FB: The Awesome Competition
FB: The Awesome Competition
The Awesome Competition
Hi members of Milovana!
I would really appreciate if you gave me some feedback because I think it needs lots of tweaking.
Did you use fleshlights?
Did you use your hand?
Was it too easy/hard?
Was there certain parts that were crap/impossible/hard?
Was the timers too long/short?
I tried to make it more random than my first tease so you'll have several different paths to finish.
Thanks in advance!
Hi members of Milovana!
I would really appreciate if you gave me some feedback because I think it needs lots of tweaking.
Did you use fleshlights?
Did you use your hand?
Was it too easy/hard?
Was there certain parts that were crap/impossible/hard?
Was the timers too long/short?
I tried to make it more random than my first tease so you'll have several different paths to finish.
Thanks in advance!
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
loved it i lost!
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
WoW!!! Might be the best tease I have seen on this site. Hot choice of women and great pov shots. My only suggestion: Throw in some titfucking and failure screens with cumshots for the individual gals(if possible). I really dig the contest/competition type teases. Keep up the outstanding work, please!
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Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
Great work this far!
Looking at a loop in round 2 I think tho
After round 1 I chose stay in the lobby and got a blowjob by the blonde chick
Round 2 is more sucking from same girl. I hit slower button on one of the first couple slides, then it seems stuck on same page, repeating every 15-20 seconds or so...
(tried again, gets stuck on 3rd or 4th slide of the round 2 sequence, POV, blonde girl with striped hairband looking you in the eye, no text)
Looking at a loop in round 2 I think tho
After round 1 I chose stay in the lobby and got a blowjob by the blonde chick
Round 2 is more sucking from same girl. I hit slower button on one of the first couple slides, then it seems stuck on same page, repeating every 15-20 seconds or so...
(tried again, gets stuck on 3rd or 4th slide of the round 2 sequence, POV, blonde girl with striped hairband looking you in the eye, no text)
Yes, I most certainly CAN do it again!
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Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
Uberman,
Here's my thoughts, and my answers to your questions...
Unfortunately, I don't own a fleshlight , so I used my hand. I do want to get a fleshlight though.
Was it too easy/hard?
The beginning was a little easy, but as-is it was a nice warm-up
Was there certain parts that were crap/impossible/hard?
I wouldn't say that it was "crap", but feel that one area needs work. That area is the "Edge" which ends each round. Several times during the tease, I could have lasted longer. Instead, I hurried to the edge, so that I could progress to the next gal. Perhaps it would be better if, during each "round" (not the intermissions), you had to have the stamina to survive a count-down clock (such as a 5:00 first round, 10:00 in the second and then 15 or 20 in the third. However, as I've got no experience with a fleshlight, lasting my suggested times with one might be downright impossible...I don't know.
Was the timers too long/short? After the third round, I could have used more rest. I'll admit though, that I hurried through the doors. That said though, I survived. As is, the tease becomes mildly challenging as it progresses, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Some other thoughts...
Nice variety of girls, and good image selection. Even when images repeated, I took the opportunity to stare at other parts of their bodies. I favorited the tease, will definitely do it again, and I definitely want to try it with a fleshlight someday.
Almost forgot: Didn't have any "accidents", and I opted not to cum; will be spending the rest of my evening horny & frustrated.
EDIT: Loved the Faster/Slower buttons. Great idea!
Here's my thoughts, and my answers to your questions...
Unfortunately, I don't own a fleshlight , so I used my hand. I do want to get a fleshlight though.
Was it too easy/hard?
The beginning was a little easy, but as-is it was a nice warm-up
Was there certain parts that were crap/impossible/hard?
I wouldn't say that it was "crap", but feel that one area needs work. That area is the "Edge" which ends each round. Several times during the tease, I could have lasted longer. Instead, I hurried to the edge, so that I could progress to the next gal. Perhaps it would be better if, during each "round" (not the intermissions), you had to have the stamina to survive a count-down clock (such as a 5:00 first round, 10:00 in the second and then 15 or 20 in the third. However, as I've got no experience with a fleshlight, lasting my suggested times with one might be downright impossible...I don't know.
Was the timers too long/short? After the third round, I could have used more rest. I'll admit though, that I hurried through the doors. That said though, I survived. As is, the tease becomes mildly challenging as it progresses, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Some other thoughts...
Nice variety of girls, and good image selection. Even when images repeated, I took the opportunity to stare at other parts of their bodies. I favorited the tease, will definitely do it again, and I definitely want to try it with a fleshlight someday.
Almost forgot: Didn't have any "accidents", and I opted not to cum; will be spending the rest of my evening horny & frustrated.
EDIT: Loved the Faster/Slower buttons. Great idea!
This boi enjoys having to ruin his orgasms. Also, do this boi a favor and force boi to lick up his nasty jizz.
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
Fixed
- A loop in the 2nd round (blowjob, blonde girl)
- Made the speaking text bold
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lemming: Thanks!
egofed: Will add better failure pics as soon as possible. I'll also be on the look for some good titfucking pictures to add at the end.
janmb: Fixed the loop.
inferiorwhiteboi: I will look into the last round and see what I can come up with. Maybe make it so there are two options to open the door (edge or stamina)?
Thanks for all the compliments! :)
- A loop in the 2nd round (blowjob, blonde girl)
- Made the speaking text bold
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lemming: Thanks!
egofed: Will add better failure pics as soon as possible. I'll also be on the look for some good titfucking pictures to add at the end.
janmb: Fixed the loop.
inferiorwhiteboi: I will look into the last round and see what I can come up with. Maybe make it so there are two options to open the door (edge or stamina)?
Thanks for all the compliments! :)
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Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
There's one thing I don't understand...
Otherwise, great job. I loved the content and the choice of girls!
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Otherwise, great job. I loved the content and the choice of girls!
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Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
Who is girl number 2 in the first round? I know I've seen her before
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
Loved the slow down buttons. Very much needed when dealing with the fleshlight. I came at the second round even after slowing down. I could have cheated and slowed down, I just kept going and the inevitable happenned. Nice.
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
That's what got me, I said slow down and she said no way, my speed or nothing (i.e. you lose), so 'forced' me to cum and I lost. That was kind of cool :)
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
WOW, great tease, definitely one of my favorites now! I especially liked the creative use of the flash editor (slow down buttons etc.).
I also liked the possibility to go back to the girls at the end of the tease. The difficulty was just right for me, not too hard but challenging enough.
5*'s
I also liked the possibility to go back to the girls at the end of the tease. The difficulty was just right for me, not too hard but challenging enough.
5*'s
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
I continue to enjoy this tease after several times...which I think speaks volumes to its quality.
Who is the girl in the bathroom? The brunette in the bathtub...very hot.
Who is the girl in the bathroom? The brunette in the bathtub...very hot.
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Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
I'm brand new to Milovana and by a fortunate stroke of luck, Uberman, your webtease was the first Flashtease I tried out. WOW... amazing job, Uberman.
I think pcalisou said it best - it's a Flashtease that I come back to. Really well done and, as I'm trying to make my first webtease, I'll be aspiring to make it as good as yours.
Thanks again
I think pcalisou said it best - it's a Flashtease that I come back to. Really well done and, as I'm trying to make my first webtease, I'll be aspiring to make it as good as yours.
Thanks again
Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
I request a second part, or even a whole series. After playing it almost every week since the release, I think I discovered every direction you can go
By far my most favorit tease on Milovana!
By far my most favorit tease on Milovana!
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Re: FB: The Awesome Competition
i LOVE your The Awesome Competition tease.
Just wondering if you plan on making a sequel ?
Seventh.
Just wondering if you plan on making a sequel ?
Seventh.
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