I'll second that motion.

I'd love to see where it goes as a multi-part. The model was hot, the writing was hot, well done squire!

Indigo,

That was HOT (if too short)! I want to encourage you to do more! Damn...

Patch

Mate, 10 out of 10 and a koala bear stamp for you. That was well-written. Decent attention to spelling and grammar, and a good story, too. The model wasn't my thing, but she was believable in the context -- the writing and the storytelling and the pictures all together put it over the edge. Well don...

Strangetown gets my vote. Very hot series.