Re: Darkness Cums
Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:35 am
I will just start by saying that this is great work and I knew it would be great work from the very first page. I wanted to start a thread about this but I'm new and wasn't sure how people felt about someone starting a thread about every tease. I wasn't sure if people left it up to the author to start it.
I haven't been able to complete it yet because it is super hard. I love what I have seen so far though. The writing is awesome the pictures fit the theme and I could feel the personality of the different women. I found myself a little bored during the stamina beginning but I felt that it was intentional and part of the difficulty and atmosphere. Depending on your intentions with that part it may be nice to add a few pictures or change it up to spice things up a little bit because you are literally staring at 4 pictures for like two hours. I don't think this detracts from the quality but since I don't know exactly what you were going for there I thought I should mention it.
Again I loved your work and thank you.
I haven't been able to complete it yet because it is super hard. I love what I have seen so far though. The writing is awesome the pictures fit the theme and I could feel the personality of the different women. I found myself a little bored during the stamina beginning but I felt that it was intentional and part of the difficulty and atmosphere. Depending on your intentions with that part it may be nice to add a few pictures or change it up to spice things up a little bit because you are literally staring at 4 pictures for like two hours. I don't think this detracts from the quality but since I don't know exactly what you were going for there I thought I should mention it.
Again I loved your work and thank you.