Great feedback... thanks a lot i was definitely trying to add more of a story element. I have gone back and fixed the spelling/grammar mistakes and added a few more lines here and there, to make a smoother experience. First rule of posting should be to read your own work ;-) In regards to the dialog...

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This has been up for a few days now. Anybody have any suggestions or feedback

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The tease editor is great to get people involved, hey I even made my first tease. Any thoughts on adding a flash upload section for those who are a bit adventureous/creative. It might be an alternative for those who want to create a more complex tease.

One of the better features I have come across with teases is timed events. Some examples where this could be used 1. "stroke until the image changes" 2. Challenge style with a reward image if you last xx minutes or a punishment exit option along the lines of "I can't take any more&quo...