I liked the tease, although I also encountered some bugs that are mentioned in other comments like the final gate not opening.

There is however a bit too much repetitive actions within the tease for my liking. Every girl you came across would basically do the same thing; first edges and then ...

Is there any use for the other rings?

Also is there a way to purchase the Blacksmiths 'membership'?


No they are just to bait you into buying the wrong one.

As for the membership, not yet, I wanna make some updates with side content and more characters but that will come later rather than ...

Is there any use for the other rings?

Also is there a way to purchase the Blacksmiths 'membership'?

I loved this tease!

Here are some of the spelling mistakes I noticed:

Mysterious Atelier
Prologue:
1. Two capital letters: 'Oh You're in the lost forest of course'
2. Afraid being spelled wrong: 'Oh my, I'm affraid there is no easy way out,'
3. Imbued spelled wrong: 'Well of course, but it's mine ...

You did almost everything right.
Nice pictures suited for the story, the character and her vibe works.
Kept the protagonist simple enough.

The only thing that I am not a fan of is the longer timers with no changes.
Some are almost 3 mins with nothing really happening.
That's too long ...

Hi everyone!

I just published my first tease ever!
I'm very curious what people think about it.
All feedback is welcome!

Here is the link: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=71031
Enjoy!