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This is my first tease. I had a few ideas and this one seemed the easiest to start with. That is, until I made a little story to go along with it that took 78 pages. Regardless, i enjoyed the experience and learned how I may approach some aspects differently in the future. I also feel like I may have been a little repetitive and dragged things on a bit trying to add to the story.
Please let me know what you thought?
Any criticisms?
Did you enjoyed it?
Are you willing to sacrifice for that Beach Body?
Beach Body - Feedback
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Re: Beach Body - Feedback
Nicely written I think, but if I would lose 35lbs I would be anorexic
So not for me, well done though ^^
So not for me, well done though ^^
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Re: Beach Body - Feedback
Pretty good! I like how unpredictable she was.
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Re: Beach Body - Feedback
I'd probably be all for this. Though, if I DIDN'T make it, I'd have to break up with her. I might be freaky enough for everything else, but I don't go for cheating.
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Re: Beach Body - Feedback
Princess Penny's Subject Number 007
On Her Highness's Submissive Service
On Her Highness's Submissive Service
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Re: Beach Body - Feedback
I'm not beach body ready
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