Milovana.com

Hello everyone this is my first tease hope you guys enjoy.

If you want to leave any feedback or find a bug please report here, i'll appreciate a lot.

~A warning: English is not my first language, so if see anything really bad let me know too please.~


Thanks for watching.

Thanks for creating content!
I liked it overall, especially Lisas attitude, girls being a strict and pushing you is always fun.
Its a 4/5 for me, mainly because its one of the smaller teases compared to other multiple path / multiple hour larger projects.
There are lots of grammatical errors, most notably you wrote "fell" instead of "feel" consistently. Some problems with plurals: "that mountain" (singular) "those mountains" (plural) but you mix these up. also it should be "i was expecting a lot more from you" instead of "waiting a lot more of you"
There are more but these small things did not ruin the tease for me.
I can recommend trying it once for everyone.
content:

Spoiler: show

plenty of stroking then the latter half focuses on edgeholding. i did not measure the lenght exactly but it was over half an hour

Jackall wrote: Thu Mar 10, 2022 11:30 am Thanks for creating content!
I liked it overall, especially Lisas attitude, girls being a strict and pushing you is always fun.
Its a 4/5 for me, mainly because its one of the smaller teases compared to other multiple path / multiple hour larger projects.

I am glad you ejoyed.

There are lots of grammatical errors, most notably you wrote "fell" instead of "feel" consistently. Some problems with plurals: "that mountain" (singular) "those mountains" (plural) but you mix these up. also it should be "i was expecting a lot more from you" instead of "waiting a lot more of you"
There are more but these small things did not ruin the tease for me.
I can recommend trying it once for everyone.
content:

Spoiler: show

plenty of stroking then the latter half focuses on edgeholding. i did not measure the lenght exactly but it was over half an hour

Thanks man for your feedback, i'll make some changes.