Proof reading week 2:

. (Summary if them can be found in Week 1) -> Summary of
For example, if you could earn 20 cagepoints , you loose 10 cagepoints now.", -> you lose
I failed you totaly, Mistress Blake -> totally
Hope, you felt this lesson -> drop the comma
If you failed more then one time ...

Proofreading for Week 1:
(reading through the different punishments i wish i had been a bad sub sometimes)

Add those to get first half of your basline -> baseline
Rule No.1) You're not allowed to cum during locktober, unless specificaly -> specifically
And since you are now our little locked up ...

Went through week 0 now to look for typos:

I'm coming back from my own preperations -> preparations
I bet, you have some laying around allready, -> already
As I hinted, there are three principal materials for those badboys -> maybe "bad boys" ?
...comperatively light weight. -> comparatively
But ...

So the pledge had to be:
- easily achievable and measurable, but also extendable depending on my mood,
- vague enough, so it doesn't feel like a chore,
- benefiting me in the long term.

"If Mistress Blake asked me to, I would pledge to spend at least 15 minutes, twice per week, learning about ...

Update Locktober 31:

1485 + 15 + 60 (buttplug pledge) - 30 = 1530 CP

I completed the buttplug pledge successfully. I think i have failed the Get-in-shape pledge. I did quite a lot during week 2 and 3 and managed to lose 5 kilos, but failed to do much during the last week.

"I agreed to stay in ...

Update Locktober 30:

1385 + 15 + 5 + 10 + 10 + 10 = 1435


In the past week, Mistress taught me the importance of her pleasure going first. Any woman's pleasure goes first. My pleasure is when i can submit to her.

Mistress Lilly offered me to experience both pleasure and pain. I could show her ...

hubsi82 wrote: Mon Oct 30, 2023 7:26 pm Feedback:
.... There was one Task which was not taking me back to the selection menu. Not sure if that was due to internet issues or the tease itself.

I noticed that one also.

I'll try and load the scripts via the browser's debug mode and read through them to find typos. First i thought it would be good to split this task, but i guess the more eyes, the better :)

Some suggestions / ideas:


ideas for some more interactivity:

Mistress could let you choose to do X or Y, but there will be consequences (either hidden or known to the player), e.g. Edge to a censored or uncensored photo -> if uncensored, player has to smack his balls after. I guess there are ...

Update Locktober 29:

1285 + 15 + 90 - 5 = 1385

Finished 18 out of 24 tasks, makes 90 CP.
I answered the choice with "No, i want to stay caged" this time, but Mistress didn't tell me if she appreciated my worship session yesterday, so i will deduct those 5 points.
I mostly enjoyed to redo the tasks ...

Update Locktober 28:

1175 + 0 + 0 + 60 + 50 = 1285
Finished the eat (pre)cum pledge for 50 CP and the censoredger pledge for 60 CP. Didn't get basepoints today as i took a medical leave yesterday.

28:

When Mistress Blake gave me the generous offer of unlocking myself without supervision, i ...

Update Locktober 26 & 27:

1075 + 15 + 15 +70 = 1175

26: Only basepoints so far.
27: "Mistress Lilly Lane's painslut"

As soon as i saw her tattooed body, i knew i was in for a ride.
I. For the spanking i used my newly aquired pink leather paddle. This one really smacks, much better than a ...

Update Locktober 24 & 25:

1015 + 15 + 20 + 15 + 10 = 1075

24:
Having a break day was nice, i enjoyed playing some video games without thinking about my poor locked cock. That is, until i had to do my censored edges for the pledge - i almost failed by going too far! :-O

25:

The past week has ...

Update Locktober 23rd:

960 + 15 + 10 + 15 + 10 + 5 = 1015


When Mistress Blake wanted to get her lover's cock ready for fucking her, i didn't hesitate and helped her by sucking on it for 10 minutes (+10).
I chose to be fucked by my medium anal dildo (is 12 cm medium or small?)(+15). After ...

Update Locktober 22:

910 + 15 + 25 + 10 = 960

Being blindfolded really heightens the senses!

I imagined the two other subs from the tease caressing my body, and guiding the big cock to my mouth. With a buttplug in my ass and the big dildo in my mouth, i touched my body with a feather tickler. I ...