Need some help with my first webtease
Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 10:44 pm
I've got a good set of photos and a storyline. I'd just like some help to improve the text.
It's about a boy being punished by the head girl. Anyone willing to preview my story and help me with the dialogue?
It's about a boy being punished by the head girl. Anyone willing to preview my story and help me with the dialogue?