Dawn_of_Dark wrote: ↑Thu Jul 12, 2018 10:06 pm
Shattered... This tease is just... otherworldly. In the best way.
I know, I know:
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- I've "cheated" through the chastity period to advance through the tease to see the ending (it has been less than a day that you uploaded this), but goddamn I need it.
I didn't have the patience to read through a good chunk of the latter parts, but I will probably try to do so.
I was so conflicted at the end where I wanted to obey Xia but wanted to do a ruined orgasm at the same time
I'll find time to write a proper feedback, for now I just want to say job well done.
You are probably my favorite active(-ish) author. Still, I haven't played through all of your teases (including all the other previous 5 in this series), though I did get some of the references that you put in.
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- The Kasia thing from "A Tease through Dimensions", which btw also ranks up there in my list of all time greats.
- Snippets of "previews" of the Conversion Therapy 2 - which I assume you are working on. Also I tried the codes 0230/0231/0232 in this tease to see the Easter Eggs
Also I'm sure the title is a reference to Stein;Gates (because of themes. Perhaps also a reference to Chaos;Heads, but I'm not that familiar with that series other than the fact that they share creators).
BTW, the links to the polls are not working.
Anyway, good job. I'll find the time to write you some more feedback.
Did you mean to put spoiler tags?
Some of my other teases have shown otherwise, but I've come around to being fine with time skipping. I started this series in the first place because I wanted that enforced chastity timing, but if you'd rather just read through it I've no problem with that, it's there for you to enjoy however you like :)
And that is an interesting notion you raise -
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- Wanting to obey Xia and ruin your orgasm? I expected the other way around for Hailey-followers, but being conflicted in that way certainly is curious :P
And aye, this tease references my past works in a lot of different ways, I'd suggest getting through the Chastity series timed or not and this one will make a lot more sense
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- Yeah if nothing else Kasia was very convienient here, but also served to fit the world as well I think, and she is established to be in the main world.
CT2 is on permanent hold until I get my dues for it, and then we see what goes from there :P But again, a little snippet of what could come was too fitting. And I knew people would try the codes here so I wanted to put at least something there!
And yeah, all the Steins;Gate - my favourite anime, do highly recommend.
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- World lines come from it, Once I thought about using them in a tease I couldn't stop myself and this appeared. I do love my nerdy references but this was another 5 levels upward . I've not watched/read C;H, so anything there was unintentional. I've heard meh things about the anime and C;C.
There is another quite large semi-obvious pop culture reference at one point in the tease as well, but that isn't named so clearly at least!
And the polls should be, they have votes and I tested them without cookies and they loaded fine. Try a different browser?
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I do always enjoy reading feedback (good or bad!) And hearing people have enjoyed it.
Also it's live at 4.8 after a day and that's pretty new, I expect it to plummet as they always do but it's nice to see ^^ 8.5k views in a day ain't too shabby either