Another great chapter, and I love the model Suzi Simpson too!

This tease is superb!

Really enjoyed this cactusman, one of you best teases I would say! (And I say that as someone who enjoys all your work!)

Utterly immense!

Tease is still unavailable.

Missed taking part in this it seems, but it's great to see you back Miss Jay.

Great fun, I liked the innocence angle to it too.

Only thing you've had found out is that you're a complete liar.

Really enjoyed part 2. :)

Pretty sure I've read a story online somewhere that was pretty much this idea, and like that I did enjoy the fantasy of it. The shocking spelling though did break the flow as I found myself having to re-read sentances a few times to try and work out what was actually being said. Sort out the basic e...

The fact that most of your teases are very highly rated says more than we could about if the community wants you to continue. People will always hate on the top people, especially on something like this where a particular kink will influence if people like the tease or not. For me anything to do wit...

Quite amazing!

One of the best stories I've read for a long time!

For a webtease it is quite long, however as a story it is quite wonderful! The story is stunning, and I really enjoyed reading it like most of your work. Perhaps if you labeled them as stories rather than teases then it may rid a little of the criticism you receive for that? However if it were down ...

I agree with what Bindo says, however it is still a fabulous tease, you're a great asset to this site cactusman, the fact your teases all have such amazing ratings is a testament to that.

Wow!

cactusman you have a real talent!

Thank for another stunning tease!