I'm starting a flash tease, with those changes. Going to add little games within the flash. Hopefully this will be an improvement. Thanks for your advice! And thanks for rating it.

Wasn't sure which post I should put this query in. What's the possibility of having hyperlinks to your own pages within the same tease? You could give the player a choice and have a greater variety of endings. For example Select A to go through door 1, B to go through door 2. etc.

Or how do I ...

Thanks for the suggestion!
I'll be creating another web tease, this is only a trial to help find what other people like. As you could most probably tell, it was first tease for me.