This is a great tease.
I love the teases where the guy gets to have sex with the girl.
I really liked how the action built up to the sex, and the pictures fit perfectly with the story.
I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel, but THAT would be a bit much to ask for.
Good job again reflog1.
"The Slave's choice" feedback
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billlr
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"The Slave's choice" feedback
"That was IN-credible!
Thanks, guys.
Oops. I mean bitches." -Melissa from "Restaurant mistress".
"So, what do you say?
Hurry up!
I think the baboons need some new chew toys." - Kyra from "A day at the zoo".
Thanks, guys.
Oops. I mean bitches." -Melissa from "Restaurant mistress".
"So, what do you say?
Hurry up!
I think the baboons need some new chew toys." - Kyra from "A day at the zoo".
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Re: "The Slave's choice" feedback
I also thought it was well done.
My only "problem" I guess was that you didn't let me choose. Kind of forced me to do Raven.
Now, that's not to say I would jump at that chance, but given the choice in the story I'd have picked Kate.
Still nicely done though.
My only "problem" I guess was that you didn't let me choose. Kind of forced me to do Raven.
Now, that's not to say I would jump at that chance, but given the choice in the story I'd have picked Kate.
Still nicely done though.
