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Hi, super excited to play the tease. I may have run into a little bug. I waited for the edge timer to expire and the tease wouldn't procede. Here is the page it got stuck on. Hope you can fix it as i am hugely excited to do a full playthrough!

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CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Sun Sep 08, 2019 7:02 pm

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Hi, super excited to play the tease. I may have run into a little bug. I waited for the edge timer to expire and the tease wouldn't procede. Here is the page it got stuck on. Hope you can fix it as i am hugely excited to do a full playthrough! Untitled.jpg

Revuin wrote: Mon Sep 09, 2019 12:40 am Played through a couple times and I gotta say really great work! Really enjoyed the pages I've seen so far. I've been waiting to see if anyone would finally make an EOS version of a hentai lottery tease.

There are a few bugs/typos that I'll put together in a list for you later but that's understandable considering how massive this tease is.

Thank you so much for creating this!

ma4rty wrote: Sun Sep 08, 2019 1:17 am Nicely done! You can see the effort that has been put in this project! Though I think that the "Yaoi" fetish should be replaced with the "Trap" one. That whould be neat

FootlongSub wrote: Mon Sep 09, 2019 6:04 pm

CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Sun Sep 08, 2019 7:02 pm

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Hi, super excited to play the tease. I may have run into a little bug. I waited for the edge timer to expire and the tease wouldn't procede. Here is the page it got stuck on. Hope you can fix it as i am hugely excited to do a full playthrough! Untitled.jpg

I am glad you like it but unfortunately I have no idea what went wrong for you.

When I tried opening that page it worked normally! Judging from your picture it might be possible the displayed text is just off screen. Have you tried srolling down in the tease? Sometimes you need to do that for some reason.

FootlongSub wrote: Mon Sep 09, 2019 6:11 pm

ma4rty wrote: Sun Sep 08, 2019 1:17 am Nicely done! You can see the effort that has been put in this project! Though I think that the "Yaoi" fetish should be replaced with the "Trap" one. That whould be neat

Yeah I did put quite a few hours of work into this tease, but I really enjoyed it to so I don't mind! Plus if people like it thats a nice bonus aswell!

As far as the fetish is concerned wouldn't trap just be Futa in hentai terms? Because that is also an option already. Also I included Yaoi even though I am personally not into it because I wanted the tease to be inclusive of as many people as possible and give the Homo-/Bisexual people playing my tease someting to enjoy aswell!

ma4rty wrote: Tue Sep 10, 2019 11:36 pm

FootlongSub wrote: Mon Sep 09, 2019 6:11 pm

ma4rty wrote: Sun Sep 08, 2019 1:17 am Nicely done! You can see the effort that has been put in this project! Though I think that the "Yaoi" fetish should be replaced with the "Trap" one. That whould be neat

Yeah I did put quite a few hours of work into this tease, but I really enjoyed it to so I don't mind! Plus if people like it thats a nice bonus aswell!

As far as the fetish is concerned wouldn't trap just be Futa in hentai terms? Because that is also an option already. Also I included Yaoi even though I am personally not into it because I wanted the tease to be inclusive of as many people as possible and give the Homo-/Bisexual people playing my tease someting to enjoy aswell!

Futa definitely isn't considered as Trap. It is like you would compere Thighs and Feet, completely different things. Why though I said you could swap Yaoi with Trap? It is because they both consist of "only males" with condition that they look more femininely(mainly outfit) and one can be into that, but not into genuine Yaoi(that would be me for example). As for those who are into pure Yaoi I think they would still enjoy Traps. It would be a win/win situation I believe.

switch787 wrote: Fri Sep 13, 2019 11:14 am

ma4rty wrote: Tue Sep 10, 2019 11:36 pm

FootlongSub wrote: Mon Sep 09, 2019 6:11 pm

Yeah I did put quite a few hours of work into this tease, but I really enjoyed it to so I don't mind! Plus if people like it thats a nice bonus aswell!

As far as the fetish is concerned wouldn't trap just be Futa in hentai terms? Because that is also an option already. Also I included Yaoi even though I am personally not into it because I wanted the tease to be inclusive of as many people as possible and give the Homo-/Bisexual people playing my tease someting to enjoy aswell!

Futa definitely isn't considered as Trap. It is like you would compere Thighs and Feet, completely different things. Why though I said you could swap Yaoi with Trap? It is because they both consist of "only males" with condition that they look more femininely(mainly outfit) and one can be into that, but not into genuine Yaoi(that would be me for example). As for those who are into pure Yaoi I think they would still enjoy Traps. It would be a win/win situation I believe.

As someone who knows many trans people, including friends, I've only ever run into the word "trap" in reference to trans women, not "men in female clothes", so IDK what you're imagining other than futa???

As a queer person with a heavy preference for men, I would 100% not enjoy having yaoi replaced by anything. I'm incredibly happy the author took the time to add that, because inclusivity is nice. In fact, I'm a little offended someone would suggest replacing gay men with trans women. Like, regardless, why ask for the author to remove work they've already done and that you can say no to? Why not just ask for the addition of your pet category? (I'm genuinely asking. I know tone isn't always clear in text.)


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I have really loved the tease so far. My only feedback so far is that it would be nice to have an option to count us through the bunches of edges instead of just "edge 4 times". I love the ability to say no to kinks. There are certain authors on here whose teases I'd love except their pet kink is a secondary feature of their teases but it's a total turn-off to me. So I appreciate the work that had to go into making this tease work so well .

ma4rty wrote: Sat Sep 14, 2019 1:04 am
https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Trap
Literally the first definition. In hentai, or anime or whatever Japanese weeb culture "trap" always means man dressed in female clothes. Considering this is a hentai tease, one would think that they the others will use hentai "language".....

They are both dudes, but one of them wears female clothes. If you are attracted to man, there is no way that this would change it... You are attracted to man, because of the cloaths or of the body? If it is because of the cloaths then you are not really attracted to man...

I think you are just making not needed drama. That's kinda dogshit

Most of the popular Yaoi fanfic's always have "crossdress" tag in them. Like, there won't be a popular one without it. Therefore I said that if it was change(I didn't exactly say that, but that's what I had in mind) then more people would definitely appreciate that.

Just to clarify: Futa has both vagina and penis, not to mention breasts. So that's far away of the "trap" definition

Futanari? Like a strong woman with a big cock? Select this one!

Yaoi? Are you homosexual or bi, or maybe just wanna try it out? Then this is the fethish for you! Having a dildo for this would be ideal!

switch787 wrote: Sun Sep 15, 2019 5:11 am

ma4rty wrote: Sat Sep 14, 2019 1:04 am
https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Trap
Literally the first definition. In hentai, or anime or whatever Japanese weeb culture "trap" always means man dressed in female clothes. Considering this is a hentai tease, one would think that they the others will use hentai "language".....

They are both dudes, but one of them wears female clothes. If you are attracted to man, there is no way that this would change it... You are attracted to man, because of the cloaths or of the body? If it is because of the cloaths then you are not really attracted to man...

I think you are just making not needed drama. That's kinda dogshit

Most of the popular Yaoi fanfic's always have "crossdress" tag in them. Like, there won't be a popular one without it. Therefore I said that if it was change(I didn't exactly say that, but that's what I had in mind) then more people would definitely appreciate that.

Just to clarify: Futa has both vagina and penis, not to mention breasts. So that's far away of the "trap" definition

It's kinda dogshit to tell me I'm making drama when I was genuinely asking questions and sharing my experience.

As for "using hentai language", I would hope that one could enjoy a hentai webtease and participate in a discussion thereof without needing to become a regular hentai reader/watcher or an expert in that sublanguage. I would also hope that one would be able to use better sources of definitions than just urban dictionary. In this case, I'm not sure the author shares your understanding of hentai. There are explicit definitions the author gave. EG:

Futanari? Like a strong woman with a big cock? Select this one!

To me, that sounds like the porn-prototypical trans woman. Do you see how I or others might have been confused in your request as the author's definition aligns with how I had heard of 'trap' in reference to trans women? (This definition is supported in a relatively quick google search by Wiktionary where I was familiar with def. 18 but not 19, https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/trap#Noun and GLAAD (down at the bottom of the page) https://www.glaad.org/reference/transgender, and an interesting thinkpiece on Medium, where the author references reddit and porn as clearly using the word "trap" more in line with my definition than yours https://medium.com/@musketmisstress/sto ... 2622b89fa2)

Furthermore, the yaoi category was put in by the author for queer guys:

Yaoi? Are you homosexual or bi, or maybe just wanna try it out? Then this is the fethish for you! Having a dildo for this would be ideal!

That doesn't sound a lot to me like it has anything to do with crossdressing. And there are different levels to crossdressing. It can be "just clothes" but it can also be actually presenting as a different gender. And if there's a man I like who's wearing a skirt but otherwise presenting male, then that's different from if he actually presents female from time to time. I don't have a problem with either version of crossdressing (either IRL or in a webtease), but I'm much less likely to be attracted to anyone presenting female. I appreciate any section where there are male-presenting people (and that includes men with vulvas) interacting with each other because there's a lack of it in webteases.

Finally, you explicitly did not answer my question about why you would ask to replace a category instead of just add a category. Let's do a thought experiment. Say, for example, I like handcuff bondage but dislike or am indifferent to rope bondage. There's a webtease with rope bondage but no handcuff bondage. In this hypothetical, I ask the author to get rid of the rope bondage and replace it with handcuff bondage. This doesn't make sense to me, especially if I can say no to a section. Why wouldn't I just ask for handcuff bondage to be added? Why would I take away the enjoyment of those who enjoy rope bondage? Do you see where I find incongruity here?