Firstly, congrats on your first tease! Quite rough around the edges, but it is refreshing to see new content creators.
Now onto the criticisms:
The flow of the dialogue was chaotic, you have the female officer jump from sentence to a new sentence with no delay, after scene changes.
Lots of ...
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- Tue Feb 04, 2025 10:46 pm
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: [Feedback] The Humiliation Centre
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- Fri Jan 03, 2025 10:52 pm
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: [FEEDBACK] Maze
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Maze
Came for the maze, stayed for the beta chip :-D
I think it's good for a first tease, much better than most. As kerker said it would be great if it were even longer.
Other than that here are some suggestions:
- A selection of Tinder dates at the beginning, they all have different types of beta ...
I think it's good for a first tease, much better than most. As kerker said it would be great if it were even longer.
Other than that here are some suggestions:
- A selection of Tinder dates at the beginning, they all have different types of beta ...
