Very nice tease; thank you for contributing. It's good to see some harsher teases!

srb: You replied to me (about the use of Tags): "If I want to read a feminization or a forced orgasm tease then I’ll be able to find it. It’s a courtesy to the audience." I don't disagree with you there at all: I am quite happy with the concept of tagging so you CAN do precisely that. I ju...

This is an interesting topic. While I agree with many of the "style" issues raised by the original poster, I have very different views on some of the content issues. One in particular: I really enjoy the "denial" side as much as the tease, and I really get a kick out of the chast...

"Are you ready? your prize is ..."

... a flashtease caught in a permanent loop.

Chiemese:

Superb tease ... loved the little touch of financial domination.

Please write more.

I hate to go all mathematical here, but actually in terms of the ranking of ratings, the absence of the very low scores does not matter all that much. A good tease scores a range of scores in the 4 to 5 region, and you are saying - correctly, in my opinion - that a poor tease should score in the 1-2...

I'm glad this has been brought up. After all the fanfare about flash teases when they arrived, I have to admit I now skip them entirely because they are SO slow. Yes yes, I understand the point about it being in the author's control instead of the reader, but honestly some of them you'd have to have...

I like your idea here ... keep going with it. And ignore the "hundred strokes" comment; it's just a troll comment. The "hundred left, hundred right" teases get very dull indeed, in my humble opinion.

Have to agree with Edge's comments here. I think there is another factor too. Let's say the "re-author" found the pics that were originally used. And remembered the plot. Does that means that he could write the tease just as the original author did? Not at all! The best teases are not just...

I don't comment on teases much, but I wanted to congratulate the author of this one. I like teases where the girl in control is just a little bit ... well, OUT of control! I get a bit bored with the "recipe" ones - "Ingredients: toys X, Y, Z. Method: 50 strokes with X, 50 strokes with...

Thank you all for all the positive feedback. I have written a few more scripts but have to tweak them to get them aligned with some choices from my photo collection. sissypatseybelle: Altairboy's site (it is actually Altairboy not Altarboy, despite the website address) is a highly-respected site and...

We seem to be getting a few of the Choose Your Own Adventure style teases coming in, and they seem fairly popular ... I may do one myself some day. These are hampered by the existence of the Continue button on the page though, forcing the author to write "Don't press Continue", which rathe...

Excellent ... much needed ... I hate hunting the Continue button too.

Whew ... I thought my tease must have broken the website.

I have just written my first tease, called Bad Girl. I hope everyone likes it. As a new author, I would appreciate any and all feedback. I don't promise to follow suggestions, but I will certainly take them on board.

Martin C