Very good story! Would love to see a continuation.

I took your terrible advice and edged along, but without the orgasm at the end.

Think I remember the story, but no clue where I saw it. Do you remember the forum? Maybe it can be found on the way back machine.

Semi-related so thought I'd share. I've been writing stories for years and just recently began adding them to Literorica and the comments I get can be baffling. Some down vote because it didn't contain their specific kinks, as if I wrote it just for them. Some want more hardcore porn descriptions ...

Don't know if people prefer seeing the text posted here or if linking to elsewhere is better or both? For now here's both. This was a quick one to get me through a bad funk and hopefully jump start being creative again.

https://literotica.com/s/a-costly-tease

Victor woke up moaning as he felt a ...

forbiddendesire wrote: Mon Jan 10, 2022 11:23 pm I finally read this story after having it open for many weeks. Loved it! I love all your stories and this one was great too, wish I could find a supernatural-powered Mistress of my own

Thanks! The prospect of being teased for all eternity doesn't sound too bad.

janmb wrote: Fri Dec 31, 2021 1:10 am Pretty close to what I had envisioned as well actually.

Still working on a sequel? Sure hope so

Sadly, I haven't looked at it in years. Been working on other projects. Hopefully one of these days...

Brilliant writing, loved it.

Would be awesome with a report of the associated picture as well (always fun to see how much one's personal fantasies misses the actual mark :w00t: )


Thanks!
I didn't realize the link I gave at the top wasn't for the specific post I referenced. Oops.

https ...

Vanta wrote: Tue Sep 14, 2021 1:30 am Any idea on her? From Overdrive 2, was tough to get a steady shot

That's Chloe Bennet, and that shot is from the Valley Girl movie remake.

if you can, you could make a EOS tease from this, a simple one: all black, minimal pictures, must wear headphones, in a dark room, loud sounds, and player/user just reads and picks from an A or B button. sort of like a minimal choose your own story.


Would you like fries with that? :-)
Sorry, I ...

The next few days for Victor were a blur of pain. True to her word, they used every piece of bondage furniture, he felt the sting of every whip, flogger, crop, and cane all over his body. Clips, clamps, and clothespins on his nipples, cock, balls, and anywhere else she could fit them. Some were ...

So this is a story I finished back in March, could have sworn I posted, but apparently never did. Something sucked all the erotic, creative juices from me at that time and I'm only now getting them back. I was actually finishing and about to post a different story when I realized this one was ...

Again this got me from the first line. In the first half I was all giggling about the story and imagining how Victor will solve this with a tiny plastic laptop instead of a massive steel typewriter (Hitting her about 1000 times, shouting "Die, bitch!'"? I admit that sometimes I'm a bit on the ...

This is a very blatant rip-off of the book/movie Misery , so my apologies to Stephen King. It’s a bit darker than my other stories, but just as ridiculous with the fantasy.

https://lovesthepain.blogspot.com/2021/02/teasery.html

Victor Tillman was a very successful author. His novels were nothing ...

I loved this story, but I don't really enjoy the reading experience on the milovana forums.
Do you post your stories somewhere else as well?

I think you'll get a great reception on literotica for example.


In my signature is a link to my blog where I have all of my stories. Also my BDSMlr if ...

Thanks everyone. Glad you all enjoyed it.

Drool wrote: Sat Jan 30, 2021 4:26 pm Really a great read. Poor lucky Victor.

I always wish I could be the Victor in my stories.