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by fitzy
Tue Feb 04, 2025 10:46 pm
Forum: The Art of Webteasing
Topic: [Feedback] The Humiliation Centre
Replies: 3
Views: 1516

Re: [Feedback] The Humiliation Centre

Firstly, congrats on your first tease! Quite rough around the edges, but it is refreshing to see new content creators.

Now onto the criticisms:

The flow of the dialogue was chaotic, you have the female officer jump from sentence to a new sentence with no delay, after scene changes.

Lots of ...
by fitzy
Fri Jan 03, 2025 10:52 pm
Forum: The Art of Webteasing
Topic: [FEEDBACK] Maze
Replies: 7
Views: 2427

Re: [FEEDBACK] Maze

Came for the maze, stayed for the beta chip :-D

I think it's good for a first tease, much better than most. As kerker said it would be great if it were even longer.

Other than that here are some suggestions:
- A selection of Tinder dates at the beginning, they all have different types of beta ...