Les: D'oh. Thanks.

isaccs: Yep, some people like the instruction type Teases, others like the story type ones. I generally like to write the story type ones. But thanks for the feedback, maybe I'll try writing an instruction one eventually.

This is a post to catch any and all feedback for my new Webtease 'Happy Birthday Mr. P' ... I hope you all like it.

I enjoyed this tease. Well written, with a nicely cocksure lead character, if that's the right adjective. I agree with the previous poster that it is quite short ... maybe she should rub the chastity in just a little more! Thanks for posting it though, the quality was good and from a personal point ...

darkstar wrote:actualy im going to elevate it from loving it to awsomness

its encouraged me to go back into chastity, and it was hot as hell doing it in the cage.

Hehe, my girlfriend read that and said "maybe he should live the dream and go without for four months."

I quite liked it .. nicely evil selfish girl, and none of that endless "ten strokes of this, 30 of that" stuff.

One thing though ... go into page 6 and change 'seamen' to 'semen' ... I break off being lost in the fantasy when I suddenly get an image of mariners!

I wrote another WebTease called 'Teased in the Kitchen' ... I am interested in any and all feedback. Thanks to all.

Hmmm ... I have a hard limit on filling out BDSM checklists.

Flying the flag for Australia is:

http://wickedweasel.com/en-au

Nice professional models, and some gems occasionally turn up in the user-submitted Bikini Contest.

this site has for the most part managed to avoid most of this seedy pretence that has ruined other sites that had great potential (Such as CollarMe which is now really a haven for scammers and fakes). Just a quick "your mileage may vary": I was on CollarMe and met up with a Thai girl who ...

les wrote:
If all are this good we should be really worried.

Les:

wath?! you are hesitate?!

SM terms and mundane terms can often be mixed up. Imagine being tied naked and spreadeagled, and hearing your domme say "Time for me to hit the sack."

bookworm: I think what the Original Poster was referring to was submatt's huge collection of earlier teases. He wrote over a hundred I think, some of exceptional quality, but then removed them all from the site. He came back and wrote a few more, but didn't put the other ones back unfortunately. Phi...

Thanks a lot for the feedback, everyone, it's extremely useful. pissy-boy, your comment was extremely illuminating. For a long time I have had the impression that there are two distinct types of readers of this site, the ones who prefer the "instruction-based" teases and the ones who prefe...

Interested in any and all feedback on the webtease I just wrote. Thanks to all.

Nice tease, but there is a typo near the end. Page 104 references Pages 104 and 105, should be 105 and 106.