating in the fantasy and allowing myself to be seduced—adding quite a lot of details to the things which you wrote, which ... I have a VERY strong imagination, so ... I can do that. Most people probably can't, and so ... I can play YOUR 10 out of 10 set and then REALLY throw myself into it and get a 12/10 experience ... but, for me to give YOU that 12/10 experience, I HAVE TO FEED YOU EVERYTHING ... which I know the sorts of things required to improve immersion and engagement—and they all take time.

But I wanted to give you that experience AND write a story that was REALLY COOL and FUN to write!

And so I achieved ALL of those goals, so ... I didn't mind "writing so efficiently" to provide that experience ... and I HOPE that I achieved my goal of crafting something which was "fully immersive" that didn't require very much effort on the part of the player to experience that

...

At a certain point later this week or next, I will try to write you a couple of "lightning sets", where I knock out 4 scenes in an hour or 2. Often, when I REALLY get into writing and thinking things through with the character, it takes an hour per scene ... and THEN if I add story and descriptions and go hog wild with special instructions and spoilers, it can take 2 hours for 1 scene ... But I want to bust out a few "low effort sets"—JUST to prove that I can and ALSO to see how you like them.

Then, I'll write you one of my "standard effort sets" which typically takes around 8 hours, lol, and I will be VERY curious to see from your perspective how they compare

...

BUT ... as I am sure you will recall from the epic set, "Nancy" accused you of "not trying very hard" to get immersed during sets and letting EVERY little thing "pull you out"

... but I want to say that you have "improved" on this aspect—which is great!

You will get a LOT MORE ENJOYMENT from sets if you actively choose to participate in the fantasy.

And again—no surprise (with my overabundance of effort

)—I just demonstrated HOW WELL that can go when you REALLY ramp that effort up to 11, lol!

You know me already, I'm a big humiliation junkie, so I liked writing those scenes

And the anticipation and suspense and "participating in the fantasy" all help, too ...

I wrote all that shit in the feedback version of the set, 1) because it was fun, but 2) because I wanted to develop the narrative. I wanted to make it more interactive instead of SIMPLY you sending me stuff, and so I chose to participate and collaborate in that creative process ... and I hope that I see ALL of those girls again, because now their characters are more interesting because they are getting more fleshed out, but ALSO I am more invested in the story and what happens next ... and that is largely because I chose to participate

...

... I hope this is all making sense ...

And lastly, I failed to mention it earlier ... The main reason the Carli scene got an 8 out of 10 for me, is because that particular offer/temptation doesn't really work on me.

I have VERY good self control. I usually accomplish the things I set my mind to

... I wasn't "so desperate to cum" that "I would even take a ruin right now" to "alleviate the arousal"

... because at THAT point, the set had gotten VERY long. I kept falling off due to fatigue, and so, my dick would OFTEN be limp, and so, in those moments, I am not "desperate to cum."

And ANOTHER big aspect to that, is if I ruin, I start the process of "emptying my balls", and so the full orgasm later will NOT be as full or forceful or good, so ... taking the ruin NOW lessens the payoff later ... PLUS ... there was no way in HECK that SHE was going to "keep that to herself."

AND I had promised my load to Monika, so ... OFTEN people will write branching paths and options—to make a set more immersive ... but those take SO MUCH TIME to write!

So, you did yourself a favor by correctly assuming that I would NOT take her up on her offer, lol!

For SOME guys, they get SO DESPERATE to cum, that they lose self control, and so for OTHER PEOPLE, Carli's off MIGHT have been VERY tempting

... but just not for me.

And of course, I added a LOT to the scene with my banter and quips back at her, so ... for me, the EXPERIENCE of the scene was 11/10. I had a BLAST telling her off and imagining her getting all pissed at me

... but that attempt/offer just held zero temptation for me.

If it was "ruin for Karli" or "denial by Monika" THAT would have been a choice (One that if I recall correctly Noah put me through, and then Nancy yelled at him a LOT over it later, lol, for putting me in that position

), but ... I don't do denial—and don't even bring it up in my sets

—so ... moot point ...

IF it had been Monika offering me a "free ruin" like three quarters of the way through her edge holding scene ... I was SUPER worked up.

That whole scene was just AMAZING!

... and in THAT moment, I MIGHT have been desperate enough to take that offer—but then I would have "had permission" and I STILL would have gotten my full at the end, so ... sort of like taking a deal for an orgasm and a half—which isn't bad.

And with "no strings attached"—no consequences—DECENT chance that I might have taken it ... although ... with something like that, you have to have the girl say the scene ends the moment I take the ruin, so ... THEN the stroker keeps pushing himself further, because he WANTS to be teased, and so he will often persevere until the last moment to extend the experience ... but of course, Monika is nice and NOT cruel, and so ... why not just give TWO full orgasms?

I'm capable of that anyway, and OFTEN "1 is not enough" ... I mean ... I ended up reading and stroking through my feedback set again before I went to bed, and I ended up cumming for one of Monika's ass pics in scene 2, so ... obviously I had a break, but ... yeah, if I get worked up, usually one orgasm is NOT enough for me. I'm a cum slut.

Girls offer me full orgasms, and I basically just always take them

... and even after I have cum twice, 15 or 20 minutes later—I just want to cum again.

Sometimes it is just MINUTES after a full orgasm and I'm like "I would REALLY like another

..."

As for Karli, I 100% want to see her again, if anything to "get her reaction" after YOU have had a chance to respond ... BUT ... if she REALLY wants me to ruin for her, I think there are a few ways to make that happen:

Take me up on my offer to have sex with her. My dick goes in her pussy (for as long as I want, NOT two seconds, until either SHE is cumming or I am about to )—she is SO HOT and that is SUCH a privilege—I would GLADLY "trade a ruin" for that experience. ... but, of course, that is my sigma self exercising power and getting MY way, being a rebel and pushing back against the girls and NOT just getting bossed around like a subservient beta.
She ties me down and forces one out of me. (I would let her do this, because I just LOVE getting tied up.) Generally, ruins don't work well when I am bound. My favorite is hands AND legs tied while watching a long video, and so ... I really can't turn the vibe off "when the moment comes" ... and plus, I am usually either trying to hold off the orgasm OR cum with less stimulation. However, if it was NOT a video—but pictures instead—and my hands were free to do the scrolling and keep track of timers ... I could ALSO turn off the vibe and ruin myself ... never really done that before (because I am a cum slut who prefers FULL orgasms to ruins), but ... COULD be an option.
A third would be, as much as I love edging, HUGE AMOUNTS of edging BOTH excite me AND fill me with dread , so ... If she game me a choice, "Either ruin for me now, OR, I will edge you 30 times before sending you off to the next girl ..." that is a REAL threat, and 100% I would be put in a TOUGH position ... because as much as I don't like ruins, I ALSO don't like TONS of edging—although I do —but ... just the THOUGHT of having to go through that much edging before I could receive release ... THAT would be a "true decision" for me ... do I "let Carli win" and give her the ruin she wants ... OR ... do I have to suffer a LOT more before getting to the end ... and doing the ruin would forgo the edging ... because cum slut just wants to cum, although ... cumming BIG is better than cumming small and you can ONLY cum big after LOTS of edging—which Monika knows ... but ... if she wanted to big me LOTS of orgasms sometimes, and then BIG ones from lots of build up at OTHER times ... I think THAT would be the "happy middle ground."

And there is a simple technique for getting pics without having to post them. Use scrolller.com:

www.scrolller.com/r/carlibanks

And MOST porn actresses have a dedicated subreddit. Just google the mode's name along with reddit in the search query. Then, type in the scrolller.com address with the "/r" followed by the subreddits name. "Infinite pics" of the model.

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www.scrolller.com/r/carlibanks

So ... if Karli wanted to make that threat, then you just say if I refuse to ruin, I have to edge for her 30 times and then provide the scrolller.com link.

But keep in mind that ~80 edges is my upper limit, and basically any set with that many edges will take me 4 hours—at least that is how long they usually take

... and so, you would have to plan for that, but ... these are just ideas, and only if Karli is interested in getting me to ruin for her. She can either take my offer, provide a counter offer, or use some sort of trickery, challenge, rigged game, or dirty trick, but ... I'm sure you'll have fun with it, and VERY CURIOUS to see how Karli responds.

FattsDynamo · Post by **FattsDynamo** » Mon Oct 28, 2024 9:34 am

Ecik17 wrote: Mon Oct 14, 2024 5:59 pm

Feedback on the Halloween 2024 Everyone Set:

Spoiler: show: It was fun! I think 5 edges, then 7 for the twerk video, then two more ... and then 24 for the Caprice vid! Nancy kept telling me to "edge more" ...

I had actually been watching that vid QUITE A LOT last month, lol! You know me SO WELL, my man.

But one part of the video I HADN'T seen was the ending! Because I could never really make it much further than 3-4 minutes BEFORE CUMMING! So thanks for that!

I LOVED the idea of no "tricky shit"—because I often HATE those kinds of surprises that unexpectedly mess with stuff. And so the idea of Nancy being annoyed at the witches—TOTALLY made sense ... she would EITHER hate them and be pissed, OR ... she would be out there trying to OUTDO THEM ALL! ... BOTH were equally possible, but DEFINITELY no middle ground, haha ... and so her getting grumpy about the witches and deciding we should just stay inside—I LOVED THAT.

The only part I DIDN'T like was that I DIDN'T get to cum for Nancy. $:\'-($ I told her, "I don't want to cum for Caprice, I want to cum for YOU!"

I played this as a "flashback set"—BEFORE recent events ... I had asked addict to write me some sets where Nancy was in the alternate universe. I wanted her to use the opportunity to "test me" and "test my loyalty" to see if she should in fact "take me back" ... she was feeling kind of neglected after all of my time with Uma and Lana, and ... pretending to be that rejected Nancy "taking me back" ... she wanted to turn the screws on me a bit and "fight for her", but ... addict didn't feel comfortable juggling all of those narrative knives, so ... he took a pass—which was understandable ...

And so *I* "took it upon myself" to give MYSELF a challenge. I watched THIS video:

https://la.spankbang.com/77ydu/video/th ... +challenge

I had to ONLY stare at the Nancy Ace side ... which was REALLY hard, because a BUNCH of my favorites like Guerlain (Lily Chey) and Melena were shaking their asses on the right side of the screen, but ... I managed to ONLY glance over at the right side VERY briefly 4 times ... and of COURSE Nancy wanted to tease me and abuse me and "test me" and make me suffer, so ... I watched the video tied (arms and legs) with the vibe on the LOWEST setting, and ... I had to stare at Nancy Ace's slow and SIMPLE teasing for 20 minutes (on VERY low) while NOT being able to glance over at all of the action that was going on RIGHT BESIDE ... and it PLEASED Nancy to "test me", and she thought I did a VERY good job ... and she let me cum pretty hard at the end.

Which ... whenever I would free stroke on MY TIME for that vid ... I would ALWAYS just stare at the right hand side ... and it was SO much action with a rotating cast of like 10 girls doing ALL KINDS of crazy stuff, so ... USUALLY my eyes would end up there and I would cum before the 5 minute mark, but ... Nancy "tested me", and ... she was happy with the outcome ... I "passed." I suffered for her, and did a good job of focusing ONLY on her while there was SO MUCH ELSE happening ... and I rejected the temptation in favor of her, so ... she was glad.

And we can say that this happened BEFORE the current events, but ... anyway ... just had to report on THAT ...

... and ALSO, while I LOVED the premise, and EVEN the LITTLE BIT of Nancy dialogue you wrote was PERFECT Ecik, I mean ... it REALLY felt like her to me.

But, anyway ... I was a LITTLE sad I didn't get cursed by witches. Some kind of curse where I have to cum 5 times within 5 hours with various galleries and videos assigned in order to "break the curse" ... that would have been AMAZING! But I am already asking for too much, so ... ... don't worry about it.

But I guess I am just nostalgic for the VERY FIRST Halloween 2022 set of yours that I played ... hey ... I don't think I ever played 2023 ... I'll have to go back and check to see if I did ... still a few more days before Halloween—I could get it in in time

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@everyone: Well, I was ON TRACK to write a 4 scene set in 2 hours ... and THEN I got to the last scene and started writing QUALITY dialogue—which took it to 2.5 hours production time ... and THEN I started adding a story, and NOW I am over THREE!

I was SO DETERMINED to write a set in AS LITTLE TIME AS POSSIBLE ... I've been going ON and ON about taking SO MANY hours to write just ONE SET ... Wanted to prove to myself that I could still be fast, but ... oh well

...

@addict: I do plan on writing you one more quality set before I go, but ... ALSO I want to write you AT LEAST 2-3 FAST sets, so ... just wanted to let you know that.

Ecik17 wrote: Tue Oct 08, 2024 3:30 pm

Got a set here for Ecik!

#Ecik17set
#wbFattsDynamo

Read my long ass PM first before playing this set.

I wanted to continue our story some and give you something back—since I asked you for some stuff, lol

... Reply to the PM with a PM, but ... any "next set" you write can be posted here.

The Set:

Spoiler: show

"FFFffffpp!"

Spoiler: show

One of Nancy's familiar portals appears next to you.

"Get in, Ecik ... if you have the time, which ... I KNOW you do, because you're lurking around here ... Well, if you have time to lean, then you have TIME TO CLEAN! And by "clean" I mean "help me with this mess I made ..."

After a moment, you decide to walk through the portal.

"Thanks ..."

Spoiler: show: You're in the basement of the Lust BnB, in Asa Akira's lab specifically. You haven't been down here since the rennovations. The place looks good.

You look over and see Asa Akira, who appears to be frozen in place.

Nancy: She kept bothering me ... "Why do you need to use the machine?" "What do you mean that you need to see Fatts right now? Can't it wait?" "We're in the middle of an experiment ..." "Just trust the process and believe in science!" "I was in the process of getting him back ..." "Just be patient!" "Quit touching my laboratory equipment!" "Wait! What are you doing to the flux capacitor!?"

SO annoying ...

Nancy's face is red and puffy. It looks like she has been crying.

Fatts is gone—AGAIN ... I would crack a joke, but ... it's actually not very funny, and ... I mean ... what do we REALLY expect when we decide to use science fiction and portals and teleportation and black holes and alternate realities, again and again and AGAIN ...

... it's like ... you don't get surprised when your car breaks down and you need a tow ... sigh ... Except when that happens for US, it's just always my boyfriend is missing—lost on some OTHER plane of existence ...

Alright, so ... I have JUST ABOUT gotten it figured out—the Edgeaton 3000 that is ... the only problem is that I cannot be in two places at once, so ... I can't be here and operate the machine AND use it on myself ...

... so that is where YOU come in.

The machine is currently set for Fatts, but ... if I can change the settings and figure out how to optimize it for someone else, THEN I will be able to rejigger it for myself ...

... so you'll be my guinea pig—AGAIN ...

It's your favorite, right? I mean ... it almost always ends well for you—right!? I mean ... you'll get to stroke and shit ...

YES, Ecik ... I HAVE been crying $:\'-($ ... and NO—I do NOT want to talk about it right now ... I just want to find my boyfriend ...

I thought he was being cold and distant and that we were growing apart, but ... it turns out he was missing me as much as I was missing him ... and the MOMENT we start to clear the air and get our shit STARTED to get sorted out, he's ripped away from me—AGAIN ...

I'm SO TIRED of it, Ecik ... I am just SO tired ... I'm ready to be done, but ... you've known that for a while, haven't you?

... but you and I will talk about this LATER ... for NOW, let's find Fatts ...

Happy faces! Happy stroking! EVERYTHING will turn out how it's supposed to: GOOD ... now just step into the Edgeaton 3000 and let's get moving ...

You step into the Edgeaton 3000 ...

Spoiler: show: Hey, look! JUST what I needed ... I'm a horny girl, and YOU like look a boy who likes to stroke his COCK!

"Hmmm ... skinny chick ... Probably an old, unregistered favorite of Fatts ... says here she's "Avri" ..."

Hi! I'm Avri! Follow me if you want to have some FUN!

"Oh, okay ... skinny chick ... but she has some NICE, big, FLOPPY titties ... It looks like we are zeroing in more on YOUR preferences already ..."

I just went for my run, so ... Now I am going to cool down with some stretches and yoga ...

It's important to stretch after doing aerobic exercise ...

It helps to get the blood flowing EVERYWHERE ...

... like in YOUR case, you have a LOT of blood flowing to your penis ... SO be sure to stretch it out REALLY GOOD—okay!

You like how my titties hang down? If you do, increase your metronome by 30 BPM ...

They look great hanging down, but ... MUCH less so when laying flat , but ... maybe you like that ANYway?

Hanging down AGAIN ... but upside down! 10 strokes for me as fast as you can!

Hmmm ... I need to take a break for a moment, but ... I don't want YOU to ... YOU should speed up, say ... by 20 bpm! I just REALLY like to watch you stroke, so ... go ahead and DOUBLE YOUR STROKES for me while I watch ... [Just this pic only]

Mmmm ... I'm getting REALLY horny ... all this blood rushing EVERYWHERE ...

I was SUPPOSED to be cooling down, but ... with YOU here, my motor is only humming FASTER!

I'm a SUPER kinky chick ... are you into kinky shit!? Yeah. Of course you are ... You look JUST THE TYPE!

THREE edges for me, BITCH! How often do you meet girls that can lick their own nipples!? NOT every day—I can guarantee THAT, but ... isn't it a special treat when you DO meet one of us with this rare talent?

FUCK I need to get off ... 30 more BPM and double your strokes for the rest of the time you are with me ... *I* need to cum soon ...

Mmmmm ... good boy, good boy, good boy, good boy ... I'm talking to my dildo, but ... if you LIKE than you can pretend I'm talking to YOU.

BIGGER dildo! BIGGER boy! HECK YES for a GIRTHY BOY! Now add 30 more bpm to your speed ... gimme THREE medium balls slaps AFTER your strokes, and ... if you DIDN'T edge after everything, then ... YOU'LL HAVE TO EDGE TWICE!

I need a stable surface to attach this to ... you like asses? Mine is pretty nice—wouldn't you agree?

HIT me deep! HIT me deep! Hit me DDEEEeeeeepppp ... FUCK YES ... THAT is the spot ... FUCK YES!!! Slap your balls FIVE times after you finish your strokes, THEN do them again, but DOUBLED!

Fuck YEAH! I LOVE how crazy you are, guy ... ball slapping, edge slut ... I think you might ALMOST be crazy enough to hang with me ... wanna go again!? There are OTHER things I can do with these titties you know ...

"Okay ... we're speed running this calibration ... time for the next destination!

Spoiler: show: "Hmmm ... Lana Rhoades ... yeah, we're still configured more for Fatts, but ... Lana has that "mass appeal" ... and Stella Cox is pretty slutty, so ... I would say this is a step in the right direction ..."

Stella: Hey look, Lana! It's Ecik!

Lana: Hey, Ecik ... I haven't seen you in a while ...

The girls kiss.

Lana: I've been busy prepping with Uma for the orgy with brian and Fatts, but ... I needed to take a break ...

Stella: Yeah! We're having a "Girls Day Out" to help Lana relax! Should we tell this dirty boy to GET LOST, Lana!

Lana: No ... Ecik is good people ... and he's SUPER kinky ... and besides ... I think a stroker ALWAYS adds a certain something to a room ... let's bring him along and let him WATCH US!

Stella: I don't know, Lana ... it's kind of weird—him watching us while we mess around ...

Lana: No, Stella ... it's HOT! October is "Cucking Awareness Month" on the HMCP thread ... EVERYONE is talking about cucking and trying it out ... hentaiAddict .... brian ... Fatts ... Edgeslut, so ... you should too!

Lana: You just have to remind him of what he CAN'T HAVE!

Stella: OH, fuck ... I get it, now ... he's SO eager—and it's making we WET ... TWO edges, for me, Ecik ... ONE for each finger Lana has put into my holes ...

Lana: He's a fucking POWERLESS, helpless slut ... he can't HELP HIMSELF but sit there and goon ... You like hanging titties, yeah Ecik? Edge for Stella's BOOBS!

Stella: Now edge SIX times, SLUT! Edge ONCE while staring at me lick Lana's pussy ... SECOND while I finger her asshole ... THIRD while looking into my GODDESS eyes ... FOURTH as you watch Lana's satisfied grin ... then FIVE and SIX for her pussy and asshole ... AND THEN DO A FUCKING HARD BALLSLAP AFTER EACH ONE, YOU SILLY TOY!

Lana: Fatts holds the edge for rimming ... I know this, because I've been studying up on his rules for the orgy, so ... YOU should hold the edge for THIRTY SECONDS while STELLA EATS MY ASS OUT! HAHAHA!

Lana: Who's ass do you like MORE, Ecik? Edge THREE times for the ass you like most, and do 15 medium ball slaps for the LOSER!

Stella: He edged for mine—right? Or did he do the ball hits for me?

Lana: It doesn't MATTER Stella ... Ecik is a secret pain slut ... Don't overthink it ... whatever the outcome, we're BOTH winners ...

Stella: ... and we're STILL QUEENS!

Lana: Now just watch as I put him into ballbusting mode for this next part ... you're gonna LOVE watching how hard his cock gets ...

"Okay ... I think I've just about gotten this thing calibrated ... probably ONE MORE and we'll have it! "

Nancy whisks you away to the next location ...

Spoiler: show: Who are you? Why are you here?

Doesn't matter. You came just in time ... I am SUPER horny ...

... and I ALWAYS get off better when I have an audience to worship my BEST feature ...

What feature is that? Why, my PUSSY of course ... my tight ... WET ... pussy ... SO very wet ...

I'm Cleopatra, by the way. You know ... like the ancient Egyptian queen ... and I'm wearing all black right now, so ... DOUBLE EVERYTHING [for the rest of the scene]

THERE she is! All pink and juicy inside ...

What!? You want to stick your dick in it? No, I'm sorry, but we just met ... all YOU get to do is stand by and WORSHIP it ...

... and you can't worship it at THAT speed, so ... increase your metronome to 180 BPM!

NOW, we're talking! FAST speed! DOUBLING EVERYTHING ... my pussy is going to get the worship she DESERVES!

Edge for my titties. I saw you staring at them earlier ... but ... THAT is NOT why we are here ... I need you focused on my PUSSY, so ... TEN ball slaps after your edge ...

Do you like how pink and juicy my clit is?

Tell me how much you like my lips! Tell me TEN TIMES OUT LOUD how much you want to PLEASURE THEM WITH YOUR TONGUE!

No ... not yet ... this wet ass pussy ISN'T FOR YOU ... YOU just get to worship it from afar ...

ONLY THE QUEEN ... or a KING is worthy to touch a ROYAL PUSSY such as this ... slow your metronome down to 30 bpm—JUST for this pose ... I want you to remember that you are here for MY pleasure—SLAVE!

Back to 180 bpm. My pussy is grand, but my asshole is ALSO cute ... edge TWICE for my pussy, and ONCE for my asshole ...

Keep staring ... keep worshipping ... keep stroking ...

How much longer can you hold on? How many times have you edged already to my GLORY!

It's WET and I can tell that you LOVE that ...

SO wet ... SO sloppy ... you'd give your left arm to put your dick inside ... WOULDN'T YOU!! But I'd let you keep the right, so you could continue to stroke for me...

Yes ... WORSHIP it! Look how I spread it JUST FOR YOU, slave ...

Now, you will edge FIVE TIMES for it, but ... EACH ONE WILL BE FORCED! No stroking limit ... you just keep stroking until you've edged 5 times ... and let's turn the metronom down to 120 bpm. I want this to last. SUFFER for me while you WORSHIP MY MAGNIFICENCE!

"Okay ... ONE MORE ... I think the NEXT ONE will demonstrate that I have COMPLETELY gotten the new settings keyed in for you ..."

You are forcibly transported by the Edgeaton 3000 yet again ...

Spoiler: show: Ecik! How unexpected! Perfect timing! I was just about to have a nightcap ... Come and join me!

Wow ... you are just in an ABSOLUTE STATE, aren't you!? SOMEONE must have been working you over VERY well ...

Nancy Ace, huh? I should have known. No magical auras emanating from THAT portal ... it's an ABOMINATION if you ask me!

Portals should ONLY be fueled by good olde fashioned MAGIC ... this new fangled "science" you humans all seem SO very fond of ... it's NOTHING but trouble, and you lot can NEVER seem to get it to work properly ... its a TRAVESTY, and you deserve what you get when it inevitably FAILS you ...

Now what's that? You say MAGIC had its experimental phase, too? Ecik, Ecik ... That was EONS ago ... magic has been perfected for AGES ... you REALLY should learn more history ... just what do they teach you now-a-days in those "schools" of yours ... nothing important, I imagine ...

Do they teach you how to frustrate a cock? I learned that MILLENIA ago ... Well, I suppose that technology and the Internet DOES have its uses ... there DOES seem to be a general increase in horniness amongst the population—which I CERTAINLY approve of ...

So what is with these new rules of yours, darling? An end-of-the-year competition? Who do you think you are—Helequin?

I will admit, Ecik, that I was just a LITTLE hurt that NONE of your little friends seriously bothered to enter me into ANY of the little competitions that you held throughout the year ... if they HAD then I would have SURELY won them all—as you well know ... and had THAT happened, then this little "end of the year" tournament would be COMPLETELY unecessary ... and we could have had you focused on more important things—like pleasing me—which we can BOTH agree is FAR more important than POINTLESS competitions such as this ...

But no matter ... I will win HANDILY, and prove to EVERYONE—once and for all—that your favorites list should really only contain ONE name: mine.

But I also can't help but think this is all just a clever charade to get me to make you cum over and OVER again ... but we have spent SO LITTLE time together this year ... perhaps this is for the best—because I have missed you TERRIBLY, Ecik ... my naughty, depraved, CUTE little man!

Now edge for me SIX TIMES, bitch ... Mommy is ALWAYS watching, and when you witnessed HER licking her nipple, you BETTER have been thinking, "I know someone ELSE who can do that trick, too ..." And if you DIDN'T think of me while edging for her, then give yourself one HARD ball slap after EACH edge—Ecik, my darling ...

Oh, VERY good, Ecik, dear! As always, a firm hand gets you INSTANTLY back on the crooked and HORNY path ... you need me in command of your cock—and you know it ...

Of course, if I WIN this little competition of yours—as EVERYONE expects me to—then we MUST implement a NEW RULE for the ENTIRETY of next year that will ensure that this REGRETTABLE situation NEVER happens again ...

I mean HONESTLY ... me competing with SO MANY ... lesser beings ... it's REALLY quite shameful ...

I mean Ecik ... I'm your GODDESS—and I am a REAL goddess ... you are one of THE MOST LUCKY people on ALL of PLANET EARTH for having secured SO VERY MUCH of my interest and attention ... Please show me your gratitude by giving me HOWEVER MANY edges you think my wet cunt deserves ... I KNOW that you are tired, but ... DO put in the effort, my HORNY little man ...

And now what about this "ruining" business? I'm the ONLY ONE who's allowed to ruin you again and again in a single set?

Oh, Ecik ... the exclusivity you afford me is really QUITE flattering and appreciated ...

It's SO tempting, that I might just have to take you up on the offer!

... but not today. Mommy has needs, and mommy's needs come first, so ... you'll only have to settle for ONE ruin today—as a practice.

You see this big, FAT dildo in my hand? Pretend that it is your dick, and when I tell you to, you are going to RUIN ... Now remember, a PROPER ruin yields a DRIBBLE, and your cock STAYS HARD ... if you cum too hard and your cock goes limp, then how am I to continue playing with you? THIS is why you MUST master the art of a PROPER RUIN, Ecik my dear ...

... so let's begin! Turn off your metronome. Stroke yourself at whatever pace you need, and RUIN for me, ECIK! You DELICIOUSLY DEVIOUS BOY! Show mommy how you can follow instructions, just ... DRIBBLE OUT that DELECTABLE little load for me—your goddess ...

You ruin for Angela, and the Edgeaton 3000 transports you back to the lab ...

Spoiler: show

[I’m trying to be “quick.”

Sorry! No pictures.

]

Nancy: Good! You’re back! I have finished the calibrations … having fine tuned the settings for you, I am CONFIDENT I can now use the Edgeaton 3000 on myself … FUCK I am SO HORNY for Fatts right now.

I want to see him SO BAD!

$:\'-($

Angela suddenly teleports into the lab.

Angela: Ecik! THERE you are! How VERY RUDE of you!

I wasn’t done toying with you yet—my pet

… Nancy! Good evening. You look unwell. Is everything okay, my dear?

Nancy:

Angela: Stressed?

Nancy: Yes.

Angela: Boy troubles?

Nancy: Yes.

Angela: Was it Ecik? I can punish him for you

…

Nancy: No, not Ecik …

Angela: Fatts, then?

Nancy nods.

Angela: His fault or yours?

Nancy: His

… no—mine

… both—I guess

… but mostly mine

…

Nancy looks down at the ground.

Angela: Hey! Eyes up here! Look at me.

Nancy looks up at Angela.

Angela: Women like you and I—we’re strong. We solve our OWN problems …

Nancy: That’s rich coming from YOU … all YOU do is turn tail and RUN when things get tough …

Angela smiles.

Angela: Incorrect. I choose my battles carefully …

Nancy laughs.

Angela: … and I’m not afraid of delegating “clean up duties” to others—so long as I believe them capable

…

Nancy laughs again.

Angela: You’ve taken on too much, Nancy … spread yourself FAR too thin … it’s a mistake *I* made a long—VERY long time ago

… which is why you never see me doing ANYTHING too exhausting

… life is too short to live that way …

Nancy nods.

Nancy: I’m going to take a break.

Angela: Good! You’ve earned it … and take that “cyber boyfriend” or “situationship” or … whatever you young people call it—and go find a nice, secluded beach somewhere … and make him eat you out until you forget ALL of your troubles!

Nancy laughs again.

Nancy: Got it

… Will do, Angela!

Thanks!

Angela: It’ll ALL work out, dear … now I better get moving … giving all of this matronly advice might give Ecik the wrong impression. He might start to think that I’m some sort of “hero” who will take it easy on him—and we simply CAN’T have THAT!

Nancy: Wait!

Nancy walks over to the Edgaton 3000 and types in some commands.

Nancy: Okay … he’s locked in. I can bring him back whenever you’re done with him.

Angela: Alright … it might be a while!

Ah—who am I kidding!?

Ecik won’t be able to last THAT long!

Send my regards to Asa Akira.

Angela nods at the frozen Asa standing next to the machine.

Angela: Apologize once sincerely—but DON’T grovel.

After that, pretend like it NEVER HAPPENED!

Nancy laughs again.

Nancy: Will do, Angela

Angela: Now I must be off—and Ecik, too … we have our OWN “secluded beach” to discover …

Angela grabs your hand, and you’re off—transported to a beach far away.

While in transit, you can’t help but think that Nancy really has grown on Angela. The two of them used to be at such odds a few years ago, and Angela being THIS nice to Nancy—it’s NOT ENTIRELY expected … sort of out of character for her, but … you figure Angela must view Nancy as some sort of protege—an equal—or at least an “up and comer” … curt, heartfelt advice doesn’t seem ENTIRELY beyond her … and it is PRECISELY her unpredictability, classiness, AND gross kinkiness that ALL go together to help make her your all-time-favorite … Angela is, indeed, a broad, tantalizing, and mysterious mural to behold …

… but how will YOUR chances, fair? Surely, cheering up Nancy means she’s in a good mood, and THAT bodes well for you … right?

Spoiler: show: [Angela intends to give you a full orgasm. She’s aware of your score board and wants to build up a big lead that will intimidate all of the others into giving up. THIS strategy will save her more effort in the end.

Watch one video. Stroke as per your rules. Cum at the end. If you have already seen the first video (or don’t like it), try the second—and so on. But ONLY ONE video counts as being part of this tease, and you are ONLY ALLOWED ONE full orgasm.

Video 1
https://xhamster.com/videos/angela-whit ... ch-xhkBIiu

Video 2
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php? ... 2323394899

Video 3
https://xhamster.com/videos/angela-whit ... pe-3234368

Epilogue:

Spoiler: show: After cumming, you are transported back to the lab.

Alright, Ecik … you and I are going to have a LONG talk … You are going to help me process everything that happened—and ALSO start up the paperwork on transferring over the Lust BnB …

… and THEN I am going to fix things with my boyfriend, and retire in STYLE!

Ecik17 · Post by **Ecik17** » Mon Oct 28, 2024 6:30 pm

hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Sun Oct 27, 2024 10:44 am

Fb

Spoiler: show

Thank you for the set!

Hailey leigh…it has been awhile! It was not raining when I played, so her rule didn’t activate. She does make suspenders sexy, though

she picked up 5 good edges before I continued.

Lucy li..I really wanted to edge…like really bad. But I was good…and didn’t edge without permission.

Next up was the red fox…I really like her rule, and will be adding it. She is right…I don’t edge as much as the others…but I am trying not to edge…the girls force it out of me…with their hotness!
And last, Angela white, who edged me stupid. I did 14 edges to her, and 1 minute of holding, before cumming hard. More points for Angela!

Fav pics

Spoiler: show

FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Oct 28, 2024 9:34 am

Fb on your set, which I played later in the day.

Spoiler: show

After the intro…how did the edgeaton figure me out so quickly!

Avi was instant hotness…

So glad that Lana remembered I can edge more with pain! And then..cleopatra. She edged me good! And when I was gonna cum…I was sent to Angela!
I started edging when she said that “mommy’s always watching”

She racked up 20 edges and 1 orgasm…to the second video!

I already pm you about the next 2 sets I’ll make for you!

Fav pics

Spoiler: show

Ecik17 · Post by **Ecik17** » Mon Oct 28, 2024 7:25 pm

FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Oct 28, 2024 9:34 am

#fattsdynamoset
#wbecik17

Spoiler: show: This is a mini set…making some things right.

Spoiler: show

While out on your daily run…a van drives up. In it is…

Spoiler: show

Fatts! I need your help! The edgeaton 3000 has activated on its own! and I can’t shut it off!

It’s not supposed to do that. It’s almost as if someone else has control of the machine remotely

And even weirder…when it is active…the machine says a name…

Your name! Fatts! Your name!
[

Fatts! Are you listening to me? I’m telling you that I need your help! I can’t get a nobel prize for a machine I don’t control!

Come on fatts! Get in the van!

You arrive at asa lab, to see the edgeaton 3000 fully activated. Asa is at the control panel, twisting knobs and buttons… but nothing works..you know what needs to be done, and step into the portal….

Spoiler: show

Fatts! You heard my call! I thought that you didn’t hear my call…or didn’t want to come see me.

Alesia…yeah. I treated her like a toy. But that was what she said she wanted..at first…

I thought that by denying her orgasm,and letting you cum all the time, you wouldn’t get jealous…but not letting her cum led to you feeling something worse, for everyone.

Did you know that Alesia was the head of the edge syndicate? I never let her cum, so she started an organization under our noses focused on making us cum! She and I talked…after I gave her a huge orgasm. She’s since disbanded the syndicate…and she and I are on good terms…but we broke up. But that leaves you and me…and I can’t bear to lose you too! I’m sorry that I denied Alesia so long! I’m sorry that I did not live up to your expectations! And I’m sorry I disappointed you!

Nancy falls to her knees. She is distraught.
Can you forgive me?

Spoiler: show: Whew…thank you for forgiving me fatts…I was worried that I would have to retire here alone! Someone way smarter than me said you should only apologize once. And yes…I’m planning on retiring! Don’t you think we should spend more time together?

The only thing left to do, is to sell the lust BnB!

At first,I thought that I should sell to Elsa. But why should billionaires get everything!? The lust BnB deserves someone who truely knows it…and who can carry the spirit of fulfilling the lust fantasies of everyone! So I asked Ecik to do one last favor for me, to help find some candidates to take over the lust bnb

So what do you say? Let’s head back to the BnB, and see who Ecik has found for my replacement! And then…we will come back here…and leave it all behind!

Ecik17 · Post by **Ecik17** » Tue Oct 29, 2024 1:35 am

hentaiAddict12345 wrote: Sat Oct 05, 2024 7:52 am

#Hentaiaddict set

#Wbecik17

Before set

Spoiler: show: Is more humiliation than I normally do, so wanted to mention all text below is tounge in cheek. I hope you like it!

Set

Spoiler: show

There is an angry knock on your door. You open it to see…

Spoiler: show

What the actual fuck, hentaiaddict! I am not happy with you. Why? I am your favorite…along with 50 others!

Don’t get me wrong. I like being a favorite… I have a nice body…captivating eyes.nice tits…I should be a favorite of everyone!

But Being included with 30 other brunettes, 15 redheads, and god knows how many blondes does not make me feel special!

For someone who is rumored to be so picky…you do like to stroke to many women. Having that many favorites makes you sound Just like a slut. A stroke slut.

That’s what you are, aren’t you? a stroke slut. Go on..Say it out loud…”I am a stroke slut”

Good. Because that is what you will be called today. And everytime you see the words stroke slut, you will say them, and then raise your bpms by 5. Got it? Your starting bpm is 90.

And now stroke slut, we are going to play a game to see how well you know your favorites! I am going to ask you questions…and answer them!

Get too many of them wrong, and I’ll demand for you to remove me from your favorites list. you probably would not even miss me!

Now, let’s go stroke slut! Let’s see how much you know about me and your favorites!

You follow Adriana outside..

Spoiler: show

First question, stroke slut! What color is Elsa jeans eyes?

You know, Elsa! The girl who showed you around here. You said her tour was “boring”. But were you paying attention? Go on, make your guess!

Elsa jeans eyes are blue! Here is a photo, In case you need some proof.

Spoiler: show

And now, stroke slut…if you got that right, great! You can increase your speed by 20bpm. got it wrong? Slow down by 20 bpm And now, you see how this will go. Shall we continue?

Spoiler: show

Second question! Who is this?

Adriana shows you a photo

Spoiler: show

This is Bree daniels!

I hope you knew that. If you didn’t, then your base stroking is 20bpm lower. if you got it right? Then your bpm goes up by 20.

And speaking of Bree daniels…what is her natural hair color?

A true person who knew their favorites would know that…

But a stroke slut would not know anything…so what is it? What is Bree daniels true hair color?

Bree daniels true hair color is blonde! And if you got it right…then your bpm remains the same! if you got it wrong, then your bpm is reduced by 20. And maybe, you should move her to the right place on your massive favorite list!

Come on, stroke slut. There are 3 more questions to go.

Spoiler: show

Oh, I’m sorry. Is a stroke slut bored? Am I boring the stroke slut?

I do not care. Why? Becuase the next 3 questions are all about me!

Third question: what is my nationality?

Where am I from?

I’m from America! Surely you could get that question right. If you did, raise your bpm by 20. If wrong, lower it by 10.

Fourth question! How old am I?

I am 32! Does that make me a milf? If right, increase by 30. If wrong decrease by 20.

Last question! How many porn awards have I won? I’ll be kind..if you are within 10 of the number…you can say you were correct.

Ready? Guess!

I’ve won 33! I’m clearly a big deal around here. Unlike you. If wrong, lower your bpm by 10. If right, increase by 10.

Come on, stroke slut. Let’s see how you did.

Spoiler: show

I brought along my friend who knows a thing or two about loyalty to help me total your score. Angela…what do you think?

Angela: About this stroke slut? Unimpressive. I wish I could say more..but I really can’t. I’ll go back to edging my favorite, Ecik!
Angela gets bored…and leaves

Well…you’ve made my friend so bored of you she left…but the bigger question is…will i? What is your current bpm?

Above 60

Spoiler: show: Well..you may know some things yet! You’ve answered enough questions to make me happy…and I’ll stay on your favorites list…for now!

Below 60

Spoiler: show: You know nothing, hentaiaddict! I want you to remove me from your favorites list! if you want me back, you’ll have to do something special!

hentaiAddict12345 · Post by **hentaiAddict12345** » Tue Oct 29, 2024 9:01 am

@Ecik17 feedback on set

Spoiler: show: Thanks for the set! I'm terrible at this . I only got one question right (about Elsa's eye color), but everything else, I was wrong.

My bpm was... 65. Hilarious, but I guess I get to keep her as a favourite

FattsDynamo · Post by **FattsDynamo** » Tue Oct 29, 2024 10:02 am

Ecik17 wrote: Mon Oct 28, 2024 6:30 pm

@Ecik: Fdbk on Fdbk

Spoiler: show: After the intro…how did the edgeaton figure me out so quickly!
It was Nancy who was programming it! She knows you SO WELL!

Avi was instant hotness…
Glad you liked her! I had her pornpics gallery sitting open in a tab ... My GOAL was to write something QUICK, so ... I saw her there, and I just thought, "Yeah ... I think Ecik would like her. " She's crazy and peppy and VERY kinky. This is my all-time favorite video of hers: [Don't watch it yet ... NOT until I say ...]

https://spankbang.com/2x2gk/video/post+orgasm+handjob

I think she goes by "Luna" if you look her up on the TA Worship/OrgasmAbuse site, so ... I didn't even KNOW she did regular shoots and galleries ... I thought she was JUST a "kink model"—because she's done some orgasm abuse vids and tickle videos ... and watching her get tickled and vibed while she is tied down is CRAZY hot. So, when I saw her randomly in a pornpics.com gallery under "Avri", I was like, "... WHAT!?!? " But ... I am NOT surprised she was an "FTV girl." She's got the body for what they usually like, and ... yeah, watch that vid ... super DUPER hot, man! She is CRAZY kinky and WILD!

Lana's been on my mind—obviously, so ... HAD to include her. Glad you liked Cleopatra. I saw close ups of a WET pussy and just IMMEDIATELY thought of you, lol.

So, you were SUPPOSED to cum TWICE for Angela ... the ruin, and THEN the full. THAT is why I placed the story section at the end where I did, because it was supposed to be an "after cum break" section ... but ... I was in a rush, and I am CERTAIN I could have done a MUCH better job with spoilers and including instructions ... and ... it DID break the pattern—because Nancy kept pulling you out before more stuff happened, which ... that is NOT how the Edgeaton 3000 works, so ... I was having her use in IMPROPERLY, and ... THEN SUDDENLY ... for the LAST TIME ... it WAS!?!? Yeah, that was SUPER unclear on my part, and ... again, I was "trying to be efficient" so I cut corners, but ... my INTENTION was that Angela would ruin you, and THEN the machine would pull you back to the lab, so ... idk ... if you want to replay that scene and ruin for Angela—I think that would be fine (plus it would give her more points), but ... that was how it was INTENDED. I hope I cleared that up ... sorry about that! But ... I GUESS it was okay how it turned out, but ... yeah ... NOT what I wanted, but ... oh well!

You could always watch that Avri vid and THEN replay the scene with Angela, ruin ... and THEN watch one of those OTHER Angela videos and cum for her again—IF you want ... Of course, only the ruin should count for points since it was a misplay on MY part, but ... JUST a suggestion ...

Wait ... no, it's not. See below.

#Ecik17set
#wbFattsDynamo

Mini set/do-over: (I can't help myself.

It's length will probably be closer to a standard sized set.

)

Spoiler: show

I think "Avri" goes by "Luna Vera" on the kink sites but "Avri" and "Iva Nora" on pornpics.com.

You're minding your own business, when suddenly ...

Spoiler: show

The Edgeaton 3000 pulls you out of reality into a different part of reality ...

You hear Nancy's voice as space rushes past you. "Sorry. It's SUPPOSED to be the Stargate portal, but ... the thing's been glitchy since we used it last ... I had to teleport home myself FOUR times ... it only brought me back EIGHT times after cumming! It's buggy, so ... we need to do some more recalibrating ..."

Spoiler: show

THERE you are!

You disappeared SO QUICKLY the other day! I didn't get a chance to finish MESSING WITH YOU!

Avri bounds excitedly towards you. Breasts flopping about all over the place.

I've been looking for you EVERYWHERE! Where'd you go!?

I didn't even get your name last time!

But you're "Ecik", right? Yeah? That's cool. This blonde told me you were a friend of hers

... You nearly FLIPPED YOUR SHIT when you saw me lick my nip ...

... that was kinda hot.

SO glad I found you ... you're into KINKY shit—I can tell.

Same here.

I've been running around EVERYWHERE trying to find you ...

A passerby walks past the two of you on the sidewalk. Avri posts up on the fire hydrant, waiting for him to pass.

I've got CRAZY shit on my mind—and I want to watch you edge a ton!

Avri kneads her breasts with both hands, almost violently.

Yeah? YEAH!?

You LIKE that!

You LIKE IT when a girl gets ROUGH!

Well FUCK YEAH! I KNEW you were my guy. Turn that metronome up by 30 BPM. *I* want to see some edges!

You like to play hard to get a little bit—and I LIKE that in a guy!

It TURNS ME ON when the dude's being timid—and I have to FORCE the arousal OUT OF HIM!

You like that—slut!? You LIKE how I'm teasing you with my ass?

Well GET READY ...

I've got MORE ASS TO SHOW!

Avri looks around to see if there are any more bystanders.

FUCK ... This place is too public, and I don't want to get arrested again ... SUCH a hassle

...

Come on! Follow me!

I know a place we can go that is just a LITTLE more private ... less chance of getting caught, but ... NOT zero—so it's STILL exciting!

Spoiler: show

Here we go. This porch is "safe." My friend lives here, but ... nobody's home right now ...

A little birdie told me that you thought I was "instant hotness."

Is that true!?

Avri listens to your answer as she massages her breasts.

Damn boy!

Hit me with some MORE of those compliments if you want to see this pussy get wet!

I'm easy like that

...

Avri shakes her ass back and forth at you while she smiles.

I bet you like seeing some KINKY stuff—is that true?

That thought turn you on!?

Fuck, YEAH!

You're a a real sly dog. JUST my type, but ...

... there is something that you GOT to know about me

...

I'm a "switch", so ... THAT means that I like getting tied up and stuff ...

... but it ALSO means that I LIKE IT when OTHER people are tied up and *I* get to abuse them and shit!

You okay with that?

SOME people get squeamish, so ... I ALWAYS make it a point to ask my sla—I mean "boy friends"

—err ... "People I meet on the street"—if they are okay with that kind of thing ...

You're a switch, too!?

FUCK yeah ... I just KNEW that I didn't have to ask, but ... caution and "force of habit"—am-I-right!?

Fuck ... NOW I feel like a dweeb for explaining to you what a "switch" is

...

... but you know what I do when I feel like I am losing control of a sub?

Spoiler: show

I make 'em EDGE LIKE A MOTHER FUCKER!

EDGE for my ass and PUSSY holes, BITCH!

Fuck YES!

Edge TWICE! You're making me SO wet

...

Edge THREE times, fucker!

And if you would like to stick your DICK UP MY CUNT, then DOUBLE your edges and SLAP YOUR BALLS HARD AFTER EACH ONE!

Spoiler: show

GOD ... you're SO easy

... I kinda love it.

I think you're almost as big a slut as me ...

Would you slap this ASS Ecik?

I'll let you

... but you have to edge ONCE for EACH opportunity!

You slap Avri's ass, but after each slap, you have to do an edge ... [After two edges, open the following spoiler ...]

Spoiler: show

Fuck! Don't slap me like I'm a little girl ... I'm a WOMAN—I can TAKE IT!

HARDER! Slap me HARDER, Ecik!

[After 5 slaps (3 more edges), open the following spoiler.]

Spoiler: show: FUCK yeah! More! MORE! GOD I'm getting wet ... it stings SO GOOD ...

Finished edging and slapping Avri's ass ...

Spoiler: show

Avery sits down on her red ass cheeks. She doesn't flinch.

SOOoooo ... We're both SWITCHES

... do you know what THAT means!?

It means "TURNABOUT IS FAIR PLAY!"

For EVERY slap YOU gave my ass, YOU now have to hit your balls HARD, bitch!

Avri is laughing at you.

AND ... edge for my pussy ONCE after EACH hit.

I like that little face you make when you hit the edge

... and DON'T WASTE MY TIME.

We have OTHER shit we need to get to today

... YES

... I was running around town looking for you, because I had ALL SORTS of kinky things I wanted to try out

... So MOVE IT, bitch! Give me what you owe me!

Finished edges and hits ...

Spoiler: show: Good ... now that THAT'S done ...

Follow me ...

Spoiler: show

Okay. This is the "Avri Video Section" ... or should I say, "Luna Vera."

The reason I was able to write Avri so well is because I HAVE SEEN HER IN VIDEOS ... and DAMN SHE BE CRAZY!

Watch BOTH of the following videos and use your rules.

You get to choose the order.

The FIRST video Luna is the domme.

The dude is bound in a humiliater chair, and Luna just uses and abuses him. There is post orgasm torture, and it's AMAZING.

PEAK Dynamo fetish—right here ... I just LOVE ME some bound POT vids ... it's one of my FAVORITES

... You're a kinky boy, so ... I am SURE you will love it!

The SECOND video Luna is the sub. She is tied up, and she gets tickled—MERCILESSLY.

For me, POT >> bound tickle vids (That would be "much, much greater.") ... But it's LESBIAN, and the domme is SUPER amazing, and Luna gets SO subby

, so ... like I said. Luna is a "switch", and I feel like these two videos basically PROVE that.

Video 1: Luna abuses. Video 2: Luna gets abused. Make your choice, and be sure to count the number of edges you do ... because after you watch the FIRST video, BEFORE you watch the second, there are additional instructions. See below.

Video 1
https://spankbang.com/2x2gk/video/post+orgasm+handjob

Video 2
https://pornzog.com/video/10671912/luna-vera-tickled/

After watching the first video ...

Spoiler: show: However many edges you did for the first video, you have to do that many PLUS five for the second. If you can't complete the edges in time before the video ends, you can EITHER start it from the beginning OR skip around and watch your favorite parts. There are BOUND to be a few ...

Spoiler: show

Before Avri has a chance to tie you down and start working YOU over, Nancy uses the Edgeaton 3000 on you ...

Spoiler: show: Ecik! So I think I FINALLY figured out the glitch ...

Where are we? We're in the SPACE BETWEEN DIMENSIONS!?! Isn't that COOL!?

Yeah, these "iStripper" galleries are useful for all SORTS of things ... KIND OF like a "blank canvas"—if you will ...

Bad dad joke —I know, but ... you loved it STILL ... and if you're playing this in OCTOBER, well ... I *am* wearing all black, so cough, cough ...

ANYwayz ... The memory of the Edgeaton 3000 basically got "jammed"—or corrupted!? I don't know ... Anyway ...

It's STUCK and glitching out, and ... it seems that SOMEHOW it managed to "record" your last session with Angela ... You know—the "nightcap" one.

I can't delete it, but ... it's taking up SO much memory, and I can't get rid of it ...

Seems like I PROBABLY should have listened to Asa Akira just a LITTLE BIT more closely before barging in and using her equipment ...

Seems like I was using it like a "taxi cab", INSTEAD of the intricate black hole-infinite lust machine that it is. I SHOULD have given Asa more credit. It is WAY more complicated than I expected ...

So, it seems that it "recorded" the session, and ... since I brought you back before cumming, if I put it in "playback mode", and you DO cum ... THEN the file will be "uncorrupted", the memory will no longer be jammed, and then I can FINALLY use this thing to find Fatts ...

Does that all make sense? I HOPE so ... because I'm KIND OF making it up as I go.

Okay, so ... REPLAY the scene, and DO THE RUIN THIS TIME, and THEN there might be something special after. ...

Bye, now!

OH! ... and Ecik!

It will ONLY get "unjammed" if you replay the scene at double speed, so ... 180 BPM for YOU!

You are sent to Angela—again ...

Spoiler: show

[180 BPM]

Ecik! How unexpected! Perfect timing! I was just about to have a nightcap ... Come and join me!

Wow ... you are just in an ABSOLUTE STATE, aren't you!? SOMEONE must have been working you over VERY well ...

Nancy Ace, huh? I should have known. No magical auras emanating from THAT portal ... it's an ABOMINATION if you ask me!

Portals should ONLY be fueled by good olde fashioned MAGIC ... this new fangled "science" you humans all seem SO very fond of ... it's NOTHING but trouble, and you lot can NEVER seem to get it to work properly ... its a TRAVESTY, and you deserve what you get when it inevitably FAILS you ...

Now what's that? You say MAGIC had its experimental phase, too? Ecik, Ecik ... That was EONS ago ... magic has been perfected for AGES ... you REALLY should learn more history ... just what do they teach you now-a-days in those "schools" of yours ... nothing important, I imagine ...

Do they teach you how to frustrate a cock? I learned that MILLENIA ago ... Well, I suppose that technology and the Internet DOES have its uses ... there DOES seem to be a general increase in horniness amongst the population—which I CERTAINLY approve of ...

So what is with these new rules of yours, darling? An end-of-the-year competition? Who do you think you are—Helequin?

I will admit, Ecik, that I was just a LITTLE hurt that NONE of your little friends seriously bothered to enter me into ANY of the little competitions that you held throughout the year ... if they HAD then I would have SURELY won them all—as you well know ... and had THAT happened, then this little "end of the year" tournament would be COMPLETELY unecessary ... and we could have had you focused on more important things—like pleasing me—which we can BOTH agree is FAR more important than POINTLESS competitions such as this ...

But no matter ... I will win HANDILY, and prove to EVERYONE—once and for all—that your favorites list should really only contain ONE name: mine.

But I also can't help but think this is all just a clever charade to get me to make you cum over and OVER again ... but we have spent SO LITTLE time together this year ... perhaps this is for the best—because I have missed you TERRIBLY, Ecik ... my naughty, depraved, CUTE little man!

Now edge for me SIX TIMES, bitch ... Mommy is ALWAYS watching, and when you witnessed HER licking her nipple, you BETTER have been thinking, "I know someone ELSE who can do that trick, too ..." And if you DIDN'T think of me while edging for her, then give yourself one HARD ball slap after EACH edge—Ecik, my darling

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Oh, VERY good, Ecik, dear! As always, a firm hand gets you INSTANTLY back on the crooked and HORNY path ... you need me in command of your cock—and you know it

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Of course, if I WIN this little competition of yours—as EVERYONE expects me to—then we MUST implement a NEW RULE for the ENTIRETY of next year that will ensure that this REGRETTABLE situation NEVER happens again ...

I mean HONESTLY ... me competing with SO MANY ... lesser beings ... it's REALLY quite shameful ...

I mean Ecik ... I'm your GODDESS—and I am a REAL goddess ... you are one of THE MOST LUCKY people on ALL of PLANET EARTH for having secured SO VERY MUCH of my interest and attention ... Please show me your gratitude by giving me HOWEVER MANY edges you think my wet cunt deserves ... I KNOW that you are tired, but ... DO put in the effort, my HORNY little man

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Finished edges ...

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And now what about this "ruining" business? I'm the ONLY ONE who's allowed to ruin you again and again in a single set?

Oh, Ecik ... the exclusivity you afford me is really QUITE flattering and appreciated ...

It's SO tempting, that I might just have to take you up on the offer!

... but not today. Mommy has needs, and mommy's needs come first, so ... you'll only have to settle for ONE ruin today—as a practice.

You see this big, FAT dildo in my hand? Pretend that it is your dick, and when I tell you to, you are going to RUIN ... Now remember, a PROPER ruin yields a DRIBBLE, and your cock STAYS HARD ... if you cum too hard and your cock goes limp, then how am I to continue playing with you? THIS is why you MUST master the art of a PROPER RUIN, Ecik my dear ...

... so let's begin!

Turn off your metronome. Stroke yourself at whatever pace you need, and RUIN for me, ECIK! You DELICIOUSLY DEVIOUS BOY! Show mommy how you can follow instructions, just ... DRIBBLE OUT that DELECTABLE little load for me—your goddess ...

Ruined for Angela ...

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... back to Nancy. [Just read.]

Ecik. We have a problem. I screwed up—AGAIN

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The Edgeaton 3000 wasn't MEANT for ruins. Asa had it programmed for Fatts—and FULL orgasms!

Damn your hubris, Nancy Ace!

If ONLY I had listened to Asa instead of FREEZING her, this ALL could have been avoided!

You need to CUM AGAIN, ECIK! FULLY and FAST!

I hope you ruined PROPERLY ... as Angela INSTRUCTED YOU TO!

Same as last time. Three videos. Pick ONE—but you're on the clock. You have to cum AGAIN before the video ends—or else the Edgeaton 3000 is borked.

Good luck. Choose as soon as possible ...

Video 1
https://xhamster.com/videos/angela-whit ... re-xhyun48

Video 2
https://xhamster.com/videos/evilangel-a ... ck-xhuS7ai

Video 3 (Same as video 3 from last time. I assumed you didn't check it out

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https://xhamster.com/videos/angela-whit ... pe-3234368

If you FAIL ... [It's DEFINITELY not good—right!?!

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The Edgeaton 3000 can be flushed with RUINED orgasms.

Asa says FIVE ought to do it.

For EACH of the following models, find 1 gallery or video, and RUIN your orgasm to it.

Post your choices in the feedback. Then, to resync the Edgeaton 3000, Fatts will cum FULLY to each of the same.

Asa Akira
Avri (aka "Luna Vera")
Angela White
Nancy Ace
Wild Card: a "Fatts favorite" of YOUR choice!

This is a "homework" punishment, so ... You can spread it out over some days, and, while you are searching for videos and galleries, you are allowed to stroke/edge for however many you want while you search ... BUT when you find "that" video or gallery that you decide you want to ruin for—RUIN for it and just post the "final result" and NOT all of the searches.

And don't worry about me. Choose for YOU!

I actually LIKE being forced to stroke/edge/cum for things I haven't chosen, so ... if it's "kinky" or "sloppy"—I won't mind.

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