Is it the one submatt wrote about a girl that was teasing you while you waited to see the mistress and she over a few different teases you find out she is the mistress and then she punishes you for cumming? The only other one I can think of like that that submatt would of done is an older series abo...

Okay I made all the fixes except page 24 because I'm a little confused as what to do with the apostrophe. But thanks again for the help.

Not at all, I am happy you liked it. I was trying to finish this before my rommate woke up, we share wireless but I didn't need to explain this to him...so. I will try and fit in those corrections. I do admit I am not the best at spelling or grammar. I had gone back through it at first and found two...

I had to take it down for a second, I was having trouble with double pages, deleted one and it pushed my last pic off...had to fix it.
Anyway like dislikes, suggestions or fixes needed?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G6q0rnegGoE

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ZXI95H4FAo

while they are up anyway.

Best tease on altarboy is "the bitchy tease". Would post link but I'm using a wii. Anyway the guy is kept in denial for a realky long time by his cute/bitchy acting wife. Really good and multiple parts....I think 5.

While you guys are on the subject of clips4sale there was a really good store there that I think was called jerkoffschool. I had a few downloaded once, Kendra James is always awsome. Some were very verbally dominate, cum eating was also in a few.

I think that there is no right answer for anyone. Some are different then others, and thus like different things.
Some may like younger girls with cute talk, others girls that look like their wives w/cuckold themes.
Not that anyone is trying to say this, but there is no right answer.

Well had a few dif. Ideas, but didn't want to use them all on the first so it was sort of a pick and choose. But yes, liz is great. I was afraid the qtip thing was a bit stron, but I couldnt think of a good ending and that just came into my head from stories I've read before. I was amazed how hard i...

My first tease. Dont be to harsh, I tried my best, and wanted to get it in bofore work, given the lack or teases posted as of late. Yes, it's a pain tease, but it's what I like. :-) Any suggestions, I know I need to work on the art of verbal seduction, and would have, but time was not on my side, I ...