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First Webtease
Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:38 pm
by chris1972
Have really enjoyed this website. Just did my first tease entitled Owned By Goddess Kimmy. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.
Re: First Webtease
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:10 am
by Chico
I thought this was an excellent web-tease - simple in concept but very challenging with good use of time.
The build up of tension and anticipation of what was coming next just suited me - thanks a lot
I have one small comment which I will PM to you.
Re: First Webtease
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:00 pm
by chris1972
Yeah, the 5 minutes of stroking should've had better directions. I also would've changed some things about the ending. Next time, I'll think things out a little more rather than just rushing through.