Sorry about that. All fixed. Had "start" instead of "page".

My first flash tease. First go at it and didn't have much time to go through it myself. If there is anything that seems wrong or any criticism I'd love to know.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=35038

This is my first tease so I'd appreciate feedback. Came across a gallery that looked familiar and twisted it to some role play along with other things. Kept it short as I wanted some feedback for just basic things (pace, creativity, effectivness, etc.) Can be found here: https://milovana.com/webteas...