I try to avoid that, but with nearly 1500 pages I will miss a few, sorry! I've rejigged the wording a little there and fixed the other spelling errors.
Bokki Tease Club - feedback thread
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Playing the GuideMe version and on Monday so far. I noticed there are some sound files in the media directory but so far haven't heard any. Is that a possible bug or will they come into play later?
Great work on this by the way!!
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They are used, but rarely and for a specific purpose.
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Wow, this was such an amazing tease!!
Just like all your other tease series, to be honest....you a really an awesome content writer.
Have you ever thought at trying to create a personality for teaseAI? I could see you coming out with something beyond amazing with your skills
Just like all your other tease series, to be honest....you a really an awesome content writer.
Have you ever thought at trying to create a personality for teaseAI? I could see you coming out with something beyond amazing with your skills
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Thanks :)Daragorn wrote: ↑Sun Oct 28, 2018 1:30 pm Wow, this was such an amazing tease!!
Just like all your other tease series, to be honest....you a really an awesome content writer.
Have you ever thought at trying to create a personality for teaseAI? I could see you coming out with something beyond amazing with your skills
I have made an AI, although as it says on the tin its simple - just a task to do and thats it. I made it do what I wanted, and haven't updated it since
Beyond that, a 'full' AI isn't really in my wheelhouse. It has plenty of benefits, but It doesn't favor the type of story I like to tell.
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I've reached the end, marked it in the poll so here's some more feedback.
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Well, it is the tease club, not the pain club Sheer happenstance based on what felt right to write, y'know? Some gets more, some get less.Unnamed_007 wrote: ↑Sun Oct 28, 2018 11:00 pm I've reached the end, marked it in the poll so here's some more feedback.
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All in all, it's definitively a great tease Shattered, and something outside of the Chastity series. I was also delighted to see you use the same models, which made it familiar but not an extension.
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None of the endings require anything externally, one is just much rarer to get on a first playthrough.
Which ending did you get this time then? Can't see who gets what on the poll I'm going to guess 2
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Pretty straightforward day today and just some button text to clean up, imo.
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I've only just played the first day and I'm very impressed already. I'm trying to play this in 'real time' (one day per day). We'll see how that goes.
I'm also working on my first tease, and I'm feeling more self-conscious about it after seeing how great yours is
I'm also working on my first tease, and I'm feeling more self-conscious about it after seeing how great yours is
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Oh man don't do that to yourself! Shattered is one of, if not the best tease creators this site has seen over the years. Completely unfair to temper your expectations based on a tease like this one!Kristycookie wrote: ↑Mon Oct 29, 2018 4:37 pmI'm also working on my first tease, and I'm feeling more self-conscious about it after seeing how great yours is
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Will edit these soon. But yeah, Fran has other things on her mind at this point? . I did feel the actual 'tease' part of this tease got left behind in the story I was trying to tell a bit in places, Ironically.jp wrote: ↑Mon Oct 29, 2018 12:18 am Pretty straightforward day today and just some button text to clean up, imo.
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Try it is correct, you try the key and it works, then you unlock it
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Of the entire tease that I've seen so far this was felt like the least inspired day. But as you've already said, 1500+ pages I mean honestly that's one seriously mild complaint from me here. Still super impressed overall.
Then let me know once you see some more endings, because it made your comment very interesting
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Thats the best way, hope you enjoy :)Kristycookie wrote: ↑Mon Oct 29, 2018 4:37 pm I've only just played the first day and I'm very impressed already. I'm trying to play this in 'real time' (one day per day). We'll see how that goes.
I'm also working on my first tease, and I'm feeling more self-conscious about it after seeing how great yours is
Not to worry though, I've left my very first tease up and its somewhat embarassing but eh, may as well. Best of luck with it!
Thanks I've had years of practise at the very least and I'm over 500,000 words (including the script stuff like page names but not all the coding) into writing these, which helps if nothing elsejp wrote: ↑Mon Oct 29, 2018 6:11 pmOh man don't do that to yourself! Shattered is one of, if not the best tease creators this site has seen over the years. Completely unfair to temper your expectations based on a tease like this one!Kristycookie wrote: ↑Mon Oct 29, 2018 4:37 pmI'm also working on my first tease, and I'm feeling more self-conscious about it after seeing how great yours is
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