I enjoyed it a lot my only constructive criticism is palming was always too short to ever get intense, just 20 second's and it's over with lube in my hand almost had the opposite effect.
Encounters could use more images, other than that loved it.
The dragon encounter was excellent with the perfect ...

Other ending suggestion girl from second half of day two comes back after researching she's crazy kinky now in a side room ties you to a chair makes you edge and stroke to a metronome right after edging and if you fail she overstims you with postorgasm palming but if you make it through you get ...