Hi again,

Thanks for your feedback from the last tease (Slave Job Application). The most obvious point was that it was too short. This one is twice the length and has a lot more text on each page. Hopefully the text is equally, if not more stimulating. And before you ask, I haven't used any images ...

I agree about it being a bit short. It was really just a practise run for me, and as I was learning the editor, it actually took me about 2 hours to put it together, and it was late at night. So apologies for that. The next one will hopefully be better!

Thanks for the feedback.

Static

Hi All,

I was just wondering what you all thought of my webtease "Slave Job Application". It was my first tease.

I'd be interested in any feedback, so that I can take it onboard when I create my next one.

By the way, I think this site is great.

All the best,

Static