AMAZING tease again! Seriously, 5 stars! Suuuper hot. love it. And I think I prefer the simple click through format for the teases. Waiting for text to slowly scroll/animate in a lot of other teases just makes them harder to read. Sometimes simple is better.

some very very minor proof reading stuff ...

hey, again, truly amazing tease! Here are some minor typos I noticed on the second read through.

page 10 should be - knight's armor

page 12 unexpected ending to this line, I'm guessing it should say "a collar" : "Suddenly I felt something tightening around my neck my hand rushed to my neck and i ...

suuuper hot tease. Loved it. I really miss your old captions from bdsmlr, it was some of the best content on that site(back before the site became borderline unusable, lol). It would be great to see some of those old captions revived in tease form! super hot! 10 out of 10!