For such an odd story, it was exceptionally written and a joy too read!
well done.

Lagop5 wrote:AMAZING!

So hot - well written with my favourite topic thrown in - blackmail!

Also who is this woman? She's great!!

Firmly agreed

Appreciate the input, copy and paste issues no doubt.

Just a short story I was working on as a tease idea, thoiught I'd get feedback.
Hope you enjoy reading ti as much as I've enjoyed writing it :-D

The training of Daisy
Chapter 1:

His ears suddenly perked up and awoke him with a start. She was coming back. A steady click clack of stilleto heel on ...

I'll write the script for it and send you it to proof read if you don't mind?
If that's too much of a chore I'll understand but it'd be appreciated.

Oddly enough she strikes me as the sort of girl you could perhaps pen an interesting character for. I'll give it a go as I've been looking to write something and this has taken my fancy. No promises however .
Henderson

As an avid reader of your stories, I'd like to finally comment and say you truly do get better with each one, this would be brilliant continued.
Where are the novels good sir!?
Henderson

Thanks for all the advice people! it's all leaning much towards a whatever the fuck I fancy tease by the look of things so, expect some dirty goings on soon enough!

Henderson.

I'm currently about to begin writing my first tease, and I was just wondering, what you lovely people on milovana would like to see in a webtease, please leave me either a pm or a comment on here as to what your interests and likes (possibly dislikes) are in a tease, I will do my best to accomdate ...

Obviously aware you'll be totally busy with the flood of requests and messages. Just to let you know I've sent an e-mail, won't expect a reply anytime soon but it's there waiting :)

Chow for now!
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A 2? By god I was near enough right with my guess of a 1

I'm in for next week as I said Miss Jay and I hope it's higher, good luck this week participants!
I think you'll need it mmm ?

Henderson
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Then I'll have to hope my very hardest for a repeat!

If not I'll try my best to take it graciously

(fingers crossed it's 1, sorry boys!)

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I've a stressful week full of exams and such. This would be entirely too much pressure for the week. I can envision it being a 1 aswell so. I'll sign up in advance for next week if it's not being too cheeky :-P .

Good luck to everyone participating this week! I have a feeling you'll need it ...

I can only hope . I'll be keeping everyone updated via this anyway so check back .

Anyone else got any stories? see if we can make the thread more than just about me?


Henderson.
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An update for the lovely people of Milovana.

Wednesday she came round and we had a talk about getting back together. We sat and started watching a film (My best friend's girl - well worth watching!) and things got a bit steamy. Then she turns to me and says
"You do know since you're my bitch, if ...