FB: A Denial Party
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FB: A Denial Party
All feedback is welcome, be it constructive or not.
Do you hate me for making you do things? Just say it! Although, you didn't stop, or did you...
Do you hate me for making you do things? Just say it! Although, you didn't stop, or did you...
Reasons to have oranges at home:
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
I like it so much, and may balls still hurting.
Great tease
Thank You
Great tease
Thank You
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Well, I just did it!
Quite heavy due to the long periods of slapping.
Well done.
For myself - being in Chastity since 15 days now -
I ordered an unlock before the tease.
Right after the tease I ordered myself to lock up again.
Actually there was a time during the tease where it felt I could cum from just hitting my balls...
Quite heavy due to the long periods of slapping.
Well done.
For myself - being in Chastity since 15 days now -
I ordered an unlock before the tease.
Right after the tease I ordered myself to lock up again.
Actually there was a time during the tease where it felt I could cum from just hitting my balls...
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Thank you for the feedback and for participating in the party
So I guess this really was your two weeks celebration. Congrats!
That was exactly the idea of the tease. I was wondering for some time now why most cbt teases order you to punch yourself so hard that you can't keep standing. That is a thing that I could not do, and wouldn't want to even if I could. Hitting at a much lower intensity, but at a regular interval for a minute or two can achieve the same goal. It might also allow the player push their limits a bit easier.
That is the perfect way to play it
So I guess this really was your two weeks celebration. Congrats!
Reasons to have oranges at home:
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Well that sounds interesting.
Do you have a recommended denial period before playing this?
I'll give it a try when I have the time
Do you have a recommended denial period before playing this?
I'll give it a try when I have the time
Cumming?
That is mad ilegal my dude.
That is mad ilegal my dude.
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
It is not a prerequisite to be denied to play the tease, just to make that clear.
But it probably feels the most intense when your balls 'feel full'. When that is, depends on you, but one to two weeks are probably a sweet spot.
The story says it takes place after exactly two weeks of denial, and your girlfriend has been teasing you a lot in that time.
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Sounds goodonlytropics wrote: ↑Tue Apr 09, 2019 6:33 pm But it probably feels the most intense when your balls 'feel full'. When that is, depends on you, but one to two weeks are probably a sweet spot.
The story says it takes place after exactly two weeks of denial, and your girlfriend has been teasing you a lot in that time.
I'm working towards that right now
Thank you for the reply
Cumming?
That is mad ilegal my dude.
That is mad ilegal my dude.
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Hey onlytropics,
I just finished / survived the party, and wanted to thank you for this awesome tease.
My balls are still aching but at the same time I also feel like reasonably close to the edge without stroking.
I hope you have some more plans with Jennifer, or other teases, because this was really refreshing. Usually when I attempt ball busting teases, I get annoyed because they ask things I just can't do, like hitting me in the balls at lightning speed.
Here I felt pushed to my limits aswell, but the demands kept being reasonable, so I kept following them. Also I loved that Jennifer did nit just give commands, but kept the teasing up aswell, which is really important to me
Below are some suggestions I think would really fit this style well:
I just finished / survived the party, and wanted to thank you for this awesome tease.
My balls are still aching but at the same time I also feel like reasonably close to the edge without stroking.
I hope you have some more plans with Jennifer, or other teases, because this was really refreshing. Usually when I attempt ball busting teases, I get annoyed because they ask things I just can't do, like hitting me in the balls at lightning speed.
Here I felt pushed to my limits aswell, but the demands kept being reasonable, so I kept following them. Also I loved that Jennifer did nit just give commands, but kept the teasing up aswell, which is really important to me
Below are some suggestions I think would really fit this style well:
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Hi malaru,
Thank you very much for your feedback! Much appreciated.
Thank you very much for your feedback! Much appreciated.
That is a great way to put it, didn't even think about that
No specific plans so far but I do intend to follow that road. I was actually earlier thinking about how I could make a similar thing that still feels different. Need to gather some ideas, your suggestions really come in handy!
Thanks! The original plan was, by the way, to have a button on the side which allows to bail out/skip ahead to the next phase at any time. However, I didn't do that since it would not have allowed to paint the picture of Yennifer getting hornier over time, or at least would have made that a lot more difficult.
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Reasons to have oranges at home:
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Yeah, I get what you are saying. It would have to be a very specific instruction in order to keep it safe. More than a couple of inches would probably be unreasonable.onlytropics wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 6:28 pmI will keep the other suggestions in mind whenever Yennifer decides it is time to celebrate again
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I definitely wouldn't mind further celebrations with her :)
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Finally found the time to play this.
I definitely had a lot of fun with it, perhaps surprisingly. Using pace and duration as the main source of intensity rather than just hitting harder and harder worked very well. Using a very sexy model and alluring image sets also did wonders, I was hard for the entire thing. And in a purely pain sort of tease, keeping that arousal is really key. Yennifer's taunts, instructions and all of the dialogue was also a big part of this.
Some small bits of feedback where things might be improved for next time:
I definitely had a lot of fun with it, perhaps surprisingly. Using pace and duration as the main source of intensity rather than just hitting harder and harder worked very well. Using a very sexy model and alluring image sets also did wonders, I was hard for the entire thing. And in a purely pain sort of tease, keeping that arousal is really key. Yennifer's taunts, instructions and all of the dialogue was also a big part of this.
Some small bits of feedback where things might be improved for next time:
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Thank you so much for your feedback and ideas for improvements.
I am, of course, aware that the tease can get monotonous, or let's say predictable, and that is to some degree also part of the concept. I would not make another tease just using the same formula, that wouldn't be interesting.
The 'pause' idea is really great. I didn't even think there might be the need to pause the tease (since you can always adjust the force you are using if it feels too painful), it would have been easy to include. Originally, I wanted to have more sections with small pauses between them, but didn't want to interrupt Yennifer's monologue too much, nor the rhythm of the slapping.
Btw, playtesting this tease (several times) was really a pain
Reasons to have oranges at home:
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
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2. smells nice
3. Milovana
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Yep you are very welcome. And right on I think in that everything worked really well for this tease, but changing it up in any follow ups would be good.
I agree that in an ideal world there shouldn't need to be any pauses, but stuff happens sometimes.
A "I messed up, restart the section" button could work, though it does break the immersion. Same idea with any sort of checkpoints in the tease which can be easily returned to. Both work, both feel mechanical though.
I'm not sure how capable EOS is of having a true pause or 'give me a short break' button which can pick up exactly where the tease left off after the break. But, begging for a break with an appropriate response might be the most immersive way to handle this. I can imagine it would be quite a bit of work to write and link in the pages for this though.
And in the end, I think it's always worth thinking about what's going in the tease when looking at section length. The more toys/ties/etc. involved the more likely something might not be quite right, slip out of place or just need a quick adjustment, especially if it's something the player doesn't have too much experience with. On the other hand basic slapping or stroking, not much can go wrong and force can be adjusted so longer sections are safer.
I agree that in an ideal world there shouldn't need to be any pauses, but stuff happens sometimes.
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A "I messed up, restart the section" button could work, though it does break the immersion. Same idea with any sort of checkpoints in the tease which can be easily returned to. Both work, both feel mechanical though.
I'm not sure how capable EOS is of having a true pause or 'give me a short break' button which can pick up exactly where the tease left off after the break. But, begging for a break with an appropriate response might be the most immersive way to handle this. I can imagine it would be quite a bit of work to write and link in the pages for this though.
And in the end, I think it's always worth thinking about what's going in the tease when looking at section length. The more toys/ties/etc. involved the more likely something might not be quite right, slip out of place or just need a quick adjustment, especially if it's something the player doesn't have too much experience with. On the other hand basic slapping or stroking, not much can go wrong and force can be adjusted so longer sections are safer.
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Choosing a Goddess - a set for anyone to play
The 1000th Reply Celebration Challenge and it's Finale - an ongoing challenge to try
Co-author of Kyla's Party - webtease based on Help me Cum Please.
Miss Elyna's Cum Challenge Winner
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
Well I have limited experience with EOS, but as far as I can tell, a simple pause/resume button seems possible.
That's exactly why I wouldn't do 'jump-to-section'. Immersion is important to me. I did proof-read the tease like 20 times or so just to make sure what Yennifer says sounds realistic and her increasing arousal makes sense.
Not at all, the writing would have taken one more day or so. I will probably take that approach the next time, since it is the most immersive one. The tease, although playing it might hurt A LOT, was supposed to make you feel like home.
Home sweet home with Yennifer
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Re: FB: A Denial Party
finally got around to this
AMAZING! Did this after intense 6 days of denial and edging and I felt like cumming from hitting my balls alone..wow
I really hope there will be more
AMAZING! Did this after intense 6 days of denial and edging and I felt like cumming from hitting my balls alone..wow
I really hope there will be more
We don't want to ruin the fun, do we?
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