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[RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2024 9:47 am
by Davo
Hi everyone!
I just published my first tease ever!
I'm very curious what people think about it.
All feedback is welcome!
Here is the link:
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=71031
Enjoy!
Re: [RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2024 2:16 pm
by manwithcape
You did almost everything right.
Nice pictures suited for the story, the character and her vibe works.
Kept the protagonist simple enough.
The only thing that I am not a fan of is the longer timers with no changes.
Some are almost 3 mins with nothing really happening.
That's too long.
Re: [RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2024 4:57 pm
by Davo
manwithcape wrote: Sat Jun 15, 2024 2:16 pm
You did almost everything right.
Nice pictures suited for the story, the character and her vibe works.
Kept the protagonist simple enough.
The only thing that I am not a fan of is the longer timers with no changes.
Some are almost 3 mins with nothing really happening.
That's too long.
Thanks for your feedback!
The fact that the protagonist is simple is a positive thing in your eyes?
I fully agree with your last point and just added more images and text during timers.
Hopefully that will make the interaction with her feel more dynamic in these parts.
Re: [RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2024 7:03 pm
by Slave24
Loved it! Really hope a sequel is in the works
Re: [RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2024 6:40 am
by manwithcape
Yes.
Some teases create complex main characters but they are so different from me that they take me out of the story.
Simple characters or stereotypes are actually better imo since you know what to expect.
The twists should be in the story, not in the absurd choices "yourself" makes.
Re: [RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2024 6:28 am
by SethK
How long does this tease roughly take to complete?
Re: [RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1
Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2024 5:59 pm
by anewname_guy
Loved this fun tease! I am also hoping for a sequel and another chance to spend time with Miss Fae! Loved hearing how my actions made her happy, how she called me a good boy and how I felt cared for.