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[FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2021 5:02 pm
by jb22
Hi, I just finished my first milovana tease, beta test. Any feedback is appreciated.
It starts as a survey to figure out how much of a beta (vs alpha) you are. You then get an appropriate reward for your beta level.

Enjoy!
JB

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 1:13 am
by offthechain
Thanks for making this! Out of curiosity, how many possible endings are there?

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 4:29 am
by jb22
offthechain wrote: Wed Aug 25, 2021 1:13 am Out of curiosity, how many possible endings are there?
There's 10 possible ending images, 3 possible orgasms/denial, and the time you get is 120 seconds minus your points

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 12:41 pm
by KaZoon
Great tease, especially for your first one πŸ‘πŸ»
Would love to see more teases similar to this ☺️

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 3:47 pm
by thatsprettyhot
Haha it was exciting! You seem to have a touch for making quality, hope you make more stuff!

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 3:59 pm
by androgyme
I enjoyed it for what it was, but I think it would be much better if there was more content after the exam part. I feel like it was just getting to the good part and then it just ends.

I understand it's your first tease and all, and depending on how many results there are, it could be quite difficult to create a lot of "end" content based on that. That being said, I think it would be worth it.

Maybe to make things simpler you could group the different results together. Maybe give each collective result a code and create a follow up tease that is targetted specifically for each code. Just a few thoughts.

It was a good first tease though. I enjoyed it. :-)

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 6:09 pm
by jb22
Thanks androgyme!
androgyme wrote: Wed Aug 25, 2021 3:59 pm I think it would be much better if there was more content after the exam part. I feel like it was just getting to the good part and then it just ends.
I completely agree. I finished the survey part and got a little overwhelmed about the number of options I could put into the endings. So I tried to keep it really simple instead. I'm kind of thinking about updating it already.

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2021 3:57 am
by offthechain
Same. I though the survey was great, but it ended kinda fast. Also, I wish your answer to how often you eat your cum gave you a change to be told to eat it at the end too (assuming you don't get denied). Still, a great tease and I look forward to seeing more from you :)

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2021 9:51 pm
by Klauss2001
Honestly this is a really nice tease, a fun test you know!

Re: [FEEDBACK] beta test

Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2021 7:06 am
by medium
Huge fan of your stuff from before you made this tease, so I was incredibly excited to see this. I'm happy with it but personally I would have also liked some analysis/teasing on why I ended up on the beta level I ended up at. That might be complicated because of the branches, I've never made a tease before myself.

Still, very solid showing for the first one, and it had all of the questions I expected going in!