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"The Slave's choice" feedback

Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:30 am
by billlr
This is a great tease.
I love the teases where the guy gets to have sex with the girl.

I really liked how the action built up to the sex, and the pictures fit perfectly with the story.
I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel, but THAT would be a bit much to ask for.

Good job again reflog1.

Re: "The Slave's choice" feedback

Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:00 pm
by Incubo
I also thought it was well done.
My only "problem" I guess was that you didn't let me choose. Kind of forced me to do Raven.
Now, that's not to say I would jump at that chance, but given the choice in the story I'd have picked Kate.

Still nicely done though.