Rebellion against the Goddess discussion/feedback thread
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Re: Rebellion against the Goddess discussion/feedback thread
Also I think the beginning with Deng Xue is a bit messed up. If you tell her you've already have breakfast she acts as if you had told her you haven't had breakfast yet.
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This was actually intended, I had the script assuming you hadn't eaten and it was either skip directly to the end of the day or at least let you read what would have happened, and I chose to go with the latter. She does mention that you don't need to follow along, but maybe the tone is a bit immersion breaking? Mayhaps that part could do with a rework...killer1243 wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 4:57 pm Also I think the beginning with Deng Xue is a bit messed up. If you tell her you've already have breakfast she acts as if you had told her you haven't had breakfast yet.
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Re: Rebellion against the Goddess discussion/feedback thread
I think it would be best if she just gives you some punishment if you have already eaten and then skips that part or something like that.Shattered wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 5:21 pmThis was actually intended, I had the script assuming you hadn't eaten and it was either skip directly to the end of the day or at least let you read what would have happened, and I chose to go with the latter. She does mention that you don't need to follow along, but maybe the tone is a bit immersion breaking? Mayhaps that part could do with a rework...killer1243 wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 4:57 pm Also I think the beginning with Deng Xue is a bit messed up. If you tell her you've already have breakfast she acts as if you had told her you haven't had breakfast yet.
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Possibly, tis a little too immersion breaking. I'll see what I can do tommorow.killer1243 wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 10:45 pmI think it would be best if she just gives you some punishment if you have already eaten and then skips that part or something like that.Shattered wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 5:21 pmThis was actually intended, I had the script assuming you hadn't eaten and it was either skip directly to the end of the day or at least let you read what would have happened, and I chose to go with the latter. She does mention that you don't need to follow along, but maybe the tone is a bit immersion breaking? Mayhaps that part could do with a rework...killer1243 wrote: ↑Sun Apr 16, 2017 4:57 pm Also I think the beginning with Deng Xue is a bit messed up. If you tell her you've already have breakfast she acts as if you had told her you haven't had breakfast yet.
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killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:30 am Another quick suggestion:
And a question, now that you have finished the series, when would you say Quizmizz Hailey takes place? I am asking because I would like to do the whole series for real, following everything, wearing a chastity belt, and so on. And with the current story I don't see where it fits.
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Shattered wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:37 amkiller1243 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:30 am Another quick suggestion:
And a question, now that you have finished the series, when would you say Quizmizz Hailey takes place? I am asking because I would like to do the whole series for real, following everything, wearing a chastity belt, and so on. And with the current story I don't see where it fits.
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And it takes place at some point between Chastity for the Goddess and Rebellion. The ending to Quizmiss may not be canon depending on how well you do overall, but that is the case elsewhere as well, can't really avoid it with multiple options within the teases :P
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Re: Rebellion against the Goddess discussion/feedback thread
killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 1:00 amShattered wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:37 amkiller1243 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:30 am Another quick suggestion:
And a question, now that you have finished the series, when would you say Quizmizz Hailey takes place? I am asking because I would like to do the whole series for real, following everything, wearing a chastity belt, and so on. And with the current story I don't see where it fits.
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And it takes place at some point between Chastity for the Goddess and Rebellion. The ending to Quizmiss may not be canon depending on how well you do overall, but that is the case elsewhere as well, can't really avoid it with multiple options within the teases :P
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BTW what is the cannon ending? And doesn't the Goddess say somewhere near the beginning of Rebellion that you haven't cum in 6 months or something like that?Shattered wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:37 am And it takes place at some point between Chastity for the Goddess and Rebellion. The ending to Quizmiss may not be canon depending on how well you do overall, but that is the case elsewhere as well, can't really avoid it with multiple options within the teases :P
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Another minor bug, in the beginning when the Goddess tells you, she doesn't want you to have an orgasm anymore, and there are two options (to try to say something or stay silent), deciding to stay silent takes you to the same path that speaking takes you to. But if you start talking and then decide to stop, it just skips the "Stop. Right. There." part. I feel like this is supposed to happen if you do not talk at all. It should just skip this slide/page.
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I have a headcanon, but there are a few different possible canons and I made it that way on purpose -killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 1:09 amBTW what is the cannon ending? And doesn't the Goddess say somewhere near the beginning of Rebellion that you haven't cum in 6 months or something like that?Shattered wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 12:37 am And it takes place at some point between Chastity for the Goddess and Rebellion. The ending to Quizmiss may not be canon depending on how well you do overall, but that is the case elsewhere as well, can't really avoid it with multiple options within the teases :P
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Fixed, thank you. You've been helpful in finding a few small things I've missed, so let me know once you are done for now just in case you find something else and I'll update the guideme file :)killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 17, 2017 1:15 am Another minor bug, in the beginning when the Goddess tells you, she doesn't want you to have an orgasm anymore, and there are two options (to try to say something or stay silent), deciding to stay silent takes you to the same path that speaking takes you to. But if you start talking and then decide to stop, it just skips the "Stop. Right. There." part. I feel like this is supposed to happen if you do not talk at all. It should just skip this slide/page.
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Re: Rebellion against the Goddess discussion/feedback thread
Also there are are a few (about 5 so far) errors in the dialogues that I forgot to report. Stuff like a missed word or something like that. So, if you have a way to extract the text only and run it trough a grammar check you would probably find them.
P.S. I have still not played the finale. I will do that later today.
P.S. I have still not played the finale. I will do that later today.
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