Would it be possible to include a new field in the database, or some extra space in the title field, for tease writers to voluntarily include some content description? That's really all we'd need, and it's certainly easier than my "rooms" idea. Some standard codes like those used in alt.se...

- How to write concise instructions although you don't know much about the situation of the viewer. (For all we know he might be on an expedition somewhere in the Brazilian jungle.) Grab some wet banana leaves and squirt them with the bee juice; then rub them on your cock! Don't cum! :lol: Dave

I'm wondering if a useful feature would be to have different rooms for different fetishes. Different people like different things, some of which might be a complete turnoff for somebody else. For example, some guys are attracted to plump or fat girls; some guys like older women; some guys like trann...

This probably goes without saying, but if you implement a search feature of tease attributes, I would avoid indicating whether the tease permits you to cum at the end or not. That's always better when it's a surprise. Personally I prefer "not", but occasionally a cum command can be pretty ...

I didn't finish it because it started with a couple of pages of ball-thumping, which I don't really like, so I bailed early. Other than that, it looked good. I'll try it again and maybe ignore that instruction and then post more feedback.

dave

I thought it was great. Other than the spelling mistakes it's quite well-written. Interesting concept, too, a little different from the usual. I wish it had gone on with the group -- maybe in part 2? Actually I thought it was going to end with a giant closeup on the last page, something you really *...

If they're going to be long and challenging, they have to be well-written and tight. Bad writing can be distracting. And I like lots of shorter commands rather than fewer pages of longer commands. It helps to be able to see a new image and a few new teasing lines every couple of minutes at the most....

This is great! I thought these teases were gone for good. Nice job, Seraph, and any/everyone else involved.

Thanks for the quick account activation, too.

dave