Hi Chico,

thank you very much, PM follows!

Cheers,

frozen

Hello everyone!

As you can see I am new here.

I started to write on a tease for females since there seem to be only few of these. I don't mind that the target audience isn't huge. ;)

What makes it a bit difficult for me is the fact that I am no native speaker so I could need some help with ...

Hi shinini,

this story is really well done, I love the plot and it is very well written. I think you doubled a "sich" on one occasion but that's all I could find.

You did a good job with that main character. She seems to be realistic within the margins such a story allows. ;-)

Of course it is ...

Hello everyone!

Obviously I am new here. I will just look around a bit and maybe write a tease or two. Although my imagination of a good tease differs a bit from most of the ones I saw here. Probably my teases will never get high ratings if I ever write some - but hey, that's not what it is about ...