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[DeniedHard]

I will just start by saying that this is great work and I knew it would be great work from the very first page. I wanted to start a thread about this but I'm new and wasn't sure how people felt about someone starting a thread about every tease. I wasn't sure if people left it up to the author to start it.

I haven't been able to complete it yet because it is super hard. I love what I have seen so far though. The writing is awesome the pictures fit the theme and I could feel the personality of the different women. I found myself a little bored during the stamina beginning but I felt that it was intentional and part of the difficulty and atmosphere. Depending on your intentions with that part it may be nice to add a few pictures or change it up to spice things up a little bit because you are literally staring at 4 pictures for like two hours. I don't think this detracts from the quality but since I don't know exactly what you were going for there I thought I should mention it.

Again I loved your work and thank you.

[wonderbo]

I really enjoyed this tease as well. Your writing style is great. You do a good job of creating the environment and telling the story. Normally teases that feature enormous amounts of iterations and multiple sets of instructions on each page are annoying to me. Your writing is so good that I was able to get past this and enjoyed it greatly! I must admit, however, that I altered the instructions considerably so that I could actually complete it. None-the-less, it was still a very challenging tease.

[all2true]

WOW.
What a tease, I did a read through
I will have to try this one,
perhaps several times. Will probably take me more than one day to do it.
Oh by the way, for page six, the 10,000 strokes?
you could do this tease:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=3209
Specifically designed for doing 10,000 ! (just a suggestion)

PS, do anouther like this!
Liked it very much.

[Chico]

This is a really fantastic tough tease and because of the length of it, today is the first opportunity I've had to try it. I've done about 4 hours of it today but "failed" due to over-enthusiasm in the edging phase.
I also found the 10,000 strokes almost impossible to do in the time allowed and moved on after 4,500 otherwise, I played it strictly by the book as I like "having" to comply with instructions

I'm going to give it another go but trying 10 sets of 500 strokes instead of 10,000 but I may need to get some more talcum powder as I find this is the best way to avoid fricton burns/abrasions on long teases.

May I add my thanks and congratulations to the author for his hard work in producing a superb tease and don't anybody dare tell me what happens in the end !!