I've uploaded what I call a "fan edit" of "Will You Save America?" for GuideMe. This fixes (recreates) the pages (and certain buttons) that caused GuideMe to crash when downloading through traditional means. It also includes several minor changes I made. I did not change very much about the tease. In some cases I restored things that didn't work correctly or were possibly abandoned by Lovecraft. It is his tease; I just changed small things here and there.
This tease is 3000 pages and 5000 pictures. There's about 25 ways to fail and 3 ways not to (more or less, lol). It is a monster! It took me many hours to map it out and figure out where all it was going. It is like a super-sized adult version of a choose-you-own-adventure book. It is a mystery with red herrings. Sometimes it tries to trick you. Sometimes you can take the wrong path and not know you did for half an hour. It really takes some time to digest it all. So, for that reason I added several Checkpoints. This way you can try it, fail, and not get too frustrated by having to start completely over. There isn't too much preventing you from using the checkpoints (I did not put in an elaborate code system) but I caution you to not use them unless you don't care about spoilers.
This isn't perfect. It could still use some spelling and grammar fixes, and there might be a couple confusing plot points. But I was able to look past it and got a lot of enjoyment out of this work. Thank you again, Lovecraft. I hope more people will check it out with this Fan Edit.
https://mega.nz/#!scAC2CRT!49NOewM16O2D ... jrdm1x2HS4
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Re: Feedback: Will you save America? by Lovecraft
Thank you for your work Trusfrated !
This is a good summary of my tease. I think I will employ you to promote my next flashtease
This is a good summary of my tease. I think I will employ you to promote my next flashtease
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Re: Feedback: Will you save America? by Lovecraft
Personally, I did not find it without "cheating." To achieve the main ending(s) seems to require a great deal of luck. You'd also have to make some decisions you wouldn't expect. I do think it is pretty difficult, but that's why I found it so fun. You developed the alternate paths MUCH further than most tease authors.
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Re: Feedback: Will you save America? by Lovecraft
Great tease. Miss the sirens club already. Keep up the good work!
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