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Hey

here you can leave your final message for the tease if you want to. It could be either a conclusion or just your opinion what could've been better. Or you could tell me, if there're any bugs, cuz its not even working probably on my computer...
Every little helps

Coco

I thought it was really great.

I loved the multiple-slides for long periods, rather than 3 minutes staring at the same slide/text. Four 15-second slides are more exciting than a 1 minute slide even if it's the same pic and different text. I wish more authors would do that.

The length was good too, for me.

The tone was awesome. I prefer an encouranging "let's have fun together" tone to a "you are slime" approach... I've never understood how a domme calling a guy a worm doesn't demean both of them.

The only thing I can think of that I'd've changed is to, very near the end, change the cool-off time after an edge from 10 seconds to 5, just to give it an even greater sense of momentum.

This is in the wrong forum, btw. It should be moved to "The Art of Webteasing"

Thanks camel for your review, I really appreciate you liked the tease. But I can't actually move this thread, can I?